Date: 11/17/13 12:17 am Title: The Unexpected
jajajaja dont cringe it was a good...way to pop your erotica cherry lol XD on to the next chapter but as i see theres no next chapter -_____________- *le sigh*
Date: 11/17/13 12:09 am Title: Now You Know
oh my oh my oh my, i hope no ones safety gets compromised though :/
Date: 11/16/13 11:47 pm Title: Realization
oh my...ris is nooo angel eh :P
Date: 11/16/13 11:37 pm Title: Crossing Paths
lol "ria" :P im continuing to read this story ihad forgotten about it..i hope you still continue...
Date: 11/12/11 01:15 pm Title: The Unexpected
You should update soon please :) I think you did an excellent job
Date: 09/22/11 01:45 am Title: The Unexpected
Daaayum, Ria and Tom sure are getting sexy in that bedroom :P Hot and Heavy. This just keeps getting better and better(:
Date: 09/19/11 05:14 pm Title: The Unexpected
feeling like a pedo XD
Author's Response: lol, I know the feeling. xP
Date: 09/15/11 07:34 pm Title: The Unexpected
You did an amazing job on this chapter. I'm sorry it made you so uncomfortable though.
Author's Response: Really? Thanks. It's alright, I think every writer goes through that, you know, not always being sure if something is good enough. Though, I know for sure, that I will defiantly not post something I'm uncomfortable with anymore. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 09/15/11 12:43 am Title: The Unexpected
by enjoy do u mean scream ew ew ew but keep reading? cuz if so that exactly wat happened
Author's Response: Lol I agree, it wasn't my best, I was 'Oh god, I am so embarrassed to even post this'. Blech! But anyways, this chapter was only for now, I'm not exactly sure if I'm going to be posting more of these anytime soon, if you ask me, I think it was a little too fast for this. Anyway, thanks for the review. ^^
Date: 09/02/11 09:36 am Title: Now You Know
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 08/08/11 01:25 am Title: Prologue
OMG! They know the truth now! I wonder what will happen now! And I wonder how Tom will feel about her now! I absolutely love this! :D
Date: 08/07/11 09:47 am Title: Now You Know
I loved it!!! I love how things from 2010 and on is so old fashion haha, it's kind of how we all think things from when our parents grow up is old fashion (: whoa! I wasn't expecting Bill and Tom to know what Inaria was so soon. But it was awesome, and I can't wait for more Tom/Inaria time lol. Please keep up your incredible writing and update real soon!!! (:
Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted to give a feel of how much the world has changed since then and what things people are now able to do. As for Tom and Bill finding out, they had to because the story is about them housing her in secrecy, so they have to know what she is; no worries, now that Inaria's problem is out of the way, I can and will focus more on their relationship. Glad you like it and thnx for the review. n.n