Date: 05/02/11 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was a great fic! I really enjoyed it :)
Date: 05/03/09 01:49 am Title: Chapter 2
"Holy shit," Gustav said, clearly not having been expecting that at all.
I enjoyed this so much. It was so well written and so in character. Wonderful.
Date: 01/19/09 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
this story really got me into the tom/georg pairing:). and i just loved the strange ideas bill had to bring them together. i always keep imagining bill pushing an almost nacked tom out of the room :D.
Date: 12/19/08 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
"Holy shit," Gustav said, clearly not having been expecting that at all. – *flutter claps* AWESOME!
Tom thrust his hips a little just to make sure his friend remembered.
"Oh yeah," Georg said with a laugh and Tom flopped back onto the seat and moaned as the kissing and fondling resumed. - *giggles* hot very hot!
"What the fuck are you two doing?" – oops but not really!
"But your17;re the straight ones," David said in a confused, almost desperate tone.
"Hey," Gustav said, sounding offended. - *cracks up*
"Actually I think you'll find Gustav is the only straight one," Bill said in a helpful voice, "unless there's something you want to share, Juschtel?"
"Not at the moment," Gustav replied, falling in with the rest of them; "I'll let you know if I change my mind." - *giggles harder*
and what made it totally worth the mental anguish he had been through since he had thought of the idea was the heartfelt moan that erupted from Georg's chest. – HOTT! Yes with two t’s
"God, Tom!" - *guttural noise*
"Tom ..." Georg's voice was hoarse and tight, "I'm gonna ..."
Quite deliberately Tom took as much of Georg's cock into his mouth as he could without gagging and sucked hard.
"Oh god," Georg said in a strangled tone…- *shivers* perfect!
"What do you want?" he asked and it was in that moment he realised that he was willing to give Georg anything.
It was quite a revelation to him and the smile Georg gave him in return took his breath away. - *sigh*
"So perfect," Georg whispered and took all his fears away. – awh!
"And then I thought I might rinse you off and see if different bits of you taste the same," Georg whispered in his ear, "or if your nipples," Tom's breath hitched as Georg flicked one sensitive nub, "have a different flavour to your neck," a light kiss was placed just below his ear, "or your belly button." - *pants* oh my!
Didn’t care that he was moaning like a porn star. – hot!
He was a very tactile person and this was tactile heaven. – very nice detail.
"You pout almost as well as Bill," - *grins*
"Oh god," he said with as much breath as he could drag into his fluttering chest.
He was pretty sure he was blushing from his toes to the root of his hair as well, because the sensation felt so incredibly intimate. No one had ever touched him there and it caused the arousal bubbling through him to boil and his nerves to fire in crazy ways and every hair on his body to stand on end. It was, to put it mildly, incredible. – my sentiments exactly “oh god”
"Let's continue this somewhere more comfortable," – OMG I can’t believe this is still going!!!
under the sink that he found a bottle of lube, a whole pack of condoms and a leaflet declaring itself to be "The Joys of Anal Sex - *cracks up* oh Bill!!! You are soooo evil.
Lovely Just lovely. I've found a new favorite!
Date: 12/19/08 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
"but don't think you can get round the no groupies on the bus rule just because they're boys." – *giggles*
"So am I," he suddenly blurted out before he was really aware he had made the decision - *giggles, bounces in place, and flutter claps*
"I'm a lanky teenager with a skinny arse” - *cracks up!*
"My underwear is going to ride up something horrible," he bemoaned his fate.
Bill put his hands on his hips again and raised an eyebrow.
"Oh you have to be kidding," Tom almost wailed; "there is no way in hell I am going commando – This whole bit is hilarious!
The little voice in Tom's head was repeating one thing over and over again: 'Oh no. Oh no. Oh no.' He was becoming hard - *bounces and giggles*
"You were so busy worrying about your own erection that you never noticed Georg's," Bill said and made a one mark in the air. "Now the idea's in his head and we'll give him a little time to get used to it - *grins and giggles* Bill is sooooooooo evil!
"We have a refugee," – awesome line!
"And I bet under that butter-wouldn't-melt exterior he's as kinky as your are," Georg joined in, but when he looked at his friends their bassist appeared rather flushed. – this one got two laughs one for the butter-wouldn't-melt exterior he's as kinky as your are…and one for Georg getting all flushed.
"My bed's covered in water," like I said earlier Bill is soooooooo evil
When Tom was attached to someone either in a familial sense or a romantic sense, his subconscious got snugly. – awwwhh that’s so sweet.
lifted his head just in time to see Georg disappearing into the bathroom – he he Georg had o go take care of a problem I’m sure. ha ha
"Haven't touched a drop," Georg said in a very sober tone; "been on orange juice all night. You?"
"Water," Tom said with an almost hysterical little laugh. – HA!
This chapter was just so funny!
Date: 12/11/08 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
That was straight out of a Harlequin Romance novel! I loved it! It was so sweet, not like the wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am(sir?) you would expect from Tom or Georg if their reputations are to be believed. Very well written, smooth, not all over the place. Everything flowed together perfectly. For some reason, I can see these as very possibly their real personalities. Avery enjoyable read...
Date: 11/30/08 12:41 am Title: Chapter 2
Extraordinarily hot! It really was, and really, really funny too.
Date: 09/06/08 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Godddd. That was so great. XD I don't even know what to say.
Date: 04/24/08 02:16 am Title: Chapter 2
Great story...just thought I'd let you know that in the shower scene it says Georg's "nibble" fingers. Ouch.
Author's Response: Thank you and thank you *goes to change it*
Date: 04/03/08 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love this, it's great!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 03/08/08 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow. That was so amazing!! I love how it had some humor in it and it was really cute too. Well done!!
Author's Response: Thank you :).
Date: 02/21/08 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
I absolutely loved this fic and the prequel. Amazing work from an amazing writer.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :).
Date: 01/12/08 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was good.
Only one thing I didn't quite get. One minute Tom was wishing to have sex with Georg, the other minute he was in love with him. Anyway, good fic.
Author's Response: Thank you - I think it was quite a revelation to him as well :).
Date: 01/08/08 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
niceeee....i just love this pairing..:)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 01/05/08 06:53 am Title: Chapter 2
That was amazing!
So cute, I loved Bill setting the two boys up
And david's reaction was priceless.
Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you :). This one was so much fun to play with.
Date: 01/04/08 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
Poor David and Gustav!!! They were shocked xD Those two are hot together, they sure are. Great job and.. the shower part, sexy o.O xD
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 01/04/08 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Makin out session at the bar o.0 Swwweeeettt!!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :) Thank you for commenting.
Date: 01/03/08 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
All his confidence had been wiped away with one thought and Georg had given it back with two words; that had to be a record turn around even for a Kaultiz's speeding brain.
Loved it. Loved this sentence. You're awesome.
Author's Response: Thank you :).
Date: 01/03/08 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
I've been waiting for someone to write somehing like THIS too. You're my hero now, seriously. If you EVER stop writing I'll hun you down and kill you. Okay, maybe not.. But I'll hunt you down! ^^
Author's Response: Hunt me down eh? Better not stop writing then had I :). So pleased yo liked the fic, thank you so much for commenting.