Date: 04/26/15 05:32 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire
This is such a gorgeous piece of writing. It's tragic, it's so tragic it hurts to read but wow, your writing blew me away.
Date: 04/10/11 11:07 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire
Oh luce. Luce Luce Luce... What has happend to you? What has happened to me for that matter? Where are we? Are we ok? Are you ok? I hope so. I hope you're happy. I hope your other stories are happier than this one.
It was sad. But it was so well written, beautiful really. I realized, today actually, I'm a good analytic writer, but fiction? Not so much. You, you're stories are fine are in words. A picture may be worth a thousand words but in 2525 words you've created more beautiful pictures than most artists could hope to make in a life time.
Date: 11/20/10 09:02 am Title: Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire
I didn't understand it to much, but it was cute
Date: 11/19/10 01:57 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire
Amazing... so amazing! I truly loved your work of art here. The tiny scenmarios you built and then went back and fort and eventually looped them all together made this confusing, sad, thick with emotions and in the end - rewarding to read. I absolutely loved the way you didn't really tell much, but gave me tiny glimpses and let my mind knit the web around them. This was not only amazing to read as a fic, but built in a veryu talented way. Loopinmg like this is hard to do.
I don't how to feel after I read this. It's the numbness of seeing something innocent5 been left behind. There is a strong melancholy lingering around this - and me now.
Date: 11/19/10 03:14 am Title: Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire
my dear lady,
Its my pleasure to see u again here,with a new delicious story.
in fact miss u around here, thf is not the same without you.
take care sweetie. we ll always welcome your new babies. they are inspired n full of emotions.
Your fan always
Chris
Date: 11/15/10 11:00 am Title: Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire
Is this real? Lucy's back in THF? Oh my, how I miss your storys.
I just read A wolf's tale not too long ago and was wondering how come we don't have such fics anymore. Please write longer pieces.
Date: 11/14/10 11:35 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire
it is quit different from your usual style but at the end of the day, nothing's really changed. your writing is still as intense as ever. i'm glad that you haven't forgotten this fandom.
thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: it is quite different, and it's the first time I've tried the flashing back and forth in time thing. I don't think I'm gonna try it again any time soon, but I think it worked with this fic. Thank you so much for reviewing, it means so much to me! love
Date: 11/14/10 04:04 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire
THIS WAS SOOOOOOOOO AWESOME!
I'm speechless, my whole body is trembling with excitement. This was so well written. I know when I think a story is good, and holy shit! This was probably the best fiction I've ever read in my life. It seems really, really thought through. Oh my, I don't know what to say to make you understand how awesome this was to read.
I fell in love with your writing. Thank you for making me review like a high school girl with a fan-crush. :3
Author's Response: hihi ^^ you make me smile so bad xD gosh, I'm blushing and squealing all over the place! Thank you so so much for reviewing and making this morning a great one, everyone should have wonderful people like you to cheer them up on Monday mornings! much love, you have no idea how much this meant to me - luce
Date: 11/14/10 03:36 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire
I miss you Lucy, and your stories.
xx
Author's Response: miss you too Kat! that was the hardest thing about leaving this fandom, that I lost touch with all you guys <3
Date: 11/14/10 03:28 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire
*snuggles* I've missed you Lucy! This was amazingly written. Those other fandoms are lucky to have you! *loves*
Author's Response: I've missed you, too, and I am so so so so so sorry that I haven't been reviewing The Tenant, I feel so bad about that -.- I don't have any exams this term though, so when I'm done with my essays, I'll have more time! love you
Date: 11/14/10 02:41 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire
That was... interesting. Like, I don't have enough words for this.
Usually I don't read little twins, I prefer them at their present ages, but that was way differentthan most little twin fictions.
Andreas' character was something, and I'm assuming the Non con/Rape warning takes place in the forest. That scene was just wow, earlier Bill is asking Tom to kiss him.. and then Andreas.. agh.
The last part, last few paragraph, my heart STOPPED. I don't even know. I picture them on some tower and Andreas falling off and... dying? God, I just.. woke up. xD But this was a brilliant story, THF has been lacking these kind of tragic stories.
I need to read this a second time, to let it fully register. The fic was truly lovely, and intense.
Amazing.
Author's Response: you made me so damn happy with this review, thank you so much! the non con/rape took place in the forest, yes, and there was implied that it had happened to Andreas before as well. I was really nervous about that scene, because they were all so young in this fic, so I didn't want to make it about the sexual touching, but about how it was used as a weapon, you know? And about how even though they were too young to fully understand, they still did some damage. And yes, Andreas did die in the end, it was his funeral they attended in the first scene. Thank you again for reviewing, it means a lot to me that you'd take the time to think about the fic and have questions and thoughts on it and then share them with me! much love
Date: 11/14/10 02:23 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire
Lucy, I've told you before but you know that doesn't stop me from telling you again: your writing has improved so much and the feeling and language in this story absolutely blows me away. The story is disturbing and heartbreaking and I'm so glad you wrote it. ♥
Author's Response: I get this warm and giddy feeling inside every time I see your screen name, I think you just have that effect on people, you make me happy! thank you so much for being who you are <3
Date: 11/14/10 02:11 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire
You have no idea how happy it made me to see a new fic from you! This story was brilliant, so intense and powerful. Your twins in this are just how I love them, so protective of each other. It was very sad but at the same time, very beautiful. I really enjoyed reading this, thank you for sharing this story with us and I'm looking forward to read more from you :)
Author's Response: hihi, posting again made me happy, too ^^ and I think you're right, protective really does describe their relationship in this fic really well! everything they did, they did to protect each other. Thank you so, so much for reviewing, made me smile ^^
Date: 11/14/10 01:45 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire
I don't know who I feel the sorriest for, the twins or Andi. Poor disturbed Andi, who was obviously abused, but then the way he abused Tom and would have abused Bill had he gotten the chance... The twins were only trying to protect each other. I don't think Bill meant to kill Andreas, but he did want to avenge his brother.
Author's Response: so glad the point about Andy also being a victim in his own way got through, though that gives him no right to inflict pain upon others! you understood that last bit perfectly, that was exactly what I was going for, the duality of why Bill pushed him, and the slight possibility that it wasn't an accident. Thank you so much for reviewing, means a lot!