Date: 09/04/12 03:45 am Title: Chapter 7
i love it nice it was very entertaining
Date: 05/05/09 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 7
this is such a good story! i totally got swept up in it. i cna't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 03/26/09 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 7
amazing story so far! keep it up! XD
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/16/09 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
I really love this story.
please update soon.
Date: 01/26/09 01:56 am Title: Chapter 1
i just started reading this today and i love it espically how funny it is =]
Author's Response: I love that you love it XD thanks for the review!
Date: 12/23/08 03:24 am Title: Chapter 5
this is so going in my favorites bin now!! love the funness. that is so not a word. XD
Author's Response: Haha, it's a word now! XD Yay, I'm glad it's favourites worthy.
Date: 12/23/08 03:21 am Title: Chapter 4
i think it's a bit odd that tom would be surprised to see bill acting like tanya - shouldn't it be the other way around?
Author's Response: Does it seem like he's surprised? That's not what I was going for, I was trying to show how alike they were in that they remind him of the other. Hmm, how can I fix that...?
Date: 10/28/08 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mary Sue is a stock character. Basically, she's pretty, popular, smart and everyone loves her. In other words, perfect. Which also means boring.
Just some advice. I love the story but you might wanna save Abigail from being too Mary-Sue ish
Author's Response: Ahh, okay. Now I get it, thanks.
Date: 10/28/08 12:11 am Title: Chapter 3
that was so cute!!! "i just had to do this" ADORABLE!!!!
can't wait for the next chap!
Date: 10/27/08 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
MARY SUE ALERT
Author's Response: Somebody wanna explain this Mary Sue? Who the hell is she?
Date: 10/27/08 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
awehhhh!! i want more !! nooooooooow, lol
Date: 10/25/08 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
yay! i hope tanya and Bill get together!! and I see what you mean about everything being explained. I understand why shes so talented now lol
Date: 10/18/08 03:27 am Title: Chapter 1
it was perfect!!! except it kinda seemed like abs was a little conceded because she did so much stuff (boxing, gymnastics, dancing) but other than that I LOVED it!!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: All will be explained in the next chapter. XD
Date: 10/15/08 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
cute cute cute!!!
this could be a really great feel-good story.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks.