Date: 06/02/10 03:02 pm Title: #TomKaulitzDildoPorn
haha, can you just picture Tom really sitting in his house getting annoyed at Justin Beiber? Anyway, I really feel like that, where in the fuck did the kid come from? Bad thing is I thought he was a Disney star 'til I seen the report of him bashing Disney. Now anyway, that was a cool card and I love how you incorporated popular things into your story.
Date: 06/02/10 08:10 am Title: #TomKaulitzDildoPorn
The final line was really lovely. I have to say, I loathe Twitter (and the like) for all it's worth, but even I understand just how influential it is on contemporary society. Yet still, I couldn't imagine Tom getting so worked up about it, and that really made me laugh at the absurdity. What was even more humourous was Bill's own ideas for perfect, trending topics. Though, I wouldn't want any of the such to go up, but that's another discussion. xD Justin Bieber can have his load of twitter bull, TH has succeeded in much more meaningful areas.
I think this shot could have used another proofread though dear; I was thrown off a few times (especially involving 'your' versus 'you're'), and I think there are one or two occasions where there's a change in tense? Just be sure to keep an eye out for that.
#You'vedonewellandthiswasfunny, even if twitter is the source of all evil. XD Good laugh, and great shot!