Date: 03/30/11 03:18 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
Bill is so bad-ass. I already love this so much
Author's Response:
Happy to hear you're enjoying this as much as I am!
Date: 03/30/11 12:44 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
A DAINTY SWEETHEART!!! Which Bill are you talking about?! That boy is.. I can't even explain. How do you break someone's fingers with a fountain pen lol.
He's just pure attitude. I'd ask him to marry me if I didn't already know he would tell me to fuck off XD
Author's Response:
He just wanted a reason to use his fountain pen. HE WILL FIND A WAY.
rnHe digs on the chicks. But marriage is a beartrap and he has good instincts towards self-preservation so... yeah, probably.
rnEITHER WAY I LOVE YOU, HOLD ME
Date: 03/30/11 12:42 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
Bill is such a fierce, hardass! To repeat an earlier sentiment (and your original title, hehe), tough as nails. I love it! He's not taking any bullshit, and he's so witty, which by turn means you're so witty--I love, love, love your wit and humor, by the way; it's so sharp and quick, and left me starry eyed and thrilled the entire time, haha!
Ohh, I wonder what Tom is getting himself into. I love their dynamic already--Tom trying to change for the better and Bill, who won't take any B.S. from anyone. I wonder if that attitude will be conducive to Tom's trying to change, or tempt him down the wrong road at some point.
As usual, I WILL BE PATIENTLY WAITING, WITH A BIG SILLY GRIN ON MY FACE. ♥
Author's Response:
JUST ACKNOWLEDGE THAT YOU'RE ATTRACTED TO ME ALREADY, GAWSH
rnI'm so glad you're having as much fun with this as I did, haha! REALLY TOO MUCH FUN. /ignores all other responsibilities i.e. eating, sleeping, bathing
rnTom is getting himself into a world of trouble. And it will be AWESOME.
Date: 03/30/11 06:00 am Title: A Force of Nature
“You go down easier than your girlfriend. Beg pardon.” absolute epicness!!! lmao. i love violent and strong bill. he doesnt need any little bitch to defend him:D
Author's Response:
/snap snap
rnSO MUCH 'YOU GO GIRL' SPIRIT! Loving it.
Date: 03/30/11 01:03 am Title: A Force of Nature
That was short, sweet and amazing. I grinned the entire time. Thank you!
Author's Response:
Grins are my business :D
rnThat's not true. Washing dishes is my business. I'm sorry. ;_;
Date: 03/29/11 09:55 pm Title: A Force of Nature
Not to review-spam your story, but I sent it through the site. Did you check junk mail, just in case? If it's really not there, I can rewrite + resend.
Author's Response:
Massive derp on my behalf, many apologies, and also a reply :D
Date: 03/29/11 09:51 pm Title: A Force of Nature
I like this Bill. He's tough, just as i believe the real Bill to be, despite the feminine appearance. An enjoyable read. Tracking and waiting for the update. Good job.
Author's Response:
Happy to have you!
Date: 03/29/11 09:27 pm Title: A Force of Nature
ASDFJKSDLAFJ I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU. ♥
I adore that you wrote Bill as a man, rather than portraying him as more of a female, like most people tend to do. (For some reason, it's assumed that because Tom dresses so toughly and Bill wears makeup, that Tom is the only man of the two of them. :| ) Bill is every bit as tough as any other guy, and I love that you wrote him like that. Pretty, punchy (no pun intended....ok, that's a lie xD), and tough as nails.
I'm so excited for the next chapter! *____*
Author's Response:
OH MY GOD I HAVE FINALLY FOUND A WOMAN TO LOVE ME, I MUST RING UP MOTHER AND TELL HER THE GOOD NEWS
rnBut no srsly, I'm so glad you enjoy all the parts I enjoyed! I really wanted to write a Bill that could stand up on his own, and give as good as he got. It's funny you mention "tough as nails" because the working title for this was just that "knallhart". RIGHTEOUS.
rnNext chapter! Tom likes girls and Bill's sort of a BIG OL' BITCH.
Date: 03/29/11 08:29 pm Title: A Force of Nature
Oh man, Bill is pretty badass. I think I'd like to see longer chapters, but I'm okay with these quick updates, too. Your writing is so clear and more or less flawless. I'm super stoked to see where this goes, and I'll let you know if you go wrong. Mostly because I want drawings of Bill's legs, I have to admit.
[By the by, I sent you that email :)]
Author's Response:
I really wanted to write a harder version of Bill, a Bill who buried his vulnerabilities deep, and also, I just like writing bitchy banter. :D
rnI'm awful about chapter length, but I think this is the last of the shorty-short chapters. WHO WEARS SHORT CHAPTERS? Not this guy. .... after this one.
rn(I didn't get it D: Nnnnnoooooooo)
Date: 03/29/11 07:45 pm Title: A Force of Nature
OMG Bill is so awesome and he has epic insults flying everywhere. Somebody get that boy under control XD
Author's Response:
NGL, I got this review while I was outside and lewled so hard I startled some children
rnSOMEBODY GET THAT BOY UNDER CONTROL
Date: 03/29/11 06:19 pm Title: A Force of Nature
I love this Bill--he is awesome. =)
Author's Response:
Bill is pretty moxious, agreed.
rnYour handle reminds me of the Janelle Monae track "Violet Stars, Happy Hunting", hahaha.
Date: 03/29/11 01:43 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
this is gonna be a hit:)
Author's Response:
I would like nothing more! PLS TELL ME YOU ARE AN ORACLE.
Date: 03/28/11 11:34 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
/breathes heavily
SPRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
omg i can almost feel bill stomping up and down this story like he owns it
Author's Response:
INORITE
rnALL FOR YOU HABIBTI
rnAlso OFC he owns it, Bill owns everything, esp. Tomnus
Date: 03/28/11 11:33 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
oh my god this is so amazink fur me
Author's Response:
Whatever Chinneas
rn/flips hair, files nails
Date: 03/28/11 11:32 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
brb sobbing
Author's Response:
/drinks your tears to preserve my youth
Date: 03/28/11 05:43 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
Ooh, I like it so far! This is a really interesting premise, Tom deciding that he wants to be who he really is, and giving up the easy life for a life of more opportunity.
I can't wait to see what happens next. =)
Author's Response:
BILL HAPPENS NEXT, SPOILERS
rn
Date: 03/28/11 01:23 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
I'm excited that you're posting something new so quickly; I definitely was disappointed yesterday when I read The Law Of Entropy and found that you had no other stories up. I'm also a sucker for high school stories, so I'm pretty excited for this one. I am definitely a fan of ambiguous, pretty-boy Bill. I do have a bone to pick, if you don't mind, but I'll shoot you an email. :)
Author's Response:
To quote Teddy Roosevelt, I AM DEEEEELIGHTED that you're interested in my writing, especially when I look at my stories and pretty much see fingerpaint smeared all over the wall. As a connoisseur of high school stories, I hope you'll tell where I go wrong and where I go right! I am fully prepared to pay you lavishly in drawings of Bill's spider legs.
rnI don't mind at all, I'm eager and curious to know your thoughts! But so long as we're picking bones, I want to be clear: dibs on the tibia.
Date: 03/28/11 01:08 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
I like it. :D
Author's Response:
/gasp
rnENRIQUE IGLESIAS IS THAT YOU GURL