This is so disturbing but also so insanely (no pun intended) awesome! I love how twisted you make them. And yet, even if some of the things in here I didn't agree with, I still effing loved it!

Oh I love baby Zoe and she's not even talking yet! Poor Bill needs to get over his weight issue. *laughs* I hope he gets back down to his normal size. I have a feeling Tom could care less but I also have a feeling Bill won't be fully satisfied until he's back into a size 0. Naw, just kidding. He's not that skinny. That's would be scary skinny. He's just cutesy skinny. Oh crap... I ranted. Sorry. Anyways. I really hope the next chapter comes out soon and I'm also hoping for a sequel or something? Tom and Bill and child-Zoe would make the cutest story ever. XD

This chapter was... words don't describe. It's all making a bit more sense now.

Author's Response: I\'m glad it\'s making a little more sense now. I constantly worry if my readers are getting what I\'m trying to convey. Thanks for the review!

I positively love this story. And urgh! Bill's biological parents make me so mad I feel like I could eat nails! (But that would hurt and would result in bleeding gums and probably more than on broken tooth. XD) I do hope that everything turns out alright in the end. I don't think I could stand it if Bill and Tom got seperated.

Oh, and just for the record, I can't watch the Dumbo's Baby Mine scene without crying. Haven't been able to not cry when I watched it since I was... between eight and ten. XD

Wow. This was... intense to say the least. Perhaps it's just been to long since I started reading this story, but I don't actually remember anything happening to Bill. Oh, I do sincerely hope Bill is willing to talk to Vastian soon. I don't see things ending well if that doesn't happen soon.

I love this story! I'm curious as to what language Bill and his mother were speaking to each other though. Oh well. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! So many questions to be answered! I hope Tom can cope with his mother okay. Although I know I'd be pretty against getting to know her if I were in his place. Hopefully it'll work out. Oh, and I love the ending! Right after Tony leaves and Bill asks. I laughed when I read that and "awww"ed when I read that Tom was letting him. I think Tom secretly like likes Bill even if he's not so sure of it himself. I can't wait to see where you go with this!

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I can't help but feel sorry for Bill. He does everything he can to make Tom happy and then... Tom does THAT to him? No amount of anger or injustice invokes such a vile act. And what's worse is that Bill can't "bring himself to blame" Tom. This might be mean but I really hope Tom remembers what the did and also that the guilt eats away at him. I feel Bill has repented thrice-fold and the rape was uncalled for on Tom's part.

However, I really loved this chapter and simply CAN'T WAIT for the next chapter to come out!

Poor Bill. I kinda sorta feel sorry for Tom too, just because he couldn't remember doing it but I'm still infuriated with him. And still feel the most sorry for Bill. He didn't deserve that and now he feels it is all his fault. *sighs* Tom better fix this before Bill breaks more than he already has.

I loved this chapter, despite everything, and am happily awaiting the next chapter! Hopefully it will be a little happier? Or sometime in the near future. I hate seeing Bill so broken.

A wonderful chapter! I must say, Gordon scared me very much so. I feared that he would seriously kill Tom, though I am glad he did not. My anger at Tom has ebbed ever so slightly though I still do not fully forgive him. I doubt I'll be able to until Bill forgives himself and Tom also. My heart ached so when Bill collapsed. I hope this gets resolved soon. I don't think Bill can handle much more... and it is oh so painful to read. But I guess that also means that you're a good writer so all is forgiven. I hope you can update soon! This story is like a drug to me. Go without it for too long and I start getting withdrawals. =)

This chapter was great. My favorite part being when Tom punched Kayen. Muahahahah! But yes, I' not really sure where you should go with this on a long term thing but if you're interested in an idea for the next chapter or something then... hmm... I'd say Tom would take Bill back to his place and granted Bill would be pretty shaken up. I imagine he'd be pretty dishevelled and smell because of Kayen... so I'd have something like Tom has Bill go shower and then he just kinda leaves Bill alone 'cause he thinks he needs space and then... hmm... Bill doesn't really want to be alone and so he goes to Tom for comfort. Whatever "comfort" entails would be whatever, but yeah. Kinda a crappy idea but hey, that's all I've got.