Date: 10/11/10 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 11
awwwwwwwwwww, wait! where's serenity?? she's the one who wanted them to get married! XD
Date: 10/11/10 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
holy shit! kiro pregnant would be so hot!!!!!!!!! bill would be too, but he's the main character so i dont need to point him out
Date: 10/11/10 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
aww poor tome, i feel so bad fr him. i can't believe he's not serenity's dad... i'm in shock
Date: 10/11/10 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 5.2
aww!! finally!!!!!!! i love this story so much!!
Date: 10/11/10 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
awwww, this was so cute!!
Date: 07/30/10 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 15
Aw damn it to hell!
well lets see
Date: 03/26/10 03:21 am Title: Chapter 6.2
..Tom is such a good dad...the 'I'm hungry' joke...priceless...lol
Date: 03/19/10 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 25
hey. I love your story-line, there were a whole lot of interesting tid-bits in there. So I hope you can take this as positive critism to help not hurt, but i've read the whole story and it is filled with spelling and gramatical errors, even the parts where you had a beta. A lot of them. If you have a Microsoft Word version of this you can send it to me by e-mail and i will make the corrections for you. If not, go over it again.
Author's Response: Thank you. I know that this story has a lot of mistakes. I think I have the word version still but I'm not sure. I'm not too worried about this story anymore. I just hoped I grew from all of the errors I made. But thanks a lot for telling me.
Date: 03/19/10 09:11 am Title: Chapter 10.2
Hey, doll. Cptr 10.2 : the black jacket on the model would be 'sequined'
Date: 02/17/10 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 10
OH. MY. GOSH! WHAT?! HE'S NOT THE FATHER?!
this is amazing. i dont want to stop reading. You are so good at this :)
Date: 02/14/10 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
HOLY CRAP! This is amazing. I was itching to see how Bill would meet Serenity. I think that this was the perfect/most dramatic way to do it :)
Date: 08/19/09 01:30 am Title: Chapter 10.2
YU AND KIRO!
*flails*
Date: 05/10/09 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 25
This is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!
I absolutely love this story.
:)
Date: 04/05/09 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 25
One of my absolute FAVORITE stories ever. Great job. =]
Date: 04/03/09 11:10 am Title: Chapter 16
this is an amazing story.
Date: 04/02/09 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 8
ohh soo good I have to read the reast another time because the clock is 04.03 AM
Date: 03/29/09 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 25
yeay I finally got through the whole story. great ending! well done. x
Date: 03/25/09 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 25
I'm gonna go read Family Portrait now, but I thought I'd review first. My son's name is Micah Damien, so I was so happy to see both names used in this! Also, my daughter was born 2 months early. So this was actually a very nicely written fic, and (having been through having a preemie) very acurate! Thanks for such a great read!
Author's Response: Thanks! I love the name Micah!!!! I tried very hard to make the preemie part true to form. My best friend had a preemie 4 years ago almost, and i asked her what she went through, and how he boyfriend acted when he went to visit the baby on his own. Thanks once again! ANd i hope you enjoy 'Family portrait'!rn:)
Date: 03/23/09 05:43 am Title: Chapter 11
OMG that was awesome.
The way Tom proposed was so cute.