Date: 06/29/14 10:15 pm Title: Nail Polish
Awww so cute! And normal;)
Date: 09/19/13 05:46 am Title: Nail Polish
I love it how the best author on this website isn't obsessed with twincest :p
Anyways, this was perfect. I seriously can't come up with anything that would have made it better.
I really loved the concept of the story. I've been thinking about Tom's thoughts about Bill quite alot myself, and I'm more than happy to see that you of all people decided to write about it! I couldn't have been more happy with the result!! It was simple, cute, realistic, tone was super cozy, short without being rushed in any way... Simply perfect. It got me quite sentimental as well!!
Thank you!!
Date: 07/16/13 09:20 pm Title: Nail Polish
Epic you are amazing
Date: 06/05/13 02:32 pm Title: Nail Polish
FINALLY! Someone who writes normality!
Date: 09/11/11 01:23 pm Title: Nail Polish
nooope this is really good !
Date: 08/01/11 01:32 am Title: Nail Polish
Aww this was so cute :)
Date: 03/21/11 05:03 pm Title: Nail Polish
This is awesome :) I love reading GEN , when its just them as brothers, as twins and not as lovers.Dont get me wrong, I love SLASH to but sometimes I want a break from them once in awhile. I wonder myself what Tom things of Bill. And I think you did wonderfully on what you think how Tom thinks of Bill.
Date: 11/06/10 11:53 pm Title: Nail Polish
This was an adorable scene to capture. It felt very quiet, and still; like most conversations that happen in the middle of the night. Great job.
Date: 10/23/10 02:56 am Title: Nail Polish
Nice! I've been reading fics from this site for ages, and never ran across something this simple and realistic. I love the idea of Bill sitting in the early morning doing his nails, it's so ordinary and slightly sad. Overall, one of my favorite General one-shots.
Date: 09/11/10 05:23 pm Title: Nail Polish
i love this :) i wouldn't be surprised if this exact scene had played out in Bill & Tom's real life, that's how amazing it is.
Date: 08/14/10 01:15 pm Title: Nail Polish
love love love it!
Date: 08/10/10 06:57 pm Title: Nail Polish
Awe, I really liked reading this. :D
Date: 08/04/10 04:39 am Title: Nail Polish
that was beautifully short and sweet. it made me smile
oh and dont apologise for it not being twincest i personally prefer it that way
Date: 06/20/10 12:52 am Title: Nail Polish
not really much of a general reader, but might i just say, this is fantastic. i loved it so much.
Date: 12/10/09 05:47 pm Title: Nail Polish
I don't think you tried too hard it just *blushes* wasn't very interesting. Your writing skills are fine, just the moment you captured wasn't one that kept me very enticed.
Date: 12/02/09 12:22 am Title: Nail Polish
It's very three am, it makes me sleepy to read it. Their logic feels tired and groggy. Is that possible?
Date: 11/30/09 01:11 am Title: Nail Polish
Oooh. I totally loved this. It's so short, but it's like, a perfect little fly-on-the-wall situation, and I think your characterization is just lovely. I really think that they seem...well, very natural in this. As if it's actually something that would happen. Kudos.
Date: 11/28/09 06:21 am Title: Nail Polish
A simple scenario like this, when narrated well, goes a long way. If I was your beta I'd have changed one or two words due to repetition, but that's just me being picky.
Very well done. :) A moment like this really brings the twins alive. Thank u for writing.
Date: 11/24/09 02:24 am Title: Nail Polish
It's so refreshing, stories like these. Very, very contemplative and fascinating how you write the interactions between the two boys and VERY realistic! i hope you'll write more, i always smile reading stories that offer insight into the guys' lives, makes me remember they're human, too. oh and it's hilarious how bill is about his nails. and the "Cheaper brands chip easier, fade sooner" line is genius. Pure genius my friend. Give us more!