Penname: tokitaalien [Contact]
Real name: alma
Member Since: 06/26/11
Membership status: Member
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I think I'm crazy for this I have been in this site for 6 years now I think I have read more then 70% of the stories........ I may write a story not sure yet
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The Mobster's Son by queen_of_the_unseen       

Rated: NC17 | Reviews - 42 | |
Summary:
Billa Kaulitz is the prized son of Vincent "Vinny" Kaulitz. His dad is a feared mobster but very little people know about Billa because his dad tries to keep him safe until his time to take over as head of the family. He loves his dad and he loves his life. But he always feels like something's missing. Something that just doesn't feel right. He is allowed freedom and gets to have friends with some restrictions. But has one of his father's lessons buried in his mind.
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Fear is always better than respect.

Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Georg Listing, Gustav Schafer, Original Male Character, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, First Time, High School, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Twincest - Not Related
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: Bill/OMC , Georg/Bill , Gustav/Bill , Tom/Georg
Warnings: Abuse, Adult Content, Blood, Drug Use, Gore, Humiliation, Non-Con/Rape, OOC, Torture, WIP
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27020 Read Count: 3310
[Report This] Published: 11/14/13 Updated: 04/03/14
Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 11/18/13 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Awwwww my poor baby Billy Tom u better not hurt my Billy ....awesome chappie lime.always

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I\'ll update soon.

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 11/27/13 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That was music to my ears .....yes let the games begin ....... whoo hoo........!!!!!!

Author's Response: someone\'s excited!

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 03/10/14 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wwwwwwwwwwwhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaa...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No how could you ......!!!! The missed this story like you have no idea and it was so short .......I hate you ..for now

Author's Response: I\'m so sorry it\'s short. I am on a tight schedule.

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 12/16/13 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

GOD DAMN IT .....!!!!! YOU SURE KNOW HOW TO LEAVE A GIRL HANGING ......NNNNIOOOOOOOOOO...!!!!!!! Please update soon

Author's Response: I\'ll update some time during my winter break.

In Love with a Killer by blackbutterfly65       

Rated: R | Reviews - 21 | |
Summary: There is a killer in Berlin. He kills, he tortures, and falls in love.
Categories: Slash
Characters: Andreas, Bill Kaulitz, Georg Listing, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Established Relationship, High School, Horror, Romance, Twincest - Not Related
Main Pairing: Bill/Andreas, Georg/Bill, Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: Tom/Georg , Tom/OFC , Tom/OMC
Warnings: Abuse, Adult Content, Blood, Drug Use, Gore, Heavy Kink, Major Character Death, Minor Character Death, Pedophilia, Torture, Under-Age Erotica, Violence, Voyeurism
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17464 Read Count: 749
[Report This] Published: 11/25/13 Updated: 01/20/14
Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 12/24/13 Title: Chapter 5: Strange

OMG........ dun dun duuuunnnnn.......!!!!!! this keeps getting better and better....update soon darling this is exciting

Author's Response: I will!

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 12/29/13 Title: Chapter 9: Resentment

Billy I know Tomi right now is a creep but give him a chance he loves you ......:-) is that weird routing on the murderer to get with victim ....???

Well what ever ....good chappi my love

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 12/28/13 Title: Chapter 8: I'm Tom, and I am a murderer

I will wait for you my love .....I will miss this fic but ........ I will wait ....sooooooonnnnnnn ....!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yes, soon!!!!!

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 12/23/13 Title: Chapter 4: It's over

Omg ........ Georg was an asshole ........Tomi kill him ...... XD I'm so mean

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 12/26/13 Title: Chapter 6: The mistake that led him to anger

OMG .....shit is about to go down.........update soon PLEASE

The Seesaw by Zer0       

Rated: R | Reviews - 12 | |
Summary:
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Bill and Tom wake up, both restrained to chairs, in a dark room that is unfamiliar to them. Bill cannot speak and Tom cannot see. Both cannot act when the lights are turned on and a tape begins to play.

Bill and Tom are both captured and locked up in an abandoned hotel, along with a dozen of others, by someone who goes by the name of the Seesaw, a notorious killer who is inspired to commit his crimes by the horror franchise Saw. While nothing is certain and everyone wants to get out, their only option is to play along with the killers sadistic games. When you know no one can be trusted, how much are you willing to give to get out alive?
Categories: General
Characters: Bill Kaulitz
Genre: Angst, Crossover, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Suspense
Main Pairing: None
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Blood, Cannibalism, Cross Dressing, Drug Use, Gore, Minor Character Death, Self-Harm, Torture, Violence, WIP
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6386 Read Count: 149

[Report This] Published: 12/07/13 Updated: 01/12/14
Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 01/02/14 Title: Chapter 1: Card 0 - The Fool

It would be my pleasure ....sure you could use it would be awesome if you did
I am now excited...for that one shot

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 12/30/13 Title: Chapter 2: Card 1 - The Magician

Oooooohhhhhhhh ...!!!!! Can the romantic concept be twincest PLEASE ...... I like the plot of the story but in the romantic structure you can have the twins heal each other and realize that they can't live without the other and no matter what they will forever be together and that was the reason they were chosen to test the theory out and .take them understand that

Author's Response: I\'m realllly sorrrry to disappoint, but I don\'t really plan to have a romantic concept here... Sorry :( I\'d change it, but I actually have this story all planned out... The best I can do is write at some parts so that they seem very close and dependent on each other, but you\'ll have to squint to see the actual romance...
\r\nBut I do really like how you pictured the possible romance aspect. Is it okay for me to keep it in mind for a (separate) oneshot in a similar setting?

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 01/14/14 Title: Chapter 3: Card 2 - The High Priestess

I got it.......... it's see no evil, speak no evil, hear no evil ......took me a second to catch that but I thought it was genius =D can't wait for more

My Brother, My Guardian by OfSaturn49       

Rated: PG-13 | Reviews - 20 | |
Summary: My Brother, My Guardian photo MyBrotherMyGuardian.jpg
Tom cares immensely about Bill.
He will do anything to protect his little brother from harm’s way.
What Bill fears more than anything is losing his big brother.
What happens when a near forgotten person comes back? Why is it that Tom keeps being pulled away from reality? Literally.
Will Bill’s worst fear come true?

Categories: General
Characters: Andreas, Bill Kaulitz, Bushido, David Jost, Jörg, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort, Paranormal, Suspense, Wing Fic
Main Pairing: None
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: WIP
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14425 Read Count: 663
[Report This] Published: 12/21/13 Updated: 04/03/14
Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 01/23/14 Title: Chapter 3: Sickness

Omg........!!!!!!! Duuuuuuuuuudddddeeeee this is so exciting ..... n.n update soon please ...... =D

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 03/06/14 Title: Chapter 7: Brothers

His Billa ....that's so sweet .......I Love Tomi and Billa ......:3 LOVE love except I have no clue what's going on

Author's Response: Tomi and Billa forever <3 \r\nYou are not supposed to know what is going on just yet. I\'m trying to make everyone see the relationship between Tom and Bill so that when I reveal the big mystery it will be even more exciting :3

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 03/12/14 Title: Chapter 8: A Visit From the Devil

God Damn it ....!!!! I've been ready since chapter 1 ..!!!
But I kind of figured it out......I think

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 03/01/14 Title: Chapter 6: Family

I have no clue what's going on but PLEASE update soon .........I loved this story

Author's Response: That\'s what the Suspense category is for ;) I will update soon but I won\'t be giving away the mystery just yet

Powerless by elvisfan       

Rated: NC17 | Reviews - 314 | |
Summary:
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Bill is escaping an abusive relationship. Along the way, he meets Tom.

Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Kaulitz, Bushido, David Jost, Georg Listing, Gordon Trumper, Gustav Schafer, Mateo, Natalie Franz, Original Female Character, Simone Trumper, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Twincest - Not Related
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: Bill/Jost
Warnings: Abuse, Adult Content, Non-Con/Rape, Violence
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40147 Read Count: 21372
[Report This] Published: 01/01/14 Updated: 03/08/14
Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 03/01/14 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I LOVE YOU MY SWEET DARLING BUNNY ..............=) O.M.G.......!!!!! IS IT WEIRD THAT I LOVE DAVID NOW ........FINALLY ...HAPPINESS *tears of joy*

Author's Response: *hands you tissues* i\'m a bunny? how do my ears look? and omg, you love david??? *shocked face*

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 02/25/14 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter but i still hate you .......... BTW why do i get a weird sensation that David is up to something or are you making me crazy elvisfan with all the ups and downs of the story i dont know whats going to happen next ........... you half redeemed yourself ...*slams door in face* Hmft

Author's Response: pretty sure i\'m just making you crazy

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 01/18/14 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

this story is so cute i love it so much shy Tom and shy nervous Bill .....so adorable :3

Author's Response: thanks very much!

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed
Date: 01/21/14 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OMG I LLOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVEEEEEEEDDDDDDD IIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTT.......SO CUTE OMG OMG .....YES FINALLY ....OK NOW YOPU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON BABE SERIOUSLY

Author's Response: wow! so glad you liked it. new chapter up saturday.