Date: 08/14/09 06:02 am Title: Chapter Three
u mean this is the end?????????????????are u crazy???that;s not enough!u could do such an amazing story moreee plss it's so good!
Date: 08/14/09 01:52 am Title: Chapter Three
........................... omg.....
Date: 08/13/09 11:23 pm Title: Chapter Three
OMG this definitely needs a sequel. I loved it. Poor boys, I loved how Tom no matter what Bushido did to him, no matter how much pain he was feeling he kept trying to save Bill.
Date: 08/13/09 09:05 pm Title: Chapter Three
I demand a sequel. Please?
Date: 08/13/09 05:36 pm Title: Chapter Three
wtf?? WTF?? NOOOO!!!
*cries*
that was SOOO sad :(
.....more soon??
Date: 08/13/09 04:59 pm Title: Chapter Three
OHSHIT. *scared face*
Date: 08/13/09 04:39 pm Title: Chapter Three
Ugh, this story is so macabre. I love it XD I like how this whole entire story built up so much momentum and excitement and then it ended so abruptly - it kept the adrenaline rush up. Job well done, I say. I could really feel the terror the twins were feeling.
Date: 08/13/09 01:58 pm Title: Chapter Three
Well... Damn. That was great, haha.
Date: 08/13/09 01:49 pm Title: Chapter Three
Oh my gosh! This was so good, please make a sequel :D
Date: 08/09/09 04:53 am Title: Chapter One
I'm dying of the suspense here. I've actually checked the site about twice a day since you posted the second chapter to see if the story has been updated.
Date: 08/07/09 04:54 am Title: Chapter Two
.... Please be merciful and don't put Bill and Tom in pain....PLEASE!!!
Date: 08/05/09 08:09 pm Title: Chapter Two
Oh wow!Is Bushido going to make them fuck eachother before or after he does?
Date: 08/05/09 12:34 pm Title: Chapter Two
This scenario is the perfect mix of excitement and nightmare-esque horror! It has me holding my breath (figuratively) and keeps my eyes locked on the computer screen. The more the story progresses, the more I can't turn away. It's like a car crash - it's so horrible you just have to watch. Good job portraying the twins' fear and panic! Few writers have that ability :)
Date: 08/05/09 02:07 am Title: Chapter Two
I liked it ^^ I can't wait for the next chapter xD
Date: 08/05/09 01:30 am Title: Chapter Two
He didn't lie, he just never corrected.:0. I want to know what happens next, and FAST.
Date: 08/04/09 12:43 pm Title: Chapter One
This makes my heart stop. I can't wait for more! Just amazing! :)
Date: 08/02/09 05:19 pm Title: Chapter One
OH BLOODY HELL, I love scary stories.:). MORE.
Date: 08/02/09 02:01 pm Title: Chapter One
Ooo...I can't wait for the next update! It looks great so far :)
Date: 08/02/09 11:08 am Title: Chapter One
"ooooooOOOooOhh! I like this! ALOT! Really excited to read the second one!
Just the thought of Bushido man handling the young twins. Ugh! Why is that so hot?!"
I was going to leave my own review but then I saw that tomgasm had already said it all. Can't wait to see where you take this(even if I think I have a good idea where it's headed.). :]