Date: 12/23/11 04:33 am Title: ONE: Torture Chambers In My Mind and Heart
Are you ever going to update again? its almost a year since the last update...
Author's Response: until I put up the "abandoned story" warning this fic is going to be updated. I keep it on hiatus because of how sporadic my updates are for it. this is the fic that i get all my anger out with and lately i havent been in a bad enough mood to have the inspiration to work on it. Added to that, I have a lot on my plate right now and my writing in general has been put on hold. please be patient with me and this fic, I will update it, i just dont know when I will. Tomi Transylvania
Date: 10/25/11 07:01 pm Title: FOURTEEN : i need to get out of here
Amazing, I'm catching up on my reading and I love this! And aahhh Meg, I miss you.. We should talk soon! :)
Author's Response: we should! i have a new msn though. my old account got hacked. the one you have added. my new one is in my bio add me! ima ctually online now if you are
Date: 06/23/11 07:34 pm Title: FOURTEEN : i need to get out of here
This is amazing plz update soon
Date: 03/06/11 04:06 pm Title: ONE: Torture Chambers In My Mind and Heart
HAHHAAHHAHA GM!!!! GENERAL MOTORS!!! GENERAL MOTORSSSS AAAAHHHHH
Sorry. Had to get that out of my system.
Date: 02/26/11 02:22 am Title: FOURTEEN : i need to get out of here
amazing! ugh cliffhanger haha cant wait but awesome job :3
Date: 02/02/11 02:13 am Title: FOURTEEN : i need to get out of here
OMG! NO! D: whyyyyyyyy?!?! I hope this get updated soon cause I'm gonna die if it doesn't! You hear that? You'll cause me to die if you don't update soon! XD kidding. But seriously. O_o
Date: 01/31/11 11:12 am Title: FOURTEEN : i need to get out of here
NOOOOOOOOOOO no no no I Wont allow this to happen...Bill cannot and I repeat cannoty die..... Go Tom kill em all... Oh and I'm on my way into ur story to kill Georg and Dame myself now since Tom and Bill have a slight delay in plans..DON'T WORRY KAITII TO THE RESCUE!!!!!!! hehhehehehe can't wait for more xD
Xxx
Date: 01/31/11 04:36 am Title: FOURTEEN : i need to get out of here
so did Tom kill them?
Date: 01/31/11 02:26 am Title: FOURTEEN : i need to get out of here
I just read all of this and i really like it. i look forward to the rest of it, keep up the good work!
Date: 01/30/11 08:52 pm Title: FOURTEEN : i need to get out of here
*squees and dies because this was updated*
THEN!
*comes back to life and dies again cause it's a damn cliffie*
Date: 01/30/11 07:50 pm Title: FOURTEEN : i need to get out of here
omg! Poor Billa! I hope he's okay. Anyways, I'm glad you updated, I really love this story and can't wait for the next Chappie! :) Good job.
Date: 01/30/11 05:48 pm Title: FOURTEEN : i need to get out of here
*Yay* You updated! :D I am so happy T_T Cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 01/30/11 05:02 pm Title: FOURTEEN : i need to get out of here
DUDE, can bill not catch a break???? seems that everything bad happens to him.... great job on this, cant' wait to see what happens next!!!!
Date: 12/31/10 07:08 am Title: THIRTEEN: An Anthem for the Angels Part Two
I love this story. Update soon :)
Date: 12/28/10 07:14 pm Title: THIRTEEN: An Anthem for the Angels Part Two
I just started reading the story yesterday and I love it!!! is this the end? hope not, I really want to know what happens.
Author's Response: no, this is not the end. i'm still working on this. the updates just won't be regular i'm afraid. thanks for reading!
Date: 10/23/10 11:06 pm Title: THIRTEEN: An Anthem for the Angels Part Two
YEY! It's back! And they're gonna kill the bastards! : D Love iiitttt!!!
Date: 10/21/10 03:43 am Title: THIRTEEN: An Anthem for the Angels Part Two
YOU HAVE TO WRITE ANOTHER CHAPPIE! YOU JUST HAVE TO!!! I love this story, please hurry with the update? Danke for writing it. :)
Date: 10/18/10 12:29 am Title: THIRTEEN: An Anthem for the Angels Part Two
omg,woah
Date: 10/14/10 07:04 am Title: ONE: Torture Chambers In My Mind and Heart
RE: my previous review.
The little thing I found awkward was in the chap where Tom meets his sister crying as he exits the bathroom. That little part about him kneeling to her height doesn't make realistic sense to me. I'm 5'1". I tried this with a friend who is same height as Tomi (6'2") just to be sure. Tomi wouldn't come down to her height by kneeling, he'd end up looking up at her. If she's an average eleven yr old, she very likely be three feet and some, to four feet thereabouts. I dunno if this makes sense to you. I'ts not a big deal inthe story, i just struck me as an awkward picture
Author's Response: I know what you mean. I don't know if I ever actually figured out how tall his little sister is so its very likely that youre right about this. thanks for pointing it out though!
Date: 10/14/10 03:34 am Title: THIRTEEN: An Anthem for the Angels Part Two
I do!!! I can't wait to see Tom and Bill shred those asshole fuck-faces. Then they can fuck each other over the dead bodies, or maybe do that somewhere cleaner... I loved this~
Author's Response: O.O yeah.... lol ill do my best to get more out as soon as i can