Date: 05/19/11 02:20 pm Title: January, 1945 - October 8th, 1946
I have just finished reading all of Tom and Mila's ordeals and am currently wiping the remnants of tears off of my cheeks...
Boy did you make me cry!
This is just a memorable story and I bet you're so proud to have written it! You are an amazing writer and I am so glad I actually had the chance to read this work of art! Because this is a work of art. You don't spare us the bad things that have happened to them but you also give us their moments of happiness in such a way that makes me start crying and grinning like a fool, staring at my laptop's screen!
Really, congratulations! This is wonderful writing in all its beauty. It's a masterpiece, what else can I say?
Author's Response:
Naw, i hope i didn't make you didn't cry too much :) Hahah, yeah, i'm pretty proud of it n.n I just got attached :) Naw thank you, you're too sweet X) hahaha, Well as long as no one 'sees' us grinning like fools at our laptop screens, then it's all good; we can grin all we want ;)
Thanks, haha, naw you've said more kind words than enough :)
oh, i just updated the very last chapter :D
Date: 05/19/11 01:19 pm Title: January, 1945 - October 8th, 1946
OHMYGOSH. SO CUTE. *tears up* you had me SO worried! ): I thought one of them was gonna die a-a-a-and I thought they weren't gonna be together and then I was gonna cry and IM JUST SO HAPPY THEY LIVED THROUGH IT! D': so beautiful! I guess this is my second to last review on this story and I just want to tell you how much of a fantastic job you did on this entire thing. It was such an amazing, unpredictable, crazy ride you put your readers through and I'm sure I speak for all of us when I say we loved it that way. (: so once again, great job! xx
But like you said, we'll have our story soon so it'll all be good :D
Author's Response:
lol, naw did i? :O I'd never do that! lol, hahaha, me too.
oh, thank you Rissa! :) haha, nwo i;m getting teary :( lol
Yes! we will! X)
Date: 05/09/11 11:21 pm Title: July 28th, 1942 - December, 1944
GAH. FINALLY I CAN REVIEW ON MY FAVORITE STORY. :D
Oh how I wish you could publish this darling! You know I adore your work as usual and I look forward to working with you! I just read the last two chapters that I missed and I am in love all over again xoxo there is a story on here called s k i n s and it's based off of the UK/US show and you should totes check it out ;) do you watch skins? Is it even shown in Australia? irrelevent, I know haha sorry doll. [:
Oh I'm so sad to hear this story is coming to an end but I still am so deeply in love with it! If I cry on the last chapter I'm leaving you a mean review lol but not really! I'll probably just call you mean for taking me on this emotional journey haha
Anyway! I'm rambling! Just making up for lack of reviewing on my end I suppose (: okay LOVE YOU BYE! :D
xx
-Rissa
Author's Response:
YAY! RISSA'S BACK! hahah :)
lmao, you're too sweet! :D yes! i can't wait for that! hahaha.
No, i don't watch it, but i've my friends watch it and i've heard a lot about it :) I shall read the fic X) Hahah, that's ok, um, i think it's shown on foxtel O.o
lol, i have the same feeligns for it. I'm sad to not be able to wirte it anymore, but at the same time i need somehting new, so i can't wait to start out one, yay!
lmao, you'll have to wait and see if you cry ;)
haha, that's ok, i like our rambles X) <3u2 xx
Date: 05/06/11 07:49 pm Title: July 28th, 1942 - December, 1944
aww its almost over D: but at least mila and tom saw each other, i don't want it to end :/
Author's Response:
haha, yeah *tear rolls down cheek* ;)
yes, they did X) and i think if you liked that aspect of the last chapter, then you'll most likely like the one i just uploaded :)
LOL, me neither! haha
thank you for reviewing! X)
Date: 05/05/11 04:22 pm Title: July 28th, 1942 - December, 1944
I love this story.
I have fallen in love with your characterization of Tom. c:
You have raw talent, i cant wait to read more of you when this amazing story completes itself.
Author's Response:
oh really?! YAY! 'cause i wasn'y sure about how i portrayed him, but i'm really happy that you like it :)
Nawwww, you're totally making my day! hahah, thank you... haha, and i look forward to you reading them! X)
thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 05/01/11 11:33 pm Title: July 28th, 1942 - December, 1944
Love it:)
Author's Response:
:) oh yay, i'm glad you do X)
Date: 04/26/11 06:17 pm Title: July 23rd - July 28th, 1942
i think this story has taken over my life. its so good, so addicting, that i started reading chapters on my cell phone at school today! i'm totally hooked! its so great..tom and mila...oh god please don't let anything bad happen to them and keep up the fantastic writing:)
Author's Response:
lmao, omg, haha, i read chapters on my phone at school for stories i like too! lol. I understand your addiction :)
Well, thank you for your FANTASTIC support. I'm exstatic that you're enjoying it so much!
I wanna thank you for your kind reviews, they've really made my week X)
I just updated, i hope you enjoy the chap :) xx
Date: 04/26/11 01:12 am Title: July 29th - August 2nd, 1941
if this story doesn't have a happy ending...i don't know what i would do. i love this SO much and i don't want anything to happen to them, please don't let that happen D:
Author's Response:
LOL, well, i've let everyone know that it will be a happy ending, but i did say it won't come easily, so that might interfer with your wish of not wanting anything to happen to them, sorry about that :)
And i'm happy you 'love' the story! X)
Date: 04/25/11 02:51 am Title: July 17th, 1941
the first chapter is always 'bleagh'? BLEAGH? this was not bleagh at ALL. this is so good...i was instantly sucked into your story...i love it:3
Author's Response:
HAHAHAH! oh you're sweet! I think it was just the over0thinking author in me. Kinda second guessed the chapter lol, but thank you for your kind words X)
Date: 04/23/11 07:40 pm Title: July 23rd - July 28th, 1942
Oh geez It took me soo long to get on and read this chapter, Great job with this!!! D'awwww Alek is too adorable XD I like the conflict starting with Klaus. I think you could do alot with that.I feel like a lot of your choices in details (like adding in travel papers from mysterious freinds)give you a lot of options when it comes to the direction of the story while still giving readers a cohesive story line and a sense of suspence. It really keeps your mind in the story. Fantastic job. Once again you have managed to leave me wanting more :D
Author's Response:
hahah, that's ok :) Thank you!!!! haha, yeah i wa aiming for 'adorable' with him x)
Oh, well thank you for your guidence, i'll try and reveal a lot of the mysteries befroe the story ends (planning on doing that in the epilogue, mainly)
:) i'm happy you thought the chapter a success.... i just updated, and once again, i want to thank you for your in-put on the sotry X)
thank you for reading and reviewing. xx
Date: 04/18/11 06:13 pm Title: July 23rd - July 28th, 1942
One of my favorite chapters so far. Waiting paiently for the next chapter; I'm eager to see what the end of the war will bring Mila and Tom! (:
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you! Well i just updated.... hope the update wasn't too lag :)
Hahaha, while writing it i get eager to see what it will bring them too! ;)
Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 04/10/11 08:37 pm Title: July 19th, 1942 - July 22nd, 1942
TOM BETA COME BACK! or else....lol this fic is so interesting update soon!
Author's Response:
lmao, or esle what...? ;)
I'm reallllllllly happy you find the story interesting; i was a little iffy on this chap, but i just updated and i think you'll be pleasantly pleased with Tom's role in the new chap:)
Thank you so much for reviewing this chapter X) <--- means a lot to me xx
Date: 04/10/11 03:03 pm Title: July 19th, 1942 - July 22nd, 1942
By the way, I completely love you for dedicating this story to me. Seeing that honestly made my week.
Author's Response:
NAW!!! yay! I thought it was the least i could do considering you've reviewed heaps of my stories :]
Date: 04/10/11 03:00 pm Title: July 19th, 1942 - July 22nd, 1942
I agree with you on this chapter. It seemed more like a filler chapter Not a bad thing but I think you could work it into the story somehow. In my mind there should be at least one more conflict before a happy ending. I think the end of this chapter perfectly sets you up for that conflict. I think you could add something to do with Lezr's sister and her husband, that was an interesting piece to add to the story. I would really like to see where that leads. I don't want to seem like I'm trying to write this for you, I'm just trying to help you get over the wall. You are a wonderful writer and I'm sure you will figure it out.
Author's Response:
Oh gosh thank you so much!!! X) You helped me heaps! Like really, THANK YOU! XD
I absolutely agree that it was a filler chapter, at first i didn't look at it like that though, just more like a dud chapter that had killed my writing motivation... so thank you with making me realise that filler chapters aren't all bad; because i actually like the next chapter, i'm hoping you like it too, but even if you don't, that's cool, because you helped me anyway X) lol
I'll be honest, at first, when i read your idea about Lezr's and her sisiter and all, i was like " :| damn," i liked it but i had no idea how to incporporate it into the story. But after researching some more, and yada yada yada, i came up with some more ideas, and even though i'm not 'entirely' sure on how to finish the story, i think i'll manage 'fine' with keeping that whole 'one more conflict before a happy ending' view in mind. So thanks for that :)
And don't worry! lol, it didn't seem like that at all, and you did, you really did help me get over the wall... i really appreciate your honesty, others kind of say, 'it was good' and yeah. But you really helped X) so yeah, THANK YOU! (<-- haha, sorry, I've said that a lot in this response :D )
Date: 04/01/11 05:12 pm Title: July 15th, 1942
As like the rest of the chapters, you've managed to pull me back into this story. I LOVE an author who can do that :3 I can't wait to see how Mila reacts to staying in a house in Germany for a week with no Tom; and with Lezr and Jorg. Please hurry with the next one; it's too hard to stay away from this fanfiction!
Author's Response:
Naw, yay!
Oh, well i hope this chap doesn't disappoint, eeep ;)
Naw, i'm glad you're hooked X) I just updated, i really hope you enjoy it X)
thank you for takign the time to review!!!! xx
Date: 04/01/11 02:12 am Title: July 15th, 1942
Hey kidd! You're back :D I think my last review cut off again and I'm hoping this one won't. ): how were the finals? And as always, BRILLIANT chapter ^^
Author's Response:
lol, yeah, my holidays have started so i'm pretty stressless and focused now :)
naw, bummna, it happened again? I don't think this one cut off, did it?
ah, they were excrutiating ;) In some subjects i did good, and in others i did pretty shit, but oh wells, it's all water under the bridge now, can't change them so there's no use worrying about them X)
Naw, thanks. I just updated, but i have to say, i can feel the story nearing an end, i'm not entirely sure on how to end it, any ideas or preferences? O.o
Date: 03/13/11 09:47 pm Title: July 5th & July 14th, 1942
This chapter was...... Amazing!!!!
Author's Response:
:) Thanks... i wasn't sure about it, but i guess i'm always unsure when i post a chap/story lol
but i'm glad you seemed to like it so much.... your review has made my crappy day sooooo much better :D
Thankyou for reading!
I just updated x
Date: 03/13/11 03:07 pm Title: July 5th & July 14th, 1942
Okay, so I seriously just found this story today and couldn't stop reading. I had to skip lunch because I just couldn't stop reading. You've got me hooked, not too many stories do. (Well, considering I am a history nerd and this is like O: in my mind, I'm kinda waiting impatiently for the next chapter...) Please hurry up with the next update!!(:
Author's Response:
:0 oh wow, you missed lunch? lol, you're too sweet! I've got a huge smile on my face while reading your review! I'm a total history nerd too, and i'm happy you've found a story you can, connect to :)
Oh,i'm soooo sorry for the late update,I hate it when authors delay their chapter updates so this kind of makes me a hypocrite:(
but it's here now x) and updates should be on track from now on :)
I just updated, but seeingt that you're hooked on the story, tbh, i'm a bit nervous of you reading it lol, you just raised the expectation bar a little higher lol ;)
I hope you enjoy the next chap though X)
Thank you for reading and taking the time to review! :) x
Date: 03/13/11 11:42 am Title: July 17th, 1941
I love it when you update. I love how Tom adores Mila to the point he was able to resist the other girls. I love this story. So unique.
Author's Response:
Naw, thank you :)
I like your notions on the story, and i'm glad you enjoy it :)
I just updated
Thank you for reading and reviewing xx
Date: 03/13/11 10:39 am Title: July 5th & July 14th, 1942
Haha the jar lid part was sooo adorable
Author's Response: X) haha, i try and make it adorable here and there :)rnjust updatedrni'll talk to you on facebook<-- thank gosh my exams are over X)rnxx