Date: 09/25/09 10:56 am Title: Reminding Rosemary
I'm a little confused with the time setting. All the time I assume it is something like the 50's or 60's. You know, growth in factories, etc, but they have computers? How does it go together?
Still don't like that bill goes to bu so easily. *Look at the summary again* it says tom/bill right?
Author's Response: It's modern day, just a small town.
Date: 09/25/09 10:10 am Title: Clairvoyant Anise
Haha! Dunja?She's funny! I imagine her with her movements full of flourish and weird facial expressions like amateur magicians do lol!
I really like how you created this universe.All the universes you created really.All of them are so unique and believable and following their own logic and rules.Thank you so much for updating girls,that's so nice of you!I saw you updated The ties that bind too *squee*
Back to this fic. I still can't figure out wether I should consider Anis as a bad guy or not.Maybe it's misleading but the real bad guy's someone else?I remember saying maybe it was Gustav for all we knew.Stupid I know,it was just an example.
Well,for now everything is leading us to think Anis is the bad guy.Maybe I'm just analysing this too much. Poor Bill, he slept with the bad guy o_o.That's so sexy! Wait.That's not the right reaction I should have.
ABH is finished? *freaks out*
Oh no. I knew it came to its end but, when you actually say it,it seems so...Final. Well.Congrats already!That fiction deserve ten millions of awards and featuring for both your writing skills and Lena's Art.
Author's Response: :)
Date: 09/25/09 04:17 am Title: Clairvoyant Anise
yay for the updates. this is so interesting, so original. though if the major character death warning is bill or tom i will just die. keep up the great work!!
Date: 09/24/09 06:45 pm Title: Clairvoyant Anise
Once again, fantastic imagery. It was like I could feel and see and taste everything in here.
Date: 09/24/09 05:49 am Title: Clairvoyant Anise
Happy equinox for Tueday ladies, hope you both had a good one =)
Date: 08/21/09 12:55 pm Title: Reminding Rosemary
So good. So so good. :O
Date: 08/21/09 12:02 pm Title: Reminding Rosemary
O_O
Oh mystery.If that book was in Bill's family since forever.How come Anis has something similar in his?Did their ancestors met? XD
OMG.I'm sure he's really powerful.Still really hard to know if he's a villain or not.Well,everything point at his head "vilain" so...Yeah.
LOL @ Bill's vervain-induced behaviour.
What's up with the vervain?Chapter 13 was about it too.
Jealous Tom is awesome haha!Poor him though,when Bill stared at his neck and all.Bet he felt nervous lol!
Thanks for the chapters guys.The mystery's still so thick.This is thrilling!
Date: 08/21/09 01:02 am Title: Reminding Rosemary
This chapter had a nice element of humor to it.
The arch. There's something about the arch that Bill is supposed to know or find out.
Wonderful chapter. I anxiously await more.
Date: 08/12/09 07:34 pm Title: Jealous Turquoise
An arch..interesting...and it just makes me more confused than I already am :o!?!I’m so thankful that you two took the time to write such a long chapter it’s highly appreciated!
Date: 08/06/09 07:43 am Title: Jealous Turquoise
There's deffinately something about Anis that isn't quite up to par. Either he's the bad guy, or he's a good guy hunting the bad guy that's after the twins. Hmmm...
Wonderful job, as usual.
Date: 08/06/09 07:29 am Title: Binding Wormwood
Adrenaline pumping. That was some crazy stuff! I felt like I was flying along beside Bill, praying to the Goddess for just a few more minutes, a few more inches, please. Gave me chills.
Date: 08/04/09 03:52 pm Title: Jealous Turquoise
Oh guys. *sighs* I don't even know what to say to you both!
Date: 08/04/09 12:56 pm Title: Jealous Turquoise
Oh guys,thank you for updating this!
After the intense chapter 17,I was dying to know what happened next.
It's hard to figure out wether Anis is a bad guy or a good guy.He gives more of the feeling that he's the bad guy,and the one sending all those creatures and stuff.But there is no proof that he did that.For all we know,he's there to chase after whatever dark creatures are there and their equally dark masters?You guys are full of surprises so...LOL.Who knows,the bad guy might be Gustav lol.Okay,that one was far fetched.
I was worried about Tom not sensing anything for a moment,his limbs sleeping and all.Tom's feelings for Bill are so strong it's oozing out of him o_o.He cares deeply and I love his character,the way you wrote him.He wants the best for Bill ad he's stressed and feels powerless about that.The poor Tomi,he has an extra weight on his shoulder because he's the older brother.When his ears burned because he couldn't remember that they didn't have ice cream anymore,i felt so sorry he had to feel that way.And then he tries to say things cheerfully.Poor bb *pets him*
That intricate drawing Bill saw meant something important.Too bad he hadn't time to read the text.Maybe his visual memory would remember a word or something. I don't think "his reverie"when they got out of the building was because he was daydreaming sweet fluffy things.Something is on his mind.But he's going to think about it and try to figure it out himself before telling anything to Tom ne?It's about Anis after all,and Tom clearly showed from the start that he didn't like the guy.Would Bill feel "stupid" for not seeing anything about Anis,and sleeping with him?I bet he'd say sorry to Tom later.
Tom and Bill need to have their "connection" intact again.Something is disturbing it and Tom can definitely feel it.Plus whose magic was that he tasted at the back of his throat?*shudders* He was tasting that and immobile,in his own home.Whoever is behind all this intend to weaken them by separating them.I think.And Tom of course,didn't say anything to Bill yet.
OMG,this story's so captivating!I love it ^_^
Thank you guys!See you!
Date: 08/04/09 06:00 am Title: Jealous Turquoise
I wonder how can tom just watch bill going to anis again, shouldn't he be a little more jealous? Need more.
Date: 08/04/09 02:12 am Title: Jealous Turquoise
:grabby hands:
Date: 06/30/09 05:03 pm Title: Binding Wormwood
It was um...suspenseful? I think I forgot to breathe here for a moment. I'm kinda sad that Tom wasn't Bill's first, though. I'm all for Billshido, but in this case this just won't do. And I'm still wondering about that binding spell between the twins in the previous chapter. I love it that you guys have known from the start where you are going with this, but here we are poor readers, this is chapter 17 and honestly? I still don't have much of an idea about what is going on here. But I'm having good fun. So, keep up the amazingness.:)
Date: 06/24/09 11:20 pm Title: Binding Wormwood
Eeeeeep. What *is* that thing?
Date: 06/24/09 10:40 pm Title: Binding Wormwood
Woah!
What an action thriller
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Date: 06/24/09 03:27 pm Title: Binding Wormwood
Oh.My.God. That was so exciting and intense; you two do really magic with words.