Date: 03/03/08 01:06 am Title: Prologue
Wow...this is so different. But I really like it. I'm a bit confused, but I'm sure you'll reveal more later. Good job!
Date: 03/03/08 12:57 am Title: Prologue
Great start! I'm loving the whole connection that Bill and Tom have going. Very interesting, please continue soon. :D
Date: 03/03/08 12:52 am Title: Prologue
Billie J(anine)ean is not my lover
Shes just a girl who claims that I am the one
But the kid is not my son
She says I am the one, but the kid is not my son
-Tom :(
Loving it
Date: 03/03/08 12:32 am Title: Prologue
Rugby! *chortle*
The idea of a rosary carrying, psychic Bill is very intriguing!
Date: 03/03/08 12:21 am Title: Prologue
Love the paranormal aspect, but then this is coming from someone who consumes vamp fics en mass, so what do you expect? Wonderful start so far, and I knew it was only a matter of time before Tom became some chic's baby daddy...
Looking forward to the next chappy, and more obsessive behavior from poor little Andreas ; )
Date: 03/02/08 11:50 pm Title: Prologue
This has that grungy private school vibe like The Chocolate War (maybe, I don't even remember what happened in the book) or Cruel Intentions. I'm way too excited about reading on. Yous better not leave me hanging for too long. D;
And Gustav as Mr. Rugby = geil.
Date: 03/02/08 11:21 pm Title: Prologue
Very interesting. Tom's predicament makes me a little sad (trying to land a job as a school janitor...), but I'm sure you two have so much in store for him and the others, and I can't wait! :D
Date: 03/02/08 11:18 pm Title: Prologue
wow nice beginning.
and they're really speaking in english now? hihihi
Date: 03/02/08 11:11 pm Title: Prologue
Wow, this is so unlike anything you guys have done before and I am beyond confused. I'll just have to see where it goes, I guess! :)
Date: 03/02/08 11:06 pm Title: Prologue
I have been waiting for something like this for a while, and I'm so glad two capable writers such as yourselves are comitted to the undertaking.
I am a huge consumer of all things fantasical and paranormal and I can't wait to see where this is taken. I see so many avenues and each are wonderful and rich in their own ways. I can't wait for the first chapter.