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Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/09 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 9: Pulse

Yayy thanks so much! okay, i cant wait but ill try...

Author's Response: lol, you will have too. Though i'm not sure when the next chap will be up.

Reviewer: OrangeCheezIt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/09 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 8: Not once

OMG!!! PLZ UPDATE!!!!! XD

Author's Response: Will do. I might, might not have it up this weekend end. I am very busy with my dance, and have the competitions this saturday. (wish me luck :P)

Reviewer: Moshing_Monster Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/09 03:04 am Title: Chapter 8: Not once

I hope you're not killing off Bill.

I might have to actually cry. No one likes it when Bill dies. Not even Tom.

Really good. Don't kill Bill.

Author's Response: I will not say anything. lol, you'll have to find out if i kill Bill or not in the next couple chapter. I am glad you like it. I don't when i will have the next chapter up.

Reviewer: WhiteWolfHotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/09 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 8: Not once

wwwwooww. love it lol cliff hanger update plzz i love the plott

Author's Response: I am glad you like it. :D Don't know where the plot really came from tho. lol. I had to do the cliffy. :P Oh and THX for updating on mine and baaXchick's story. :D

Reviewer: HyperActiveChick Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/09 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 8: Not once

OMG i hope Bill will be okay. (i really hope tom will save him). and i also hope you gimme some more chapters

Author's Response: Some more chapters are soon to come. :) You'll have to wait and see on news about Bill and the Fire.

Reviewer: emraud Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/09 01:13 am Title: Chapter 8: Not once

Uh-oh.. Trouble!!
Tom!! Save Bill!!
Yay, thanks for the update.^^

Author's Response: Your welcome. ^^ You'll have to wait for the next chapter to see what happens next :P

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/09 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 8: Not once

Uh oh, this can't be good a forest fire happening!

Author's Response: Forest Fires are never good. You'll have to keep watch for the next chapter to see what's going to happen.

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/09 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 8: Not once

oh god! please let Bill be okay! i hope Tom has something to do with Bill getting out of the fire... please let him get out of it not injured...

Author's Response: If might, he might not. You'll have to wait for the next chappie to find out. :P

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/09 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 8: Not once

h shit i wonder whats is happening

Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see!! :P

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/09 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 8: Not once

WHAT!?!?!?!?!
A) How could you leave it there!?
B) (worse news in the world) two, maybe three chaps left!?!?!?!? WHY!?!? I freaking LOVE this!

I actually spent all week thinking "I really just want more of Blue Jay. No other story, just Blue Jay." And you do THIS to me? *sobs*

Author's Response: Sorry *gives u hugs*. I'm not completely sure. There's something i was thinking of writing and it would probably add another 10 chaps maybe. But we'll see, i'll say during the next chapter what i've decided. But I'm glad you like it! and i had to make it a cliffy. :P

Reviewer: WhiteWolfHotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/09 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 7: Past

LLLOOOOVVVE it lol its preety awsome good job plz update

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it :D. I'll try and update later this week. :)

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/09 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 7: Past

Awww, that was kinda messed up :(


It sucks that Bill, Georg, and Gustav used to get beaten up. But doing the same to other people? *shakes head*

Nice chappie, hun!

Author's Response: You mean Tom. :P I'm glad you liked it. :D I'll try and update later this week.

Reviewer: Lrigrl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/13/09 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 7: Past

You ask: "Good? Bad? Awful?"

I say: Amazing.

Can't wait for an update!! :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it :D I'll try and update later this week. (man, i feel like i said that already. lol ) I still have to figure out what comes next. lol

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/09 02:19 am Title: Chapter 7: Past

Aw...some! I love it, and I cant wait til you post again!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it :D I'll try and update later this week. It depends if i have to much home work or not. lol

Reviewer: Moshing_Monster Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/09 12:16 am Title: Chapter 7: Past

So is that why Tom is a such a jerkface meanie head?

It was good. Thanks for updating quickly!!!!

More.

Author's Response: Yes, that is why Tom is a jerface meanie head. :P lol I'm glad you like it. :) I'll try and update later this week.

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/09 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 7: Past

Awwww poor tomi.:(

 



Author's Response: Yeah, Tomi's part wasnt all the best. But his future is looking good :P

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/09 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 7: Past

Bad? No. Awful? No. Good? No. Much better than good. I loved it. It was so great to be able to see what happened to the boys that made them how they are.

Author's Response: I am so glad you like it :D I'll try and update later this week.

Reviewer: billsxlovr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/09 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 6: Secret

**loves**
This is amazing. (:

Oh! Can I ask what songs you used? So I listen to them. xD

Update soon! [:

Author's Response: I am glad you like it :D Oh and about the songs, lol, rnI was going to put the names, i just forgot. The songs are:rn1. I'd Come for you - Nickelbackrn2. Save you - Simple Planrn3. Addicted - Saving Abelrnandrn4. Animals - Nickelaback.rnI will try and update sooner. (like later tonight :P) So keep a look out. :)

Reviewer: HyperActiveChick Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/09 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 6: Secret

Holey fuck!!!!!

Author's Response: lol, i'm taking that as you like it? :P I'll try and update sooner.

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/09 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 6: Secret

mmmm wow lol

i love it how bill talks to bluey erm tomi



Author's Response: If only Bill knew it was Tom. :P I am glad you like it :P I'll try and update sooner.

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