Date: 04/12/20 01:57 pm Title: Tom Relents
please update this
Date: 12/17/14 09:58 am Title: Tom Hears
Why!?!?! Why did you leave it at that?! Now I'm dying and people are looking at me weird because candles are sexy and I don't know what the hell is going on!!!
Date: 03/16/13 12:02 pm Title: Tom Relents
this sounds like a good story!
please update soon!!!
Date: 11/28/10 06:14 pm Title: Tom Relents
Mooooooooooooore please!!!! cant wait! i luv it so much!
Date: 10/10/10 03:07 pm Title: Tom Relents
Oh, that was sad... :(
And very realistic. Tom's words indeed were heartbreaking. I didn't expect this to take so deep twist into their relationship, but I'm glad you're doing it. Somehow there were something very realistic in this chapter and Bill's nervousness and confision was almost touchable.
And that certain sadness floating in the aur true the whole chapter.
I hope they'll get over it, because it would be too heartbreaking to see them like this.
Date: 10/10/10 05:05 am Title: Tom Relents
Where's the 'NEXT' button. Where is ittt? Your writing is fantastic and the tension is so good. And the sex scene about killed me. I need more. Please.
Date: 10/10/10 04:46 am Title: Tom Does
GOOD CHRIST THIS IS HOT. I'm not trying to be funny. This was never my kink but you make it enticing as hell. I don't know why it took me so long to read this!
Date: 10/09/10 10:40 am Title: Tom Relents
Ahhhh no, not good. Though I guess it's out in the open now. Even if they don't want to face it, they know how each other feels. They have to be able to fix this. Please? *bats eyelashes*
Date: 10/09/10 10:31 am Title: Tom Plays
GAH!! Annoying boys, talk to each other for gods sake *grrr* bounces off to the next chapter *grins*
Date: 10/09/10 10:10 am Title: Tom Does
eeep! Wow didn't expect that one, but damn it was hot *wink* Worried that Tom bolted though, that's not a good sign. *snuggles*
Date: 10/09/10 09:57 am Title: Tom Watches
oooo that went beyond Bill's imaginings. So Tom has possibly thought of Bill in that way before? Hmmm I am very interested in what happens tomorrow. *hugs*
No need to worry about your writing honey, it's very good =)
Date: 10/09/10 12:05 am Title: Tom Relents
I really hope they can fix things, it will break my heart otherwise... The last line was so perfect and beautiful, very intense! This is so well written... I have no more chapters left to read so I'm looking forward to read more of this amazing story ! :D
Date: 10/08/10 11:57 pm Title: Tom Plays
Another very sexy chapter! I like how Bill can't stop thinking about Tom even if he wants to :) You're really good at describing their emotions, it feels so real!
Author's Response: Realism is definitely what I aim for in my writing, so I'm really happy it's coming across as realistic! Thankyou~~
Date: 10/08/10 11:48 pm Title: Tom Does
Before I forgot, I just wanna say that the banner is amazing! This chapter was so hot! They should definitely talk about what happened, can't wait to read it :)
Author's Response: The banner was made by my good friend mrartichoke. =D I'm sure she'll be glad for the love for it!
Date: 10/08/10 05:54 pm Title: Tom Watches
This chapter was so hot! I'm very impress with you're writing style, it's amazing! This story is so interesting, I'm very into it !
Author's Response: *blushes* Thankyou! I'm glad you're liking it. C=
Date: 10/08/10 05:39 pm Title: Tom Hears
This is so interesting, it's the first time I've read a story about this topic so it's all new and intriguing :) I like how Tom took care of Bill, even if the situation must have been really weird for him!
Author's Response: Intriguing is a good thing! Intrigue drags people in and makes them keep reading, just like I want them to, haha. I felt kind of bad for Tom at that point, because it was just *so* awkward, but it gets better (as you probably have read).
Date: 10/08/10 04:37 pm Title: Tom Relents
Wow, that last line was very powerful. I love this story, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I'm so glad that last line came across as I wanted it to. =D Thankyou!
Date: 10/08/10 02:39 pm Title: Tom Relents
I need to leave you a better, lengthier review but this is simply SUPERB:
Author's Response: Eeeee, thank you so much! I await your lengthy review with great excitement. *____*
Date: 10/08/10 02:14 pm Title: Tom Relents
oh this is good. I really hope they can patch things up somehow.
Author's Response: I do too! =C I'm worried about them, now.
Date: 09/25/10 04:24 am Title: Tom Plays
thanks for another delicious chapter!
Author's Response: Thank *you* for reading it. ;D