Date: 08/24/11 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow amazing! Loved the plot, :) you're an amazing author
Date: 01/08/11 12:57 am Title: Chapter 4
omg!!! NO!!! i want more!
Please?(:
Date: 07/30/09 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
cute!!! i hope you update this again soon. :)
Date: 02/13/09 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
I miss this...
T.T
I hope you haven't forgotten about it...update soon...please...
T^T
Date: 02/07/09 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
aw i think this is cute! i hope you update soon!
Date: 01/09/09 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
More!!! I need more!!!
Author's Response: Soon XD!
Date: 01/09/09 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
More!!! I need more!!!
Author's Response: The next chapter will be worth the wait, I promise!
Date: 12/11/08 02:42 am Title: Chapter 4
I want more! This aggressive, dominant side of Tom is quite becoming. Very sexy.
Author's Response: lol more to come soon!
Date: 10/24/08 11:18 am Title: Chapter 4
*happyface*
Author's Response: XD
Date: 10/24/08 12:03 am Title: Chapter 4
I forget if I reviewed this chapter or not so forgive me if I did (sometimes I reread things and then post reviews...and forget which stories I reviewed, lol).
I think this is awesome and I so think I know where it's going but I can't WAIT for it to go...where...I, uh, hope it will go :D
*dances around in a circle* I like your writing. It's very fluid :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! And I guess we'll have to see if it goes where you think/want it too lol
Date: 10/23/08 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
d:)
Author's Response: lol XD
Date: 10/23/08 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
THEY KISSSSSSSED! I can ALWAYS forgive you when there's kisses :D
Author's Response: lol well it's been a while since an update but you're gonna get more than a kiss in the next chapter, so I hope I'll be forgiven again! XD
Date: 10/23/08 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
Forgive you for what? Tom punching Bill?
That was hot.
Or Bill calling Tom's mother a whore?
That was funny.
I can't imagine what I would be forgiving you for, this chapter was lovely. ^^
Author's Response: lol well hopefully you'll be as forgiving for me making everyone wait so long for the next chapter ^_^;;
Date: 10/23/08 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 4
Forgived yoooou !
loved, everything about, just soo. Love it ! :'D
Author's Response: Aww thank you!
Date: 10/23/08 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
Yayayayay!!! I wuv you lotz!! You are forgiven cuz u rocked my sox!!
Author's Response: lol well I guess that's as good a reason as any XD
Date: 10/23/08 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
Forgiven (^_^)
Author's Response: Woohoo!
Date: 10/23/08 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
You're totally forgiven. First kiss finally!!!
Author's Response: lol soon to be more firsts ^_~
Date: 10/23/08 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
YESS you're all forgiven... if you write an other chapter soon and as good as this one :D
I LOVE IT
Author's Response: Well, sorry it's been forever, but it'll be 10 times better so maybe? lol
Date: 10/23/08 10:36 am Title: Chapter 4
YES!!!
I was so close to kill Tom! Than i was close to kill Bill. But now I'm happy! :D Like like like! More soon?
Author's Response: Well, soon now, but it's taken me a while to reply, so I guess not really XD
Date: 10/23/08 08:37 am Title: Chapter 4
your forgiven
=D
but please update sooner.
i really love this.
Author's Response: Yeah... Updating will go back to regular now that life isn't kicking me in the balls constantly and I have internet access :D!