Date: 06/30/20 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this so much. So bittersweet.
Date: 01/03/12 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have read a lot of similar stories but I still feel the real anxiety.
I love them together..but I love more when all the world separate them and they can't fight it. because sometimes life hasn't any happy ending.
Author's Response: Thank you so much <3
Date: 10/15/11 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love it! It is sad. I would love to see Bushido's side of the story *hint hing cough cough* :D
Author's Response: Ohh maybe maybe, that's a good thought :D I'll see! Thank you, and a happy new year to you!
Date: 10/14/11 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, you did amazing! I really liked this!
Billshido is my little forbidden treat I read occasionally, so it's not so often, but now... this was perfect for it! So steamingly hot and IO think big part of it was a certain roughness in their relationship. In a twisted way the desperate needs, even Wrong Ones, make it so irresistable. The overall feeling in thisd fic was something that appealed to me greatly, because it brought to me a twisted, imperfect, raw image "behind the scenes" that we don't really see. There's something so fascinating in that dark, almost broken world. It's animalistic. Yes, definitely that.
I like the way you've been leaning on lately. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so so much! I'm glad this could full-fill your Billshido bit. I loved writing this, and maybe I liked it so much ~because it was something so different to my usual fluff, I'm glad you liked the rawness, too :D I think I'll continue to lean this way for a bit! Happy new year!
Date: 10/11/11 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really nice. I am a die hard twincester in heart so reading stories like this always break my heart a little, but it was really, really good. Apart from the obviously great "action" part, I enjoyed immensely your dialogues in this.
Author's Response: I definitely ship Tom/Bill more than any other pairing but I have a particularly soft spot for Bushido <3 I'm so glad you read this despite the heartbreak! And I'm so pleased you mentioned dialogue, I always find that tricky. Thank you so much <3!
Date: 10/11/11 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'd like to know Bushido's perspective on this, and if he thinks as Bill suspects he does or if there's something else under there. I'd be curious as to how you'd write it. Or maybe even another meeting with his thoughts? Who knows, perhaps you'll be inspired to be kinder to poor Bill *grins* Just food for thought... Excellent piece. Love it.
Author's Response: I was considering adding in some Bushido thoughts but decided against it, I just wanted the focus to be on Bill. But you're still right, it'd be nice to hear Bu's side of things. MAYBE a sequel will follow :) I don't know if I like it as a stand alone, or if I want more. Because I wanted to write something different (I usually stick to twinny fluff), but I myself hate sadder endings so then I want to continue into a sequel. Oh I don't know xD Sorry for the rant response! Thanks for reading and reviewing <3!
Date: 10/11/11 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was really good
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 10/11/11 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Who knows. Maybe one day your muse will go back to being nicer to Bill and give Bu a change of heart concerning what he wants so that Bill can get what *he* wants :P And maybe Tom will stop being an ass and accept it xD Anyways, glad my kick worked!
Author's Response: Hmmm, maybe you're right, I do love this pairing so much, I might make it better for Bill soon :) Haha maybe he will, but he's a stubborn boy xD Thank you! <3
Date: 10/11/11 03:38 am Title: Chapter 1
aw man, that was perfect. but i really want a sequel...want them together ;_; lolz, the sex was def not bad ;) i was quite enraptured.
Author's Response: I want them together, too. But the words came out differently ;__; Thank you <3!
Date: 10/11/11 03:32 am Title: Chapter 1
I wanted Anis to tighten his arms and refuse to let Bill go. *pouts* They are good together. Maybe one day they'll realise it and Bill will stay. I liked this for all that it wasn't a happy ending *cuddles*
Author's Response: I wanted that too the words came out otherwise :( Thank you, bb <3!
Date: 10/10/11 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked it. I liked how you portrayed Bill and Bushido's relationship with a past, and possibly a future. Tom's reactions and comments and thoughts on it were interesting as well. The sex was good, written realistically while still being hot. You've got a gift for writing a real story within a oneshot. Great job!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm really glad you thought so. I was a little worried about this shot but I like how it turned out, I think. Thank you so much <3!
Date: 10/10/11 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
A bit bittersweet, this. Not really mean to Bill, but not letting him be truly happy, anyway? I really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Mm, indeed it was. Thank you <3!
Date: 10/10/11 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
The sex was written beautifully! As was the rest - it did leave me feeling somber for Bill :(. So I think you achieved your goal! You did well, in my opinion!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you thought so :) poor Bill <3
Date: 10/10/11 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Unnnf!! So hot! I love some straight up X-rated Billshido fucking. It's been a long time since I've gotten to read any. Thank you so much for this!
Author's Response: You're very welcome, thank you for the kind review <3!
Date: 10/10/11 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my .. Where do I even begin? This was AMA-FUCKING-ZING! *______*
The way you've characterized the pair was pure brilliance. I loved how Bushido was not all that tough and how Bill had all those conflicting thoughts :3
Also the endning did make me tear up a bit ;___;
But it was so worth it 'cause I loooooove it!!
Author's Response: UHHH *__* THANK YOU! I'm so so happy you liked it, really! *cuddles* for the tears though ;__;
Date: 10/10/11 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was HOT... and sad... and had a creeping darkness that just lingered around the edges... I really liked that. You did wonderfully in this. VERY nice... :-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! So so happy you liked :)