Date: 09/10/12 10:11 am Title: three
And then? What happened?!! For Te'oma love! you just can't leave it like that! Why is Bill in shock?
Jajaja I can of like your story, even if its so short, please, keep writting??
Date: 06/19/12 02:38 am Title: one
hey :) *pokes with stick* not to rush you, since that would be quite hypocritical of me, but will the book of the dead ever be able to raise this story from the dead? cuz I was really excited to see what happened next...:)
Date: 01/07/12 08:46 pm Title: one
Are you going to write further with this story or not? :$ 'Cause I'm freaking addicted at this story.
Date: 06/26/11 12:41 am Title: three
Gaaaahhhh... plz don't be haitus for too longvplz its so good
Date: 06/23/11 04:19 pm Title: three
OH MY GOSH! WHAAAT?! dude, you can't just leave it hanging there!!
This is just too good and its only the beginning *____*
Continue soon!! I'm super pumped for the next chappie! :DD
rabidkitteh~
Date: 05/10/11 08:13 am Title: three
Did it work? I can't wait to find out!
Date: 04/20/11 06:31 pm Title: three
So Bill didnt even think about how Teo'ma would adjust to his world... Well, he is in for a ride!
I love your fic, really exciting! Hope to read more soon!!!
Date: 04/20/11 01:18 pm Title: three
AGH CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *spazzes* yeesh...... :D nice chap though.... ^_^
Date: 04/20/11 02:50 am Title: three
ANOTHER CLIFFIE?!?!?!!?
please, tell us what happened next!! this is sooooooo good!!!
Date: 04/20/11 12:43 am Title: three
RAWR! lol, omg, you DON'T makemesmile, jk jk *hart* no, it made me smile but in a omfg yay...aaah no! kind of way :) cant wait to find out what happens next, but at least there was some nice thought about bill's attachment to the dead king
Date: 04/20/11 12:01 am Title: three
I LOVE IT!!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!
Date: 04/19/11 11:08 pm Title: three
PS: Oh yeah, and I was tense/worried that Bill would kiss him. I personally wouldn't have minded much, but there's no necrophilia allowed on here, heh.
Date: 04/19/11 10:28 pm Title: three
Lol, this is reminding me of The Mummy. Except I hope that when/if Te'oma comes to life, his skin will heal as well, so he won't be this walking, gross thing XD
Psh, personally I think Bill's gasping cuz it didn't work XD
Date: 04/19/11 10:12 pm Title: three
dun dun duuuuuuuun spooky..I LOVE IT!!!!!!!
Date: 04/19/11 08:47 pm Title: three
why must you torture us? D: *waits patiently for the next update*
Date: 04/19/11 08:04 pm Title: three
I love the development of Bill being in love with the pharoh...its something I've never read before which makes that much more exciting! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 04/19/11 07:33 pm Title: three
Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy did you have to leave it there? ._. -huffpouts-
Date: 04/19/11 07:29 pm Title: three
this is so amazing! i'm waiting on the edge of my seat(literally) for the next chapter. update soon!!