Date: 10/14/09 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Part 2 of 2
cute! update!
Author's Response: I'm planning to hopefully by next week. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/14/09 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Part 2 of 2
Guh I love this story. Wow, I already know that Bill is going to get pregnant again...right.
Author's Response: Maybe. Im not sure on it because they have a lot of children already. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/14/09 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Part 2 of 2
awww loved it, lots of sex and Bushido gone THANK GOD!!!!
Author's Response: There is more sex in the next chapter....trsut me. Birthday sex! Lol! Bushido is gone....for now....
Date: 10/14/09 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Part 2 of 2
Tom and Bill would make such good fathers, I'm sure of it :p
I really love this story, but I hope there won't be anymore Bushido drama *sigh*...That man is an asshole and Tom should beat him up :DD
Author's Response: One more encounter and were done with him for now. I do believe they would make good fathers! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/14/09 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Part 2 of 2
Awwww! I can feel an other baby coming! Awww! Oooh, and I like the idea of Ren and Gabi together! Awww! So sweet! Oh, I can't remember, but did they already tell Bill about her period? Oh i don't hope she'll end up pregnant already!
Author's Response: Bill and Tom knows about her period. It happened when they went to Germany for the funeral. As in pregnat...not yet. My next and final installment of this Serenity might become pregnant. I have the next 2 chapters of that written out! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/14/09 11:50 am Title: Chapter 20 - Part 2 of 2
awwww...i was a little scared at first thinking bill was going for bushido at the end but finally and to my relief he didn`t...it`s really cute when they are really happy together...well i know you that probably you are not going to update for a while....but hope it doesn`t take you too long....keep going and take care.
Author's Response: I'll update hopefully next week. I just started the next chapter so I hope i will post soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/12/09 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Part 1 of 2
Awww! I want a kid... Wanted one every since i was 13 or so... only two years since... BUt I still want a kidddd!!!!!!! THEY'RE SOOOOO SWEEET!!!!
Date: 10/09/09 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Part 1 of 2
Hi there, thanks for updating=D
I missed this story SO much, i even had to bother you to update!!
This is one of my favorite stories here in THF, i just love it so much.I love how realistic you make, you make the guys like they are, normal people with problems just like us!That's the main reason why i love this story so much!!!
So yeah thanks for updating, again!!
Awwwe Chloe seems so cute, i love how Tom takes care of her!I would die to see Tom with a baby, that'd be so cute!!LOL
Ohh i don't like that new babysitter at all, smells like trouble to me!!
oh and sorry i couldn't help you come up with ideas for this chapter but like i said before, i've been really busy=(
But don't worry, i'll put my head to work as soon as i have some time=D
And naw, i love you more sweety;)
Date: 10/09/09 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Part 1 of 2
Loved it is all I can really say. I am glad Tyler won't get his way...HOPEFULLY!
Date: 10/09/09 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Part 1 of 2
love it! update!
Date: 10/09/09 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Part 1 of 2
why is andy so upset????....and hope that tyler can`t harm any of them....well, thank you sooooo... much, but it`s always a pleasure to read your story and to review it...hope you keep going. take care.
Date: 10/09/09 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Part 1 of 2
I'm glad you had Layla join in with Jason against Tyler. Writing about children beig kidnapped or hurt can get touchy with some readers. Seeing Tyler get what's coming to him is an exciting idea and better direction that I can't wait to read about! Waiting anxiously for the next chapters. Good work!
Date: 10/09/09 10:06 am Title: Chapter 19 - Part 1 of 2
I'm honestly fearing that drama part...
But this was good :D As always !
Date: 10/09/09 07:19 am Title: Chapter 19 - Part 1 of 2
i sure hope that nothing happens with the children...i wanna punch tyler..
i love when bill and tom do it!!!;)
Date: 10/09/09 04:15 am Title: Chapter 19 - Part 1 of 2
Yay! You mentioned the Angel! :D Danke for the shout-outs! :D Once again, ahmazing job, lady. I shall look forward to future adventures with ya!
Date: 10/09/09 02:47 am Title: Chapter 19 - Part 1 of 2
Ahhhhh I am so happy your back! I think that i'm finally beginning to like Tylers brother, I'm also happy that layla finally see's Bill isn't her enemy. This chapter is Fab so far can't wait to see part 2.
Date: 09/08/09 07:41 am Title: Chapter 18
*bites nails* Ew, I hate biting nails... Oh... Sorry;D
OH MY GOD!!! That's all I can say ATM! OMG! OMG!
Date: 09/02/09 07:58 am Title: Chapter 18
Wow so much has happen in on one page lol First i love the beach part its classic its remember me of my beach here! Dead Jellyfish ¬¬! BAH! ...so let me get is right its was Tyler idea for Jason into car? and aww poor Tomi :( with Poor Tomi's Knee lol i hope his get better ^_^ be his normal slef.. Aww Bill had his baby yay my favouite part of it and Chloé is really nice name too ^^ and huh blue eyes ? whats gone on there lol and Bahh!! Tyler really want to get to Bill..0-o Through Chirs ..i think Chirs little smart to go off with Tyler! and sorry i just think of my friend tyler ^^ when tyle comes up lol
Poll : yay ^_^ ermm..well you talking about Tyler getting closer to Bill well because Tomi all hurt and cant do anything and Bills got new baby now ..and you talking about Chirs! What happen if Chirs feels little lone now his not baby of Bill's anymore kind of wonder off...out the house where tyler is..Tyler finds Chirs and talk to him and that its one more step getting closer to Bill and yeah ^_^ that my little idea for now lol Bye xx
and oo i'm sorry but i notice one little mistake on reading is you put "Yeah. Go check up on you children.” I joked" you mean Your Children
Author's Response: A long review! Yay!rnrnOk. I love the beach part also. Jason was the one that tried to "hurt" Tom. His knee will heal up fine. I like Chloe' name too. It HAD to be after a designer. Lol. As the poll....I'm going to some what use your idea of chirs running off. I just have to plan it out to make sure everything fits nicely. Thanks for the long review!
Date: 08/31/09 01:19 am Title: Chapter 18
I don't even know. Trying to kill Chris isn't going to get him anywhere, but I guess it's the next step...Although the thought makes me sick.
Author's Response: No no no. Chris isn't going to die. He's just going to being Bill to Tyler....well that's what Tyler thinks. Lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/30/09 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 18
OMFG! I am so distressed over this...! *eep* I call TSOA! (Tragic State of Affairs!) I love your story, so you'd better make an update quick!!! OMG OMG OMG! However, on an upside, reading your update may have shaken me out of my WB slump. I am, and will post later this eve! Yay! TY
As for Tyler, gawd I wish he'd leave poor Bill alone, Tom too...but alas, we wouldnt have a story, then, would we?
So now, he's going to kidnap the kiddo? What? Tell me, tell me, tell me?
Methinks that Bill and Tom should hire that gf of Tyler's as a nanny, for an easy way to get the kiddo...
Oooh! And then, once caught, cause I am certain that you can't do that to me...the kid has to come home...
Tyler should be convicted.
TSOA.
Truly.
TSOA.
Loves ya! *hugs fer mah dedication*
annnnnnd.....
*hugs fer an awesomeness fantastical story*
Author's Response: How did you know?!?!?! I was planning that! The girl was going to be hired then almost get away with doing something to Chris. Then she cracks! Tells the truth about what happened. Yeah? Thanks you for reviewing!