Date: 07/12/11 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
The ending leaves a lot to the imagination so it's just the right amount of tease. Whew..! *fans self*
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
Date: 03/13/11 03:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Uh... yes.. well... No not vague at all *fans self*
Author's Response: lol I didn't think so, either. xD Glad you liked it! :D
Date: 01/20/11 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was very joyful xD
Author's Response: You know, I've never heard before that a story of mine was joyful. I kinda love that. Thank you! :D
Date: 12/03/10 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG! You can continue, though.
Author's Response: Heh, maybe someday. xD Thanks for reading! :)
Date: 10/03/10 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, but this was lovely!
It was soooo perfect, just as it was. I liked the speed of this one-shot, it was really dynamic and fast, but not rushed. You captured Billīs frenzy really well.
Author's Response: Oh, wonderful! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
Date: 06/17/10 12:54 am Title: Chapter 1
YES too vague. Se-QUEL! Se-QUEL! *tosses pompoms*
Author's Response: LOL I'm not ruling anything out. Glad you liked it! Thank you. :D
Date: 05/18/10 07:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh my word, you totally killed me o__O that was just too hot! Amazingly written, of course ^___^ No I don't think the ending was to vague, I liked it like, kinda keeps it open, kinda xD I loved it!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. ;)
Date: 05/11/10 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story is so awesome. keep up the good work! XD
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 05/11/10 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow...so hot...i loved it!
no imo it wasnt vague at all
sequel or write more please
Author's Response: Wonderful! I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you! :D
Date: 05/03/10 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
THIS is why I love you. So fucking hot. I vote for a sequel! Although, I like where my mind took this, too. ;)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! We may see a sequel yet, we'll see what happens. I'm so happy you enjoyed it, though. Thank you for telling me! :D
Date: 05/03/10 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
No it wasn't too vague we got it don't worry. Naughty Bill and naughter Tomi for watching.
Author's Response: LOL I thought you might. ;) Someone told me I should be more explicit at the end but I liked it that way, so thought I'd ask. And man, I love naughty twins. :D
Date: 05/03/10 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg, I understand Bill totally! I couldn’t resist Tom either, you describe his sexiness so well! Really hot story, I’m always happy to see something new from you cause it’s always so good ! Will you write a sequel for this? I would love to read more !
Author's Response: Aw thank you! Very kind words and I appreciate them. I may write a sequel, we'll have to see. ♥
Date: 05/03/10 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think... the endling left room to a sequal. I wish I could have seen some twin action, but honestly, it doesn't matter, because somehow I enjoy very much of masturbation scenes. Twins need to have more self love! :)
I liked, hot. Bill has a good taste. I would have done the same :D
Author's Response: I tried to throw some twin action in the masturbation bit, even though it was just imaginary. I hope that came through okay. And I don't know; we may see a sequel yet. ;) I'm really happy you liked this and I thank you for the feedback! :D
Date: 05/03/10 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
O.O ending was waaay too vague lol
Author's Response: You know, I thought it might be. ;p
Date: 05/03/10 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
The ending wasn't too vague to me--I have a pretty clear picture of what happened next. ;)
But wow, this was hot. I loved seeing Tom through Bill's appreciative eyes, because we all know that boy has a fine body. *__* And then Bill's little time to himself was so intense and sexy and yummy too. To me it's hard to write masturbation fic without making it seem repetitive, but this felt really original and vivid--I loved it!
Author's Response: Heh, well I thought it might be pretty clear, but someone told me otherwise, so. ;) I'm just tickled that you liked this, because as you said, it's hard to write it without becoming repetitive, and I wasn't sure that it wasn't, tbh! Your feedback is wonderful and I very much appreciate it. Thank you so much! ♥
Date: 05/03/10 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lovely written sexy smut!
Love it! :]
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 05/03/10 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Not vague, but cruel! How can you stop just when the best part was about to start? lol. I absolutely loved it. I love how just looking at Tom made him go crazy. I bet Tom's just the same ;)
Author's Response: Aw, I don't know; Bill was thinking that was the best he was going to get. But you know, somehow I don't think so. ;) I'm so glad you liked it, honey. Thank you! ♥
Date: 05/03/10 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1
You got to continue this. No, you MUST!
So damn hot that is.
Author's Response: Haha! Maybe I will. Thank you! :D
Date: 05/03/10 11:21 am Title: Chapter 1
not too vague. Just enough to make my mind turn to mush
Author's Response: Aw yay! lol I mean, thank you, of course! ♥
Date: 05/03/10 10:38 am Title: Chapter 1
more please :D !!!!!
Author's Response: Maybe so! :D