Date: 05/27/10 05:54 am Title: Habits Die
aaaaaaaaaaaw. yay. cute ^_^ update soon again bitte?!?!?!?!? PLEEEEEEEEAAASEEE *desperate* lol XD
Date: 05/27/10 03:50 am Title: Habits Die
So I just sat here and read through this whole thing. Or all that's posted so far. And I'm not gonna lie, I've got such a bad feeling in my stomach. :/ And I'm not sure if I'm supposed to feel that way. Though I know it wouldn't be your intentions of course.
I'm adoring the way the story is written. It's definitely got my attention, and the way it flows makes it an easy read. You don't feel like you have to force yourself to the next paragraph. But you don't need to read about me saying if your writing is good or not, or if its done right. I think we both know that it for sure is. :)
I can't decide if I like Tom yet. It's not that I don't because he's actually quite a relatable character in a lot of ways, but something about him I can't quite place. And given his history...It just makes me feel uneasy. I think that we're probably going to have heartache for sure if this story is going to have a happy ending. But I could certainly be wrong.
Aaannyways, lol, I've left a long enough review I think. I'm really loving the story. And I'm glad I've finally read it. And though I'm a little nervous about Tom, I know the story will still be good. :)
Hugs,
Date: 05/27/10 03:25 am Title: Habits Die
Tom is no normal man. Any normal man would have stopped dating after the 99999 time he had to settle for his hand...
But then again, it's Bill, so I kind of get it.
Date: 05/27/10 02:49 am Title: Habits Die
Dont pick up that phone Tom! Naughty boy. Hes going out with Bill, why would he even think of Stacy?
Im excited for this weekend. Maybe we'll even get..dare I say it..sex? LOL :)
Date: 05/27/10 01:41 am Title: Habits Die
yay bill and tom time
Date: 05/26/10 10:50 pm Title: Habits Die
woop! right decision tomi! i cannot wait for more. i can really see this becoming one of my favorites. more soon please! d:)
Date: 05/26/10 09:09 pm Title: Habits Die
Good job Tom, that's the best decision of your like right there! lol Can't wait to read about their trip together!
Date: 05/22/10 02:14 pm Title: Go Wrong
you're the first person I know to equivalate life to Tetris. Hats off for you, then
Date: 05/14/10 07:35 pm Title: Go Wrong
oh no...Bill hanging up like that is def. not a good sign D: can't wait till the next update! :)
Date: 05/12/10 05:31 pm Title: Go Wrong
I'm so happy to read a new chapter of this story ! I hope Bill is not really mad... poor Tom, he can't get his mind off Bill! Can't wait to read more !
Date: 05/12/10 05:39 am Title: Go Wrong
more please? (: i really like it. ^_^ it's awesome.
Date: 04/23/10 05:23 am Title: Fails To
awww. I just wanna hug the poor little guy
Date: 04/18/10 01:00 pm Title: Fails To
This made me cackle; poor, poor Tom.
Date: 04/18/10 08:37 am Title: Fails To
HI.LA.RI.OUS.
Oh, man I laughed like mad. Tom is such a "loser". He has the worst luck in the world and it's even more hilarious because that sort of shit he just went through totally happens in real life. I understand his frustration.Plus he had all those sexy mental images of Bill.Poor guy.
Bill's Dad is one of those elderly people who love exprimenting? Or needs watching because they might do something stupid. Plus the guy has a facebook? lol. I don't like FB very much, that's why I'm there once every three months to ignore friends invites from people I don't even know.Whatever.That was random sorry.
I love this Tom, he's such a noob.Thank you for the new awesome chap, the best so far. This is getting better and better :)
Date: 04/18/10 08:12 am Title: Fails To
Is it wrong that I laughed at Tom the whole way through that? XD
Date: 04/18/10 07:29 am Title: Fails To
fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck. -.-
gaaaaah. I cant handle it. they gotta have sex soon or im gonna die... XDDD
Date: 04/18/10 07:18 am Title: Fails To
if i was tom i would've murdered someone xD