Reviews For Rivalry
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Reviewer: sarah99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/15 08:53 am Title: Pneumonia

I want mooooorrrrreeeee

Reviewer: SakuraBliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/13 03:42 pm Title: ThE cLaSh

Its really good! I love it :) only I wish you would continue :(

Reviewer: hihhihihihihihi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/10 01:07 am Title: Pneumonia

continue pwease :D

Author's Response: I'm planning on it. :\ I'm sorry it's been so long. I've had terrible writers block.

Reviewer: alumit Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/10 08:18 pm Title: Pneumonia

i´m sure i haven´t read such an amazing story like this one here...
i mean its WOWWWW I LOVE IT!!!
The fights and the love the way you put all in it ohhhh you´re really really getting the best!!!

Author's Response: Awwwwwww Thank you sooo much! I'll update it as soon as possible. <3

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/09 04:50 pm Title: Pneumonia

ah, how sweet. =) finally. god, i cant imagine how hard it was for bill to be that mean knowing he didnt mean it. at least tom though bill really was mad at him, and being a jerk, so he was just responding to that. i feel bad for bill now, as well as tom. keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! <3

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/09 07:19 pm Title: Pneumonia

oh yay! looking forward to more chapters of this! =)

Author's Response: Thanks! <333333

Reviewer: Akira Ashiya Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/09 03:25 pm Title: Pneumonia

I love this story soooo much! It's really amusing, especially the line "...but he’d pitched an epic diva fit...". That was HILARIOUS! I can't wait to see what comes next...

Author's Response: 8D Thanks! <333

Reviewer: 2Kewl4U Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/09 01:10 pm Title: Pneumonia

-jumps around screaming- YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY!!! I'm so happy, I could squeal until all my family's ears bleed! (but I won't)

Author's Response: Roflmao. xDD Thanks!!!! <33333333333

Reviewer: Zaina Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/09 07:58 am Title: Pneumonia

I didn't remember this story! I was so glad when I saw you had updated it...
I love when Tom is waiting for Bill and (finally!) he finds him. And the "StupidTom" when Bill is sleeping in the hospital is funny. The end of this chapter is sweet... and sad.

Author's Response: You forgot it? xD It wasn't THAT long between updates, was it? <33

Reviewer: omgthatshot05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/09 03:05 am Title: Pneumonia

Lol about time they got together boys can be so dumb lol but still love them and u for up dating thanks

Author's Response: You're welcome! <33 Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/09 07:08 pm Title: Waiting

oh, the ending is so sweet. I'm ready for angst and healing, less anger. poor boys. i cant wait to learn more about what happened between them. please keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Angst and healing is definitely going to happen. ;)

Reviewer: 2Kewl4U Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/09 05:37 pm Title: Waiting

I cried and I will probably continue to cry for them...Lovely story...

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: engelnataly Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/09 03:40 pm Title: Waiting

coomon pls post sooner!

Author's Response: I'm sorry! I have five other ongoing fics, and I update them in a cycle! :( I'll try to get them all done faster, I promise!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/09 03:48 am Title: Therapy

wow. this is great so far, i can't wait to find out more about what really happened between them. keep up the great work, and please update soon!

Reviewer: HyperActiveChick Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 08:15 pm Title: Therapy

I blah blah blah love this story!!!!!!
Bill's an uber bitch and I feel sorry for Tom...

Author's Response: You'll feel sorry for Bill soon, too, I think... Just so you know. He has his reasons... I'm glad you love it though! <3

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 08:07 pm Title: Therapy

.:).

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! ;)

Reviewer: Ohz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/09 04:07 pm Title: Therapy

So I read the three chapters you have posted. And like the other two stories I've read by you, I like it. Looking forward to the next chapter; I can only imagine where this story will lead.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like my stuff! <3 My co-writer from In The Pursuit of Knowledge has a story that I wanna make people read! :) It's called Rising From The Ashes. :) It's my faaaavie, if you're interested in it...

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/09 08:44 pm Title: Therapy

This needs to be updated immediately. I mean it. Immediately. This is painful. Tom is terrified of his brother. I kind of understand why Bill hates him, but I like to think it's "hate" not hate.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I'll update as soon as I can! :) Their relationship in this story is odd. Don't be so quick to dislike Bill... He has his reasons...

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/09 08:32 pm Title: Day 1

I've decided. I'm horrified. The idea that this could even be possible is so sad. I can't wait till it gets better!

Author's Response: That's what I said! My 11 year old niece is actually the one who came up with this idea. (BTW, she's a twincest fan. How creepy is that?)

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/09 08:22 pm Title: ThE cLaSh

This is both extremely upsetting and really really funny. I don't know whether to laugh or cry. :D

Author's Response: XD Just laugh for now. There'll be plenty of time to cry later. I have all of it planned out, and it's gonna get really sad in the next chapter. I cried just thinking it out.

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