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Categories: Het, Slash
Characters: None
Genre: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe, Suspense, Twincest
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: None
Warnings: Adult Content, Blood, Heavy Kink, Major Character Death, Torture, Under-Age Erotica, Violence
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28199 Read Count: 17031
Date: 12/05/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Targeted
I've really enjoyed this story so far. You've got a certain way of writing so that even when the grammar isn't perfect and some word choices are weird, you keep people interested in reading more.
In the first two stories of this verse, Bill and Tom's relationship was haunting, disturbing, and beautiful. However Corrine's relationship with Jonathan has always been weird for me. Jonathan killing his father was kind of...
It's like too much effort was put into making it seem like the fractured elegance of Tom and Bill's first homicide.
I love your writing, but to me, Corrine and Jonathan are just too robotic and contrived. I don't think I'll finish this last installment.
Author's Response: Fair enough. Thank you for the kind words.
Categories: Slash
Characters: Andreas, Bill Kaulitz, Bushido, David Jost, Dunja, Georg Listing, Gordon Trumper, Gustav Schafer, Jörg, Original Female Character, Simone Trumper, Tobi, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Angst, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Mpreg, Romance, Twincest
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: Georg/OFC
Warnings: Adult Content, Heavy Kink
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50675 Read Count: 47933
Date: 05/05/10 Title: Chapter 12: Candid Camera
I really enjoyed your story. : ]
I was a little hesitant at first, because the first chapters were full of unneeded punctuation marks, such as the ever common "!!!", but the idea of a male pregnancy caused by a faulty product is very original.
I like it.
Keep writin'.
Author's Response: LOL yes. Let\'s just say I\'ve gotten a bit better than that first chapter. God, it was so long ago... /nostalgia Anyhoo, as to the \"keep writing\', I most assuredly have and will. Feel free to stop by any of my other better written fics, lol.
When Bill, Prince of the Faerie is captured by humans and commanded to heal their sick heir, he never expected to find himself forging a friendship. Prince Tom, who had slowly been dying from an incurable sickness, never expected to live.
Things never go as expected, especially in this world. When the two princes start to fall in love, they soon learn that sometimes happiness is hopeless.
Categories: Slash
Characters: Andreas, Bill Kaulitz, David Jost, Dunja, Georg Listing, Gordon Trumper, Gustav Schafer, Jörg, Simone Trumper, Tobi, Tom Kaulitz
Genre: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, First Time, Fluff, Hurt/Comfort, Mpreg, Romance, Twincest - Not Related, Wing Fic
Main Pairing: Tom/Bill
Side Pairing: Bill/Andreas
Warnings: Abuse, Adult Content, On Hiatus, Torture, Violence, WIP
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6020 Read Count: 1382
Date: 05/05/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Flashbacks and Flesh Wounds
It's very good so far.
I like it.
Especially the proper punctuation.
Keep writing.