Date: 02/27/12 10:41 pm Title: Propinquity
THIS IS SO CUTE AND SWEET AND IT DESCRIBES THE RELATIONSHIP I WISH THEY HAD PERFECTLY... well, except for the slightly awkward silences that inevitably pop up around couples like this. Plus, like in the beginning, if things don't need to be said, then when you do say something, it usually has a completely different meaning than the meaning of the actual words, which can get confusing sometimes... It's like, one person thinks the silences are comfortable, filled with meaning and love, but the other person might think it's awkward and be wondering what to do/say. 'Course, that's not Bill and Tom's relationship in this fic, but the possibility for that kind of thing happening is always present in relationships like the one outlined here. Still, awesome job ^-^ I really liked it =)
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was sweet XD And I know what you mean! Thanks very much bb <3
Date: 03/16/11 12:56 pm Title: Propinquity
I really enjoyed this. It reminds me a bit of the story that was written in a series of drabbles (I can't think of the name right thus moment). But I enjoyed it and I'm going to check out more of your writing as soon as I submit this review.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Unfortunately my only other fic in this fandom is pure smut haha- I do intend to write something vaguely intelligent at some point in the near future *shifty eyes* >~>
Date: 02/05/11 11:47 am Title: Propinquity
This is very very good, definitely one of the best one shots I've read :D
Oh and I went to check out your bio and I couldn't help but notice that you said you were a geordie...ME TOO! :) Althought I moved away a while ago.
Again, well done on writing such an awesome one-shot :D
Author's Response: OH MY GOD HI FELLOW GEORDIE XD I wish I knew some Tokio Hotel fans round here haha, no one ever knows who they are. I'm glad you liked my fic, pet <3
Date: 01/26/11 08:36 pm Title: Propinquity
This was very sweet XD I loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks very much m' dear! I'm so glad you liked it *hugs* (Lol the first time I tried to respond to this review I actually left it as a review myself. Fail XD)
Date: 01/26/11 02:44 pm Title: Propinquity
Aww, that was so sweet.... so captivating the purest, deepest nature of their love. This is something I want to write, but it feels like I never find the right words to do so. Absolutely beautiful and catching something very much relevant and obvious.
The thought of fighting like brothers and making up like lovers was genious way to put it. Absolutely adored it.
I also like this kind of disjointed style to write, which doesn't really tell a story, but captured the moments and emotions.
Wonderful work. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! It's funny that you say "The thought of fighting like brothers and making up like lovers was genious way to put it." because that line didn't actually come to me til after I'd written everything else and was struggling to wrap everything up. It just struck me and I thought it suited them perfectly! It was partially inspired by their recent video of them bickering and fighting whilst signing stuff, and finishing by laughing and looking adoringly at one another XD
Date: 01/24/11 08:13 pm Title: Propinquity
This was a wonderful story and I enjoyed every word of it. You should be very proud of it. Brava. :)
Author's Response: Oh, you're too kind! Thank you! Happy you enjoyed :3
Date: 01/24/11 01:34 pm Title: Propinquity
wow. I'm not sure if anything I say will explain how wonderful this was to read. For some reason it was bitter sweet with all the sad and guilty but happy emotions going through the entire fic. I thoroughly enjoyed this, and I love how you put that if Gustav and Georg knew and if they did or didn't approve they held their tongues.
Author's Response: I'm glad you picked up on the emotions I tried to write into it; these ideas come into my head but it's hard to put the feelings down in words. Thank you for leaving me such a lovely review, hun! <3
Date: 01/24/11 10:09 am Title: Propinquity
I love the style here. It's sort of all over the place, but then again it's not, and I adore that. :)
I simply loved how it's implied that the Gs know, and they approve, or at least can ignore it. ♥ I often think about the Gs reactions when I think about real twincest, and I like your version of it here, even though it was brief. :)
Very sweet fic, I love the little rough sex scene in the ending, and the "I love you"s ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Author's Response: I like that you like the fact it's all over the place XD I like fics like this, but I think it's because I have a short attention span haha! Thank you so much for your lovely review *hugs*
Date: 01/23/11 11:46 pm Title: Propinquity
aw, I totally love this! It's amazing, you got that mix of romance-fluff-sexyhexy-angst JUST right and it came together wonderfully. I would love to read more of this sort of stuff from you, it's awesome. :)
Author's Response: Yay! I hope to write more soon <3
Date: 01/23/11 11:11 pm Title: Propinquity
I think this was kind of poetic, pretty, and very well done. I enjoyed it.
I have seen a few similarly styled flash-scene stories here, but I don't remember the names off the top of my head, so I'm not certain of how to find them in the archive.
Author's Response: I was aiming for pretty so I'm glad I achieved it. Maybe I'll stumble across some similar fics at some point- nice to know there's some out there!
Date: 01/23/11 06:38 pm Title: Propinquity
I find it to be truly amazing, like a clear spring of sweet water to drink from... visually stunning, intense but also calm and tranquil...short, simple, but not lacking potency...brilliant.
You should write more of this, lol.-)
Author's Response: Oh, your review is far prettier and visual than anything I wrote in my fic! Such lovely imagery- 'like a clear spring of sweet water to drink from'. Thank you for such a wonderful review! I'm blushing! <3
Date: 01/23/11 03:50 pm Title: Propinquity
I think this was absolutely fantastic. I loved it. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <3
Date: 01/23/11 03:14 pm Title: Propinquity
It was nice, but too jumpy and disconnected for me. I'm not a fan of this type of ficcie, but I did so like the feelings of love and deep emotion between the twins.
Author's Response: Ah, that's okay. I think it is the sort that people love or hate; I'm the sort of person who adores drabbles and short ficlets, probably even more than long chaptered fics, but I'm in the minority I think XD I'm glad that despite it not being the type of fic you like, you could still feel the emotion I tried to put into it. Thanks for the feedback!
Date: 01/23/11 02:50 pm Title: Propinquity
Wow, it's great! Left me speachless. Simply beautiful, write more similiar stories, I'll read them for sure :D
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it- I'll hopefully get writing another fic shortly :D
Date: 01/23/11 02:06 pm Title: Propinquity
Wow! Where to begin? I really did love this. It has such a quiet, intimate feel- almost like hearing a whisper.
My favorite part? Tom asking Bill to speak English to him in bed. Brilliant! Thank you for planting the seeds of imagination. Sometimes the reader doesn't need to be hit over the head with details. (Not that details aren't nice, too...)
I really is such a treat to find a fic written in this style. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Author's Response: It's funny, you're the second person to tell me how much they like the part with Bill speaking English to Tom- and that's probably one of my less favourite parts haha! Funny how different parts strike people in different ways. Thank you so much for leaving such a wonderful review *blushes*
Date: 01/23/11 01:39 pm Title: Propinquity
This was just so adorable, absolutely beautiful.. I really wouldn't mind reading someting similar from you.. =)
Author's Response: Yay! I'll hopefully write something similar soon. Unfortunately my current story ideas are all very porny haha XD Once I've written them, or at least finished the one I've started, then I'll write another in this style :)
Date: 01/23/11 12:22 pm Title: Propinquity
Perfect. Couldn't have asked for a more perfect look into the relationship. Love.
Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a review- I'm very happy that you emjoyed it :)
Date: 01/23/11 12:15 pm Title: Propinquity
Lovely! I like the underlying feelings of the story: guilt, sadness and, above all, love. I love how you portayed Bill and Tom and also Georg and Gustav (They never pry, though, and if either of them disapproves then they have never let it show.-->Win!).
I, for one, like very much this kind of fic, so if you have other stories in mind don't esitate to post. ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad the emotions of the fic came across to you! I hopefully will write this style again at some point since so far the response to it has been very positive! <3
Date: 01/23/11 12:08 pm Title: Propinquity
I really liked this, it really caught me, seeing all these moments strung together like this. They are short but extremely well-visualized, even to the point of giving a sense of what's come before.
So many lines in this were absolutely lovely, but as for a conclusion, "They fight like brothers and make up like lovers." -- Just perfect. :3
Author's Response: You're one of my favourite writers so I feel very honoured to get such a lovely review from you! I'm very glad you liked it :)