Date: 05/09/08 01:01 am Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
haha,this was pretty creative ^.^ I liked it.
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 05/03/08 11:29 pm Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
I liked it. I dont usually like top!Bill, but this one was nice. And i love the idea of Tom teaching Bill how its done. ^.-
Author's Response: aw I love top Bill, but I don't usualy write him like this. Thanks :)
Date: 05/02/08 10:48 am Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
oh...my...god...i never realized that a botttom tom would be so hot. im working on one now - cuz i got tired of all the sub-tom's being non-con. dont like that stuff much - so thank you!!!
Author's Response: oh shit *hides* that is actually how I usually write him, Bill does the raping when he's drunk and such ;p but Tom secretly loves it though. But in this one I really needed Tom to be ok with the whole idea of being fucked and I'm so glad it pleased you, thank you so much !!!
Date: 04/29/08 06:32 am Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
OMG!!
Fantastic and -HOT-
I really need a lesson right now!!!
*calls her boyfriend*
Author's Response: hahaaaaaaaaaaaa you think he'll let you play the boy ;p thanksies
Date: 04/29/08 12:36 am Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
OMG OMG OMG top!Bill and bottom!Tom just made this fic a bazillion times hotter XD and it was f*cking hot to begin with! You are too freaking awesome!
Author's Response: damn, thank you so much !!! you have no idea how much this means to me
Date: 04/28/08 07:56 pm Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
Great! Is there any more? :)
Author's Response: nope, not any more sorry :) thanks though
Date: 04/28/08 12:21 pm Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
WIIIIIII
Tom's on his baaack hahahahaaaaa
jesus i love it *____* luvluvluvluv [duh, i love everything you write ;P]
Your stories always make me speachless. Just like now.
Hmm I don't think that Tom was slutty. Nooo, in comparision with Bill he was like an angel... Bill was the one who was naughty... Lol, he was even naughtier than himself ;DDD
You know that i don't like ends T___T the last sentence screams "WRITE SEQUEL, FIRELUCY!" =D you could name it "Bill punishes Tom - 101 ways of sadism" n___n
Author's Response: *blushes and she does it badly* man girl, you like totally rule my world with your reviews, they are so nice (and perverted, but hey who am I to say anything :p) and yes I do know that you don't like ends, I don't either, that is why I will definatly consider writing a sequel to this, but at the moment I'll focus on my two new stories :) hope to read you soon love, kisses yours luce
Date: 04/28/08 04:29 am Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
I really like it. Mmm
Author's Response: glad you do :)
Date: 04/28/08 02:25 am Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
more?? please??
Author's Response: sorry, done and through :p
Date: 04/27/08 10:07 pm Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
Eeee! yay! i love Sub!Tomi. its so cute. great story! loved it. keep up the good writing!
^_^[Sagey]
Author's Response: thanksies sagey, you make me smile :) *smiles all over your review*
Date: 04/27/08 08:34 pm Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
loved it!
Author's Response: happy you did :)
Date: 04/27/08 07:09 pm Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
omfg! Hott!!!!! What an awesome ending lol.
I love the last sentence, it fitted in so perfectly.
The idea of Tom being unable to control himself adn becoming 'unmanly' by letting himself if both amusing and hot lol,
I think you wrote that perfectly.
Author's Response: thank you so much beautiful-username haha I love to write submissive Tom it's a kink of mine, I think half of my stories consists of Tom bottoming or just cave to Bill :)
Date: 04/27/08 05:53 pm Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
don't judge a book by its cover! Sweet Bill, so insecure, so chaste and inexperienced... ^^
Simply fantastic!
Author's Response: hahaaaaaa you are so right girl, cus then you'll never know the story ;)
Date: 04/27/08 05:25 pm Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
I luv bottom!Tom... *drools*
Thank you yet another time, IMHO that's precisely how the bottoming tom should be - beautiful, yet still quite a boy. And Bill is breath-taking here, too.
Wonderful )))
Author's Response: oh my Gos, thank you so much, that meant so much to me !!! I love bottoming Tom, write himlike that a lot ;)
Date: 04/27/08 04:41 pm Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
DAMN! That was so hot!
Author's Response: thank you ;p
Date: 04/27/08 04:30 pm Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
Hehe... That's sweet :D
Author's Response: happy you thought so :)
Date: 04/27/08 03:32 pm Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
o.O that was HOT!!! i have no words... i just looove it!!! this is sooo great and amazing! tom being girly uber cute!! i want more lessons yeyyy!! *kisses* XD bye
Author's Response: thank you so much, too bad you want more lessons though cus the story is done ;)
Date: 04/27/08 03:29 pm Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
yaaaayy!
oh this is one of the few submissive tom stories that I acually like
*claps hands for you*
man I really like your stories!
Author's Response: haha I love writing submissive Tom, thank you so much !!!
Date: 04/27/08 03:23 pm Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
O__O that was like the hottest thing since hot. lol
Author's Response: hahaaaaaaaaa thanksies girl :p
Date: 04/27/08 03:09 pm Title: Fourth Lesson : When in ‘her’ pants
I liked this chapter but you had quite a few spelling mistakes. You're going to want to go over this with a spellcheck.
Author's Response: fuck, I really hate it when my computer bails on me like that, I've been doing good for so long *pouts*