Date: 05/09/12 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, so beautiful. As always, coming from you. Your stories are always a fantastical fairytale and such a joy to read. This one is no exception. It just swept me away to another time and place. Completely magical and so sweet. I love your writing, there's nothing like it. You have a gift with words and you create a new world in every fic, with great atmosphere and depth. I love the effortless way your twins love eachother in this fic. My fav is when Tom asks, "Tell me, then, when will we be married?" and Bill replies, "I'd thought we already were."
It's so beautiful. Love love love this fic. I don't know how I havnt read it before. Well done!!! :)
Date: 12/19/11 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Just so lovely and full of love and full of trust and sweetness. The love making was remarkably sexy for being so briefly drawn, oh, that Bill, and that TOM! I just loved it.
Date: 12/30/10 12:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, dear, this was so cute!! And fluffy and pink :) just like the cakes xD
It actually makes sence; It didn't take me much to picture them baking and decorating cakes as a family business, and you explained it so well! :)
Congratulations on your amazing fanfic x)
Date: 11/22/10 01:55 am Title: Chapter 1
DAFKLSDHFLAH AHHHHHHHHHHH! If I had a voice right now, I'd be squealing so loudly that I'd wake up my mother. Actually, I was squealing regardless.
I LOVE IT! Just as I love all of your stories; this was just so sweet and romantic, and... and... oh, the trust that Bill has in his brother, and vice a versa! So, so, sweet.
I adore the world that you set up; itw as so easy to imagine it vividly. You make creating worlds look so easy, and I love that about your fics--the universes, and not only that, but you give the characters a specific dialect for every story that makes it that much more believable. I don't know how you do it, but believe me when I say that you are amazing. Seriously, can I kidnap you now? :3
Date: 11/04/10 08:27 am Title: Chapter 1
That was so sweet! Your writing is so incredibly detail-oriented it is almost unreal. The way you describe atmosphere, surroundings, clothing, daily chores of the main characters....unbelievable. It never slips into something boring, unnecessary, excessive....just perfect balance to make it interesting, highly evocative, imagery-rich and fascinating. You are the best!!!
Date: 03/31/10 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww, so beautiful. I was immediately addicted to the way you write about the twins in Code 483, and now I can see it's in your entire writing. So gorgeous.
"Tom strips Bill down and takes him apart so tenderly, gentle and fervent all at once, and when they're done, Bill begs in the dark for Tom to do it again."
Normally I love my twinsmut as much as the next girl, but the delicacy and taste here was just so perfect and beautiful. Bravo.
Date: 02/17/10 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Such a romantic story! Reading about how deep the twins' devotion to each other just made me melt. I really loved how you incorporated such sweet dialogue and scenes, but kept everything from becoming sacchrine or unrealistic. Lived this story!