Date: 11/21/09 01:01 am Title: I want you to make love to me, and only to me in the dark
I love this serie!! I'm glad that end up like this.
Date: 08/22/09 10:41 pm Title: I want you to make love to me, and only to me in the dark
Love that ending. Soooo cute!
Date: 05/08/09 08:10 pm Title: I want you to make love to me, and only to me in the dark
Now that's what I call good. :D
*notices* Gavi is Gavrine, right? If she's friends with you then seh must be really cool! XD
You're a good writer, and I liked this one shot.^^
Date: 04/15/09 07:43 pm Title: I want you to make love to me, and only to me in the dark
How sweet, but aww Tomi's all alone now.
Date: 02/05/09 10:09 pm Title: I want you to make love to me, and only to me in the dark
LOL...WHY ARE WE SETTING BU ON FIRE?!
and.....WHAT IS THIS NONSENSE? “Oh, Daddy,” Bill giggled, “I love you, too.”
LMAO..daddy ;B
Author's Response: XD I love you too
Date: 01/25/09 08:28 pm Title: I want you to make love to me, and only to me in the dark
yay! a happy ending! with more threesome smut XD you really couldn't have ended this any better ;)
Author's Response: I know, right? XDD thanks
Date: 01/25/09 07:56 pm Title: I want you to make love to me, and only to me in the dark
HOLY FUCK!! Tom, Bill and Bu. = ORGASMIC!!
Author's Response: damn straight.
Date: 01/25/09 07:16 pm Title: I want you to make love to me, and only to me in the dark
Shall I try this once more?
Thank you so much, Sir! It was absolute brilliance as it always is when your name is on it. It’s thanks to you that Billshido…Kaushido…isn’t so awkward anymore. I slightly enjoyed seeing Tom as the vulnerable mess as opposed to the one in control. All of it was just a beautiful synchronization of hot and perfect.
Told you, you can’t rush perfection.
P.S. Paybacks are hell, just to let you know.
Author's Response: I'm ready for my payback, Miss Gavrine.
Date: 01/25/09 06:01 pm Title: I want you to make love to me, and only to me in the dark
Mmmmhmmm.
yes ma'am.
Author's Response: mmm, yeah.
Date: 01/25/09 04:34 pm Title: I want you to make love to me, and only to me in the dark
I'm really starting to get into Billshido.
I can't read chaptered fics, but smutty oneshots I can.
Especially is there's Tom in them.
This was wrote so well, I could imagine everything that they were doing as if they were right in front of me.
God that'd be nice.
But I loved each word of this.
And Bushido wanting Tom, since no one can resist him, and Tom taking Bill's virginity, I really, really liked that. It made me smile, and so did the small brotherly talking.
There wasn't much said between them, but there was no shyness or awkwardness between them, it was just cute.
I wasn't too happy with Tom leaving afterwards.
I'd have much preferred him to stay and cuddle a bit.
But then again, I'm a sucker for cuddling.
The sec was hot, very, very hot, and that's not something that I say a lot anymore.
Most authors fall into a monotony around here, nothing's new and exciting, and it most certainly isn't hot.
To be honest, in most fics I've taken to skipping over the sex, since it's not as good as it used to be.
Their gentle, fluffy teasing was a nice touch.
It suits the relationship that I imagine Bill and Bushido having perfectly.
And the ending, oh how I grinned.
Perfect, there isn't really another word for it.
I'd say good job or something, and I'd mean it, but I think that'd come across as patronising.
Author's Response: :DDDD Thank you so much for that.