Date: 01/26/12 04:27 pm Title: Ending
OMG I LOVE IT!! *Off to read the sequel*
Date: 09/19/10 08:35 pm Title: Ending
WORST ENDING EVER!!!!!!
Author's Response:
But its not over there is still book part 2 of the series. D:
Date: 07/27/10 12:28 am Title: Long Day
with the dark hair that could be bill in the dress.
Date: 05/20/10 06:02 pm Title: I dreamed of you and me in a candle lit room.
BAHAHAHHAHA. omg. not even kidding when i read the "CAN YOU GUESS WHO MR .F is ??? :'D"
i was like AHHHH. yes. out loud. when i realized its probs bushido xD
Author's Response:
It could have been Fler XDDDDDD
but... it was a lame question at the time now that i think about it. D:
Date: 11/18/09 07:22 pm Title: Ending
SEQUEL!!!!SEQUEL!!!!SEQUEL!!!!SEQUEL!!!!SEQUEL!!!!SEQUEL!!!!SEQUEL!!!!SEQUEL!!!!SEQUEL!!!!SEQUEL!!!!SEQUEL!!!!SEQUEL!!!!
Author's Response: there is one =D
Author's Response: there is one =D
Date: 11/01/09 06:44 pm Title: Part 1 Things are going to be different.
Mr. F is totally Bushido
Date: 08/15/09 09:34 pm Title: Ending
T_T That's sad, poor Tom and Bill :'(
I choose number 3 =)
Author's Response: Look for I have ChapterNumber one up... :D sofar... but i am so busy with another story I cant get the second down yet XD
Date: 08/09/09 10:57 pm Title: Ending
Loved it. You should do a sequal!
Choice 3 is my vote.
Author's Response: There is one. =D
Date: 08/04/09 11:20 am Title: Ending
*Gaping at screen* *mouth: open close open close open close* I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ö Oh, as for the banner xD I'll go for two ;) I do hope part two is up soon :D
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: :D Yay it was loved now the second one is up... and yeah...
Date: 08/02/09 09:46 pm Title: Ending
I like the first one, with Bill, Bushido and Tom. This was amazing and im am looking forward to the new part. Please add it soon, im totally hooked now XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response:
Why thanks for reading and reviewing.
The first chapter of it should be up soon once i get it beta'd I hope tomorrow i will get it done
Date: 07/16/09 07:10 pm Title: Ending
use #3 becuase it shows bill and Tom clearly and it show bushido like ghost that is haunting their lives.
Author's Response: thank you and that is a good reason to use it.
Date: 07/15/09 10:30 am Title: When the day comes help someone in need!
wheree?! tell mee! wheree?! *hopes*
Author's Response: Where what?
Date: 07/14/09 07:19 pm Title: Ending
Okay I am confused ...
"The next month was horrible as Bill when and got a job working at Tom's favorite store as Simone had called him a few days after he got settled in. Tom was thinking about him non stop wondering when he could see the teen again. He wanted that so much but as it has to be he never did for the next year he was left to wonder what happened."
I don't get it? Is this the end completely??
Author's Response:
NO its not the end completely there is a sequal :]
I am sorry for the confusion. ._.
Date: 07/14/09 04:15 pm Title: Ending
like the story....the ending is a little bit confussing....and i don't know why it is made R rated
Author's Response: I had plans for that but it never happened T.T forgot change the rating... I know but its not really the end there is a sequal.
Date: 07/14/09 04:05 pm Title: Ending
wait... what?!
there is a sequel right?!
I mean...there has to be
Author's Response: There is and you should pick a banner for it *hint hint, Wink*
Date: 07/14/09 03:32 pm Title: Ending
oh thank you! i was just freaking out that he was just never going to remember.
Author's Response: Really wow. well all good things for Tom must be remembered BUT it will take while for him of course XD
Date: 07/14/09 03:01 pm Title: Ending
i meant is tom ever going to remermber about bill and will the get back.
Author's Response: OHHHH, okay. Well it will happen. Just gotta wait a bit so I can get the second part up =D I will start it tonight.
Date: 07/14/09 02:36 pm Title: Ending
aww=[=[ plzplz update sooon..this cant be the ending=[
Author's Response: Its The Ending of this part of Fast Car.... there is more to come in a new story =]
Date: 07/14/09 02:17 pm Title: Ending
i don't understand the endig please explain
Author's Response: Well Um... Bill couldn't handle that Tom didn't remember him so he was going to leave and go back to his fathers house if it was empt. Simone didn't want the apartment they got to waist so she gave it to Bill. So Bill whent and now hes living there while Tom is now Alone at his parents house wondering why Bill just left the hospital room and when he would see him again. Im not good at explaining what i have writen so i hope this is good enough.
Date: 06/26/09 02:12 pm Title: I wanna push you down!
Ö I loved it!! *srry for late review btw* I hope you continue soon!!! :)
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: its alright at least you reviewed Lol I am just working on the violents evils of the chapter.