Date: 06/13/09 09:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love it! Itīs really adorable =)
Is this one on schrei too, btw? I'm going to read it in Dutch too (A)
Author's Response: Yes it isss! Hij heet daar 'Als een Engel' (en is veel beter in het nederlands :p) en het was mijn inzending voor de SFC3 ronde 1 (staat nu bij de gewone SA's) en ik heb er toen nog mee gewonnen ook ;p
Date: 06/06/09 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
...Without hesitating he walked towards me and threw his arms around my neck... - aaaaaawwwww
...He placed his hand against my cheek and told me I really needed a shave... - hehe, thats kinda cute *lovesssss
...Some angels don’t need wings... - i couldnt agree more ^___^
Date: 06/05/09 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, that was so sweet. Bill really is like an angel. :)
Good job and good luck!
Date: 05/31/09 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Some angels don’t need wings"
So true!
I like how you wrote this. On the one hand one can say that Bill's good mood is contagious, but on the other hand one can notice that everyone's mood changed once Bill touched them.
I love the balance you maintained between reality and the supernatural. It's not always easy to do this, so kudos to you.
Good luck with the challenge!
Date: 05/29/09 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was cute. Beautiful, really. This definitely made me smile. Good moods and personalities are contagious, and that makes this totally believable, you're right, its not hard to picture Bill like this at all. Tom's very lucky to have such a sweet brother:D
Good luck in the challenge!
Date: 05/28/09 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww that was super-sweet.
I loved the end line.
Date: 05/28/09 03:07 am Title: Chapter 1
It was sweet. Not what I was expecting but very sweet.
Date: 05/27/09 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, the thought of Bill as an angel is adorable.
Date: 05/27/09 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww :) that was cute :) hehehe
At first I felt like hitting him, but suddenly I didn’t care anymore and I thought it was really funny. You know…”
And somehow I have to agree with you, isn't that hard to imagine Bill like this :)
Date: 05/27/09 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can totally see where you would get the idea for this. Bill does seem to have a very infectious personality, and I have no problem believing this.
I liked.
Date: 05/27/09 09:12 am Title: Chapter 1
That is beautiful :D And sometimes, I do see Bill as an angel .. Just making everyone feel better about themselves. 'Some Angels Don't Need Wings'
Date: 05/27/09 04:53 am Title: Chapter 1
This is just so utterly adorable - truly. Very cute!