Date: 03/29/11 04:19 pm Title: Sparks and Flames.
That was à good Story! Awesome :)
Date: 12/18/10 05:22 pm Title: Sparks and Flames.
I enjoyed this story very much but felt so bad for Bill. I wish it had turned out differently but it was well worth reading. Danke.
Date: 06/26/10 06:23 am Title: Sparks and Flames.
D':
Author's Response: D:
Date: 12/14/09 01:32 am Title: Sparks and Flames.
That was...
Depressing.
But REALLY fantastic!
You're such a great writer!!
There us nothing to improve, it's just perfect how it is!
Author's Response: kf;fk;k LOVE. Thank you so, so much =)
Date: 10/09/09 10:21 pm Title: Sparks and Flames.
Noooo! not a one-shot! This should be a full-blown STORY! THAT IS HOW GOOD THIS IS! PLEASE!
Author's Response:
Thank youuu SO much! I think I'm going to have to leave it as a one-shot, though. BUT! I am working on another full length story as we speak. I should have chapter one up in a week or maybe less =) If you like this, you may like that one as well. Once again, I'm glad you loved it, thanks for the review!
Date: 10/06/09 02:06 am Title: Sparks and Flames.
T^T
So sad. I seriously wanted to cry during the majority of this.
That being said, I enjoyed this a lot because it was REALLY well written and I'd love to see more from Tom's point of view, like inside his head but, you know ^_^
I'll definitely have to check out more of your stories 'cause this was awesome.
Author's Response:
Thank you! It makes me happy that you said it was well-written :) I'll be writing more in the future. I'm in the middle of writing a chaptered story, which I've worked out Tom and Bill's thoughts more than just Bill's ^^ And some from the G's too, because they're in that one, of course, cuz I love them, too!
Date: 10/05/09 05:42 pm Title: Sparks and Flames.
It'd be great expanded, and with a happy ending. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll think about it. If I continue with a happy ending, it will probably still have some melancholy feel to fit with this part.
Date: 10/05/09 01:46 pm Title: Sparks and Flames.
I loved th way thsi was written
Its kind of poetic
I would love to read more so its sad that its only a one-shot :p
Author's Response:
Maybe instead of a continuation I'll make it part of a series? And yeah, I've been told my writing has a poetic feel before. Glad you liked it :)
Date: 10/05/09 08:54 am Title: Sparks and Flames.
I know how to improve this - make a sequel. Better yet - a happy-end sequel)
pretty please?)
Author's Response:
Happy endings are so common XD But I suppose if I do continue, it will end up happy...er. Maybe. I'll see XD But thanks so much for the review!
Date: 10/05/09 07:06 am Title: Sparks and Flames.
Seriously!I wanna read more!!!!! Please make it a whole fic!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Hm, perhaps I'll think about it :)
Date: 10/05/09 02:22 am Title: Sparks and Flames.
oh my you so need to continue this!
I hope bill can at least find it in him to live with the pain of not having tom the way he wants him. How sad :(
Author's Response:
Thank you!
rnAs of this point I think it's going to remain a oneshot unless I find some magical inspiration to continue it XD
Date: 10/05/09 12:24 am Title: Sparks and Flames.
Was good, redundant a little bit. Keep at it. I liked the twist you put on it, if not a little saddening.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah, the writing style was choppy and redundant, but it was intentional :) Like the thoughts of someone who was very confused. But anyway, thanks for the review!