Penname: Zarlina [Contact]
Real name: Sandra
Member Since: 05/01/13
Membership status: Owner
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I'm done.





Twitter: xZarlina
Favorite Band Member: Georg
Can My Stories Be Translated: No
Favorite Pairing: Tom/Georg
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Watershed by Sage       

Rated: G | Reviews - 3 | |
Summary: wa·ter·shed
NOUN
1. an area or ridge of land that separates waters flowing to different rivers, basins, or seas.
2. an event or period marking a turning point in a course of action or state of affairs
Categories: General
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Georg Listing, Gordon Trumper, Gustav Schafer, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe
Main Pairing: None
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4307 Read Count: 16
[Report This] Published: 11/21/17 Updated: 11/29/17
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 02/23/18 Title: Chapter 2: Constant Companion

I completely forgot to review this when I read it, but I'm here to say that I'm soooo curious about this and I would love an update, if you feel like writing one :)

Author's Response: Took me forever to see this, sorry. I\'ve got more chapters written and I AM still working on this, but my updates tend to be a bit erratic because of my mental health. On top of that, inspiration struck and I started and completed a whole other story in the meantime (I\'ll post that one soon). \r\n\r\nThank you for reviewing again, I\'m very grateful you did. I really need to make a habit of reviewing stories as well :S

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 11/22/17 Title: Chapter 1: Odd One Out

Interesting start. I like the way you describe things, your details are really nice, which is something I always envy in other writers because my own detailing suck, and I love the way you've made Bill so far. I really hope you'll keep working on this, and I hope you'll get more readers. It's always hard to attract people on this page without the top pairings in the story, but I really believe your writing deserves more attention.

Thank you for this, I'll be looking forward to an update!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I didn\'t post this with very high expectations (kinda figured this being Gen and not Slash would limit the readership), so your review was a nice surprise, and I appreciate you taking the time. I definitely plan to continue working on this, and I\'ll try to keep it up with the details. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story


Bill is on his way to a party when he gets lost in an unfamiliar neighborhood. Then, the sound of someone playing Christmas songs on the guitar pierces through the night...

Now with a sequel


Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Christmas, Fluff, Romance, Twincest - Not Related
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Adult Content
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4235 Read Count: 473
[Report This] Published: 01/13/18 Updated: 01/13/18
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 01/15/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's almost two in the morning and instead of sleeping I'm reading this for the sixth or seventh time. I goddamn hate you for doing this to me, but I also love you because dammit, this story is just so damn good I want to set myself on fire.

I don't even know what to say, I feel like no words are enough to give this the praise it desverves (and especially not while reviewing from my phone) but damn... I just... Can't get enough of this. I can't stop rereading. What are you doing to me???

Thank you, again. This story is... Just... Fucking everything. Thank you!

Author's Response: (Late reply is late? I already thanked you for this comment but I should do it here as well) You\'re too sweet, thank you!! I love coming back to this comment when I\'m feeling ehhhh about sitting down to write anything.

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 01/13/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Damn I love this Tom. He's cocky and weird and amazing. Love him! Can't blame Bill for rather spending the evening with him than at some lame party with asshole ex at. Good choice, Bill!

Thank you for this! I loved it!

Author's Response: <333333

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 05/23/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I still hate you. So much.

Author's Response: <3333

Stepfather by fading       

Rated: NC17 | Reviews - 111 | |
Summary: When Tom moves to live with their dad, a new stepfather moves in with Bill and their mom.

"Whenever you are behaving like I expect you to behave, I'll be good to you," he murmurs close to his

ear, his breath falling upon Bill's skin. "But when you misbehave or act out, I'll have no other choice but to punish

you however I see fit. Those are the rules from now on."

Categories: Slash
Characters: Andreas, Bill Kaulitz, Georg Listing, Gordon Trumper, Gustav Schafer, Jörg, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, BottomBill, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Suspense
Main Pairing: Gordon/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Abuse, Adult Content, Blood, Eating Disorder, Humiliation, Non-Con/Rape, Pedophilia, Sexual Content, Spanking, Violence
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45658 Read Count: 3727
[Report This] Published: 05/15/18 Updated: 07/08/19
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 09/25/18 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Actually crying right now, and that's not something I do often when reading. Cold as ice and all that. Well done, I'm so proud of Bill for finally telling the truth, and so happy he's got Tom there to support him.

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 08/16/18 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh god, I hope this will be the end of Bill's nightmare. They just can't let it pass now.

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 07/01/19 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh Jörg, it's not your fault, Bill just needs some time.

And poor sweet Bill, so scared and full of guilt. I hope that with time he'll understand it wasn't his fault, and that Tom and his dad will be there for him. Precious baby.

I'm so glad to see you back, thank you for this update!

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 05/22/18 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ugh, Gordon is so creepy. I feel so sorry for your poor Bill.

Author's Response: Yep! I tend to torture my Bill characters a lot, woops. Thank you for reading and leaving a review!

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 09/08/18 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Aww, Bill, sweetheart. Trust the doctor. He can help you.

Pansexuelle by Anika       

Rated: PG-13 | Reviews - 6 | |
Summary:

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Bill has something to tell his brother.



Categories: General
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Fluff
Main Pairing: None
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1097 Read Count: 92
[Report This] Published: 06/01/18 Updated: 06/01/18
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 06/02/18 Title: Chapter 1: Pansexuelle

Reading your earlier reply, let me tell you, I feel you so much on the writing thing. I have soooo many ideas for stories I want to write and I'm so excited about them, but I can't focus on actually getting them done. Until one day it just snaps and I can write for hours without stop. I am also very good at forcing chapters to happen, but I know that doesn't work for everyone, so I totally get you.

This story was lovely, and I hope to see more from you. Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I\'m glad I\'m not the only one who experiences this when trying to write. It helps me feel less alone, or less inept, one or the other lol. In general, forcing myself to write never works out well for me. Because for some reason, the creative part gets lost, and I end up feeling like I\'m writing a summary. I\'ve read through things I\'ve read when I\'ve pushed myself to write, and to me it reads like \"This happened...and then this happened...and then this happened...\" I don\'t know, for me I think it\'s better when my mind takes over the idea of its own volition, because then it\'s sort of like my stories write themselves. Of course, I never know when that sort of motivation will come again, and typically when it does it only lasts for a few days, or if I\'m lucky, two or three weeks. Then all I want to do is write, and it\'s all I can think about. Very annoying, and very disappointing, when it happens at work, and by the time I have time to write, that mindset is gone again. I\'m beginning to think it might be better to write stories in full before I even post the first chapter, even though I think that would take some of the fun out of it, but at least I wouldn\'t be disappointing people.

Taboo by sheerac50       

Rated: NC17 | Reviews - 71 | |
Summary: On a night out with his friends, Tom meets what he believes is the perfect guy. Sexy, beautiful, and fun to be with Bill seems to be everything Tom could wish for. There’s just one little detail about himself Bill neglects to tell him…
Categories: Slash
Characters: Andreas, Bill Kaulitz, Georg Listing, Jörg, Original Female Character, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance, Twincest - Not Related
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: Tom/OFC
Warnings: Adult Content, Sexual Content, WIP
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10761 Read Count: 915
[Report This] Published: 07/16/18 Updated: 01/30/19
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 07/16/18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was so excited when I saw your name! I've been craving some quality writing here since, idk, forever? I mean, no offense to the writers here, I'm just awfully picky and outside my small group of friends, I have a hard time finding writers whose stories I actually enjoy.

I'm so excited to see you back! I wasn't around when you were last active (I didn't find this glorious page until sometime in 2013) but I've read your past stories and it is so nice to see something new from you.

This was such a nice chapter. I so enjoy the way you write and you paint such a lovely picture with your words. It's like watching rather than writing, which is always so nice to experience. I'm so excited for more, and I can't wait to see what will happen next!

Thank you!

Author's Response: Aww thank you! I\'m so happy you enjoyed it. I started writing this waaaay back but just recently got back into writing and decided that if I start to post, it\'s more likely I\'ll finish the story than if it just sits on my laptop where no one sees it :)

iPhone (Tom) by effronterie       

Rated: NC17 | Reviews - 8 | |
Summary:



Have you ever re-read the chat history with your loved one?

TOM
Works
See you later
My alligator


Have you ever thought about the story it tells?

TOM sent a pic
GUSTAV
Gross
BILL
I didn’t want to see it
GEORG
You’ll take a photo of me sleeping once again and I’m chucking you out on the rubbish heap

And, finally, have you ever had been keeping it as a long-distance relationship?

GEORG
You here?
TOM
As you can see
GEORG
Can I call?
TOM
I hate talking with you on a mobile
GEORG
What?
Why?
TOM
Because that means you’re not here

Categories: Slash
Characters: Andreas, Bill Kaulitz, Georg Listing, Gordon Trumper, Gustav Schafer, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Romance
Main Pairing: Tom/Georg
Side Pairing: Georg/OFC, Tom/OFC
Warnings: Adult Content, Drug Use, Light Kink, Sexual Content, Voyeurism, WIP
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21684 Read Count: 106
[Report This] Published: 07/29/18 Updated: 12/25/18
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 07/29/18 Title: Chapter 1: iPhone (Tom)

I haven't had time to read it all yet (I started but I have too much to do right now to finish) but I saw your end notes and I could give betaing for you a go if you want to :) Let me know!

Author's Response: Oh I do! Will catch you on Twitter :)

The Right Ambition by Sturmfrei       

Rated: PG | Reviews - 7 | |
Summary:
when the barista is bored, a coffee shop may not be the best place to get work done



[ because you can never have too many coffee shop AUs ]

Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Fluff, Romance, Twincest - Not Related
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2633 Read Count: 123
[Report This] Published: 09/28/18 Updated: 09/28/18
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 09/28/18 Title: Chapter 1: caffeine is magic

AAAHHHH! COFFEE SHOP AU'S ARE WHAT I LIVE FOR!

The sad fate of a college town is that, in the summer, it is absolutely one of the emptiest places on Planet Earth. - goddamn tell me about it. I used to live in a town with 900 people, 500 of them were students. Summer and Christmas breaks meant the place turned into a goddamn ghost town!

YOU GAVE ME DREADS!BILL! MAFALDA!!!!! I'm crying ;___;

“That’ll be two seventy-three.” Tom winks at Bill’s confused expression and counts out the change. “I gave you the employee discount, don’t tell anyone.” - yes. This is how we treat those customers that make our days better. I fucking feel you, Tom.

He’s still only two hours into his shift. With a defeated sigh, he gives himself more cleaning to do. The inside of the oven could do with a decent scrubbing, and maybe he’ll rearrange the flavored syrups by alphabet. - hahahaha me all the damn time. The amount of cleaning I do at work... man.

ALSO MAFALDA THIS WAS PERFECT I AM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW. Dreads!Bill AND COFFEE SHOP AU???? BARISTA!TOM????????? WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME THIS IS SO UNFAIR BUT I LOVE IT OH MY GOD

Thank you so much this was perfect < 3 I loved it and I LOVE YOU < 3

Author's Response: I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT :D this is the prompt you asked for waaaay back when I sent a couple coffee shop AUs (& of course I was still late, because I suck) so I’m happy you enjoyed it!! also yes to all the cleaning. so much cleaning. happy birthday again, & love you loads!! < 3

Summary:

By the authors of "Amor Vincit Omnia" and "Dork"

When young Prince Whilliam is married off as a prize to rebel captain Tom, his life becomes worse than he had ever imagined. Tom hurts his new husband on purpose, because of his wish to take revenge on the royalty and soon the youth is bedridden.

However, the two men have once shared a beautiful bond they now do not know of. A coincidence comes to remind that to Whilliam. Fearing for the Kingdom after his passing, the young King shares his secret, hoping that Tom can revert to the kind person he has once been.

The only thing Tom wants is one more chance. The only way to get it? Risk his own life and go back in time. Will he make any difference this time? And is love stronger than hate in the end?


Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Georg Listing, Gustav Schafer, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, BottomBill, Drama, Fantasy, First Time, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense, Twincest - Not Related
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Abuse, Adult Content, Blood, Discriminatory Language, Drug Use, Humiliation, Non-Con/Rape, OOC, Sexual Content, Slavery, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16592 Read Count: 414
[Report This] Published: 11/21/18 Updated: 04/18/19
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 01/16/19 Title: Chapter 4: All I'll Ever

I'm not sure what I think about this story yet, but there is one thing you should take a look at. You switch between first person and third, and that's just... not something you should do as a writer. In this chapter you switched in the middle of it. It went from being "I should wake him" to "Tom growls." It just doesn't work. Pick one, either you write from first person or you do third, but switching between them makes an otherwise interesting story sound sloppy.

Keep writing! I'm curious to see where you will take this.

Author's Response: Hopefully you like the next one. It’s up and ready for your review ;)

Paying It Forward by Sturmfrei       

Rated: PG | Reviews - 11 | |
Summary: Past Featured Story

As a barista, Tom sees dozens of people every day.
Most of them are forgotten the moment they get their coffee.

PIF

Some, however, stick around a little longer.

Categories: General
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Georg Listing, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Drama
Main Pairing: None
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5968 Read Count: 93
[Report This] Published: 02/20/19 Updated: 02/20/19
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 02/20/19 Title: Chapter 1: Paying It Forward

That's it, I'm never writing again. This is too good, and the ending... oh the ending. I hate you so much. (with love)

Author's Response: oh no, don\'t you dare quit, I will find your house & put cats on you until you start again! (but that, as well, with love < 3)

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 02/16/20 Title: Chapter 1: Paying It Forward



Author's Response: omg <3 <3 <3

Agent Provocateur by Reginleif       

Rated: R | Reviews - 154 | |
Summary:

Agent Provocateur: a person employed to induce others to break the law so that they can be convicted.



This is Tom's job as an undercover cop. No one but his mother and his operation companions may know about his occupation.



But when his most recent mission leaves him with an abused and traumatized Bill who can't even communicate his own name, the man of the law comes to know the laws of the heart.


Categories: Slash
Characters: Andreas, Bill Kaulitz, Georg Listing, Gustav Schafer, Original Female Character, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, BottomBill, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Twincest - Not Related
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: Georg/OFC, Gustav/OFC
Warnings: Abuse, Adult Content, Blood, Discriminatory Language, Humiliation, Non-Con/Rape, Pedophilia, Sexual Content, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64509 Read Count: 4427
[Report This] Published: 03/02/19 Updated: 04/29/20
Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 04/29/20 Title: Chapter 27: All's well that ends well

I AM SO PROUD OF YOU FOR COMPLETING THIS! I know it didn't turn out as you wanted it to and I know it's been a bitch but hey, we are all growing, we get better every day, and finishing something is ALWAYS an achievement and I AM SO PROUD!

Love you so much, mama duck < 3

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 05/01/19 Title: Chapter 1: The Long Hand of the Law - Tom

I'm not a fan of first person stories, but I'm gonna give it a try, as promised.

Author's Response: Thanks for giving a shot, I hope you like the story anyway!

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed
Date: 05/01/19 Title: Chapter 3: A rose by any other name - Tom

I do have a weakness for characters calling one of the other ones "little one". Annie did it in her Christmas story and it was adorable. It's just.. such a cute nickname, somehow.

Author's Response: It is cute, isn\'t it? Thanks for reading dear!