Date: 01/25/12 06:24 am Title: Chapter 2
this is a good story!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 06/16/10 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
I LOVE THIS!!
its just simply amazing and I want MORE!! so please update soon X
Date: 03/10/10 06:00 am Title: Chapter 1
please lady,
continue. i m dying here
Date: 03/02/10 12:14 am Title: Chapter 2
xD this is so confusing.
Date: 03/01/10 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
ooooh wth is wrong with tom?
Date: 03/01/10 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
Omg... I can't wait to see their reactions after this... I feel bad for Bill and I'm wondering what's up with Tomi... :(
Can't wait for the next chap !
Date: 02/28/10 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh lordy was this a hot chapter! I love how you contrasted harsh with sweet in this. Tom's words with his kisses, the man-handling with the caresses...it all really played so well off of each other. Can't wait for more!
Date: 02/28/10 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Bill, leaning on his elbows against the counter, his eyes red and watery as he reached behind himself and felt the first of Tom’s release slipping out of him
This line is so epic it made me feel all dirty . . . I love it
Date: 02/28/10 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
plz plz continue this im so curius about this, why tom is like that? and what is going to do Bill?
Date: 02/28/10 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
First of all: FUCK YES TO THE "NOW 4 CHAPTERS" bit! And second: OH WOW i don't even know if I have words other than HOLY SHIT SO WORTH THE WAIT. Hahaha dude. Fuck O_O i sat here reading trying to picture it all and just....fcicnfkughhhhh wow i love you *_* thank you, for real. just wow. I wish I had a better review for you LOL
Date: 02/28/10 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
-________- Leana, you need to stop getting me so turned on for these boys. i'm hot all over. that's all i have to say.
Date: 02/28/10 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
That was the perfect I want it/I don't want it rape scene! I tried to write a scene with that same balance, but I think I was a little too light on the "I don't want it" part. Wish I had read this first, my fic would have been better.
Date: 02/28/10 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is VERY well written. I can't wait to read more!! :D
Date: 02/04/10 07:11 am Title: Chapter 1
evil cliffy!!!! T.T
Date: 01/20/10 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
yeah u should definitly extend this I like it its kinda diffrent from ur other fics :)
Date: 01/20/10 09:18 am Title: Chapter 1
this is quite interesting to say the least. I was wondering when you were coming back with a new story my dear.
Date: 01/20/10 04:45 am Title: Chapter 1
NONONO that was awsome!!!!!please continue it PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE it was friggin awsome