Date: 02/25/12 10:07 pm Title: Day eight-epilogue
I can so imagine Bill and Tom being this age now that I've read your story. I loved every word of it. :)
Author's Response: :) glad you liked it
Date: 10/24/09 07:38 am Title: Day eight-epilogue
I'm on a mission right now to read&review all the fics I've ever read on this site... so I didn't read this fics reacently, but a few months ago, but I really wanted to tell you that I liked this one!
The plot idea is very memorable, and it's just so good! Like, I find it so cool when the twins say they'll probs spend their whole lives together, and you actually wrote it! I also have a soft spot for futuristic stories (if done right) and I loved the advancements in society that you created and told the history of, like that fan girl comittee/council thing (forgot the abbreviation u used), or the fact that they still looked young.. yeah. I remember that I loved the plot, but I also remember that your writing could have used just a wee bit of work in order to pull me into the story and just forget I was actually reading, u know how some stories suck u in?.. Yeah, but its deff one of the stories I'll remeber. :) Nicely done.
Author's Response: thank you very much. I hope I've improved since I wrote this one. either way i'm very proud of it and I'm happy you remembered it and gave me a good review to base future works on :)
Date: 10/21/08 02:03 am Title: Day eight-epilogue
awwww. so cute ^_^ i smiled the entire way through...well except when tom cheated. i almost killed him for bill. lol.
Author's Response: that reaction doensn't surprise me really. I would have killed him too ^^
Date: 07/22/08 09:20 am Title: Day one-prologue
good. i like it and the idea
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 07/21/08 10:56 pm Title: Day one-take two
this is interesting. a different view on the future then what a lot of ppl think. its good so far
Author's Response: thank you. Is it a good view or a bad view? :-/
Date: 06/10/08 08:07 pm Title: Day eight-epilogue
Wow. Fucking amazing.
I really wanted MORE on the major fight though. I dont understand, i guess. Why did Tom have sex with some random chick? Was it really just because she looked like Bill and he was lonely? What were his thoughts behind doing that? You should write a side fic, to explain it thoroughly. XD. I would enjoy that. A lot. XD.
Aside from that, like i said before. Fucking amazing. Wow. Hot damn. This was absolutely and utterly terrific. XD.
Author's Response: I'm really happy you enjoyed it as much as you say you have
Date: 06/10/08 07:27 pm Title: Day four-take two
Oh my god, that was so fucking hot. Wow. Holy shit.
I love rape far more than anyone should. Srsly.
Author's Response: :giggle:: rape can be hot in certain conditions
Date: 06/09/08 11:34 pm Title: Day four-take one
Wow.
I dont have the time to finish right now, but let me just say.
I had NO IDEA this fic was going to be...like this. The title left much to be desired, and i really only picked this up out of absolute boredom today.
That said, holy shit. This is absolutely incredible. It makes me want to just scream from the rooftops, "REVOLUTION!!!"
I ADORE futuristic fics. Not, fantasy so much, but this. You describe it SO WELL. Wow. I feel just like Bill and Tom watching the videos about the FGO announcing their breakthrough, and shit. God. And with the world the way it is right now, with war and fighting, this is just...ahhh. I dont have the words.
You get TOP FUCKING POINTS for originality. Damn. This is just...wow.
If only. If only...
Author's Response: Okay... this review made me blush and gigle. glad you like it.rnrnP.S. i suck at titles and summaries, just so you know. all my fics are titled 1,2,3 before i post them
Date: 06/09/08 09:12 pm Title: Day eight-epilogue
awwwwwwww *cries*
IT'S OVER!!!!!
*sobs* The end made me cry....
*huggles Anchy* I loved it...
For the last time for this story...
~Rhee
Author's Response: ::hugs you:: i'm glad you liked it
Date: 06/07/08 03:05 pm Title: Day eight-epilogue
im going to miss this one...
thanks for sharing it... heartwarming story.
I certainly wish the twins would stay together that long and happy
Author's Response: And thank you for reading it.
Date: 06/07/08 08:30 am Title: Day eight-epilogue
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! ^_______^
Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely 'AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW'.rnrnI'm really glad you liked it. Thank you for letting me use you in the story.
Date: 06/07/08 06:50 am Title: Day eight-epilogue
Awww!!! That was beautiful and so sad yet such a perfect ending to such an amazing story! I will so be reading more of your work especially if it is as emotional and beautifully written as this masterpiece is. You have done something very few fanfic writers have ever been able to do, you captured the true escence of love and I think that's why this story has been so amazing from Chapter 1! I loved it and I will be reading it again for sure!
Congratulations on finishing it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for sticking with me till the end and i'm very very glad you liked my little story. It's one of the few i'm pleased with myself, actually. Hopefully my next ones will get better and better.rnrnThank you again, dear! ::hugs::
Date: 06/06/08 09:02 pm Title: Day seven-take one
I should have found this fic earlier. It's all very original. I love all the scenes between the two lovebirds.
You did a fantastic job.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for thinking so.
Date: 06/06/08 02:08 pm Title: Day seven-take one
I just read it now... WOW!
I love/loved it!
Author's Response: ;)) glad you love/loved it lol XD always nice to have a fan
Date: 06/06/08 01:25 pm Title: Day seven-take one
Aww!!! how sweet they got married!!! Man I'll be sad to see this end, I get so excited every time it's updated and I really really enjoyed every chapter! It was so beautifully written!!! Lol definitely one I'll be reading again!
Author's Response: Thank you for sticking with me till the end dear. ::hugs::
Date: 06/06/08 12:43 pm Title: Day seven-take one
OMG!!!!!! *spazzes out*
THEY'RE MARRIED!?!?!?!?!?!?!
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?!?!?!?!
~Rhee
Author's Response: :)) this made me LOL. in a good way.rnrnThey stay married i suppose. they're too old to divorce :P
Date: 06/06/08 11:57 am Title: Day six-take three
O.O THE HOUSE BIT?!?!?!
I really want to know what happens next!!!!!
Author's Response: :)) well you found out i guess
Date: 06/06/08 11:53 am Title: Day six-take two
wow, that was awesome! Sorry for taking so long to reply to your amazing story. I've been busy with finals and everything. I love this chappy though!
~Rhee
Author's Response: No problem. i too am sobbing for being kept away from my lovely stories. DAMN FINALS!
Date: 06/06/08 08:18 am Title: Day seven-take one
Wow, that was so good!
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 06/06/08 06:53 am Title: Day seven-take one
ahhh!!!! omg thats awsome!!!! i love it!! so cute!!! lol all they had to do was sign a paper *plots on how to get bill to sign the paper*....i hope its that easy in a few years!!!
thankx for the update^^ xoxoxoxo
Author's Response: ;)) no problem dear.rnrnHope your plotting will succed.