Date: 03/28/13 06:44 pm Title: A Rainy Day
Ah! I forgot to said - Ms Maril has right - it was so bittersweet but still so sweet in the end. Now, I can go to sleep w/ thoughts of this story, of what happend to them.
And you shouldn't worry abt story to be boring w/o dialogue - it's verry good :)
And sorry abt my poor review - I'm too tired (it's past midnight here) and English isn't my first language ;)
Date: 03/28/13 06:41 pm Title: A Rainy Day
I don't know why this story has only 68 read and 4 review. I guess summary is to blame b/c story is really good. I can feel that boy feelings, his emocions. I can smell the rain and feel the wind. You are vary good in decribe things.
This story is a little bit pathetic but in very good way. I need this to read. I need to feel Bill's feelengs. Will u let me have it on my disc? I just have to b/c this is piece of art and I wish I could write like you.
Ah, I must say that it's so goo you didn't use in this story names - onlu "boy", "love" "life" - it feel even more magical :)
Date: 11/26/12 06:09 pm Title: A Rainy Day
you have so beautiful style of writing, very dreamy. I totally adore this story!
Author's Response: wow! that is one of the best compliments ever!! :Drnthank you so very much, I am so happy that you liked it :3
Date: 11/26/12 01:10 pm Title: A Rainy Day
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so sweet ^^
Date: 11/24/12 09:37 pm Title: A Rainy Day
What a sweet and cute story! I loved it!
Author's Response: thank you so much xD
Date: 11/24/12 07:25 pm Title: A Rainy Day
Very bittersweet but sooooo romantic at the end. I really enjoyed this story. :)
Author's Response: oh my gott, thank you sooo much! :D i was a bit worried it would be too boring since there is no dialogue, but you just made me happy :D thank you :3