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Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/09 05:24 pm Title: Questions with no answers

cookies
plz update soon thx soso much=]

Author's Response: Cookie for u! i will update soon XD

Reviewer: billalover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 02:49 am Title: The truth or a lie

o.o ...So... close.
I think you secretly love torturing us with the almost scenes >.>
But that's ok, I love this story.
And FINALLY! So the dad's like a warlock then. That's kinda creepy, but it explains a lot.
I can't wait for more updates. :D

Author's Response: yep i love toturing u guys its fun ^^ glad u like this story! I will update soon thanks for the review x XD

Reviewer: MeckimyLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 01:36 am Title: The truth or a lie

wow....so what is Gordon for real??? kinda creepy what happened to Tom's mom too...
hahaha i just have to laugh at the fact that Tom and Bill completely are into it...and then they get all awkward and bust out laughing. makes the mood....lighter. funny though!!!!
this Barbara lady....creeeeepppyyyy.....
AAAHH please write more soon!!!!

Author's Response: haha i liked writing that bit with Tom and Bill it was fun. Barbara yep she is one creppy lady *hides* glad u like the story thanks for the review i will be writing more soon x XD

Reviewer: clandestinedreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 01:34 am Title: The truth or a lie

Okay, now im confused. O.o what's Gordon doin with Barbra?

Author's Response: haha u will have to find out soon thanks for the review i will update soon xXD

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 08:58 pm Title: The truth or a lie

update soon plz thx=]

Reviewer: billalover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/09 10:49 pm Title: bodies taken over and plans are formed

??? I am so confused. What the hell is up with gordon?? Updates!! Soon please!!

Author's Response: thanks for the review haha everyone is confused lol sorry i'm not updating very soon as i am spending hoildays with my dad and i will not have time to use my laptop but when i get home :D x

Reviewer: MeckimyLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/09 12:37 pm Title: bodies taken over and plans are formed

wow, the ending was really creepy. Gordon is a freak and needs to be stopped. he cant hurt Tom and Bill...its not fair!!
omg Bill please dont try and kill yourself again....
EEKKKK great chapter!! please write more soon!

Reviewer: MeckimyLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/09 12:37 pm Title: bodies taken over and plans are formed

wow, the ending was really creepy. Gordon is a freak and needs to be stopped. he cant hurt Tom and Bill...its not fair!!
omg Bill please dont try and kill yourself again....
EEKKKK great chapter!! please write more soon!

Author's Response: thanks for the review unfortanly well for u not me i am spending the hoildays with my dad as i only get to see him once a year so sorry i do have my laptop with me its just time but i am updating as soon as i get back home :D x

Reviewer: omgthatshot05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/09 12:29 am Title: bodies taken over and plans are formed

....Hmm what just happened? Dude bill is always crying lol

Author's Response: lol aww but u have to feel sorry for bill haha thanks for the review x :D

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/09 12:21 am Title: bodies taken over and plans are formed

Well, that was interesting. And unexpected.

Author's Response: yay glad u liked it thanks for the review x :D

Reviewer: punk_princess_044 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/09 09:22 pm Title: bodies taken over and plans are formed

wat the hell im so confused... wat is gordons promise and why does he want bill gone... wat is his problem

Author's Response: well i like keeping people guessing but i don't want u to be confused lol thanks for the review x :D

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/09 08:37 pm Title: bodies taken over and plans are formed

plz update soon thx=]

Reviewer: billalover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/09 12:34 am Title: Truths are told and pleasures are given

Aw, Bill finally told about his past. Poor Billa! His dad is awful, so is Tom's! What did he mean! Update soon!!!

Author's Response: yep billa told his past but Gordon is evil EVIl lol thanks for the review x :D

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/09 10:49 pm Title: Truths are told and pleasures are given

Uh oh.

Author's Response: yep uh no

Reviewer: TokioHotelForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/09 07:21 pm Title: Truths are told and pleasures are given

Yummy! I like this it's pretty good! : D

Author's Response: thanks! thanks for the review x

Reviewer: clandestinedreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 11:07 pm Title: Truths are told and pleasures are given

EEEEEWWWW! Gordon watched his son touch Bill! D=

anyway, don't let anything bad happen to Bill! Or Tom! :S

Author's Response: yep gordon is a perv lol i can't promise that Bill and Tom wont get into trouble but i can promise that they don't die! :D x

Reviewer: MeckimyLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 10:28 pm Title: Truths are told and pleasures are given

hahahaha way to be decreat about wanking off Tom....jeez....hahaha
oh crap...NO GORDON CAN NOT GET RID OF BILL!!!! NO NO NO NO NO!!!
ahhhh please write more soon!!!

Author's Response: HAHA lol i will update sooon but i can't make any promises sorry x thanks for reviewing :D

Reviewer: rachel1stevens Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 09:30 pm Title: Truths are told and pleasures are given

what noo noo onoooo im killing toms dad!

Author's Response: YES GO KILL GORDON lol thanks for the review x :D:D

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/09 10:18 pm Title: what happened to Bill?

update sooon plz thx=]

Reviewer: Tokio4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/09 12:53 pm Title: what happened to Bill?

*slaps gordon* what a fucking son of a BITCH! *throws a fit* how DARE he?!?!! he needs sm SERIOUSE mental care.. he really does..

*huggles the poor billa* and poor little bill!! he doesn't deserve all of that! especially not after what his own father did to him! *pets his head*

and also poor tomi!! *pets his head also* he's so depraved of love from his father that he's compelled to believe anything from that snake as long as he shows him love! =0 poor guy =(

please update soon? i feel sooooo sorry for them now, i just need to read more to come to that (hopfully) happy ending! =0

Author's Response: i am writing more thanks for the review lol u get gordon lol :P x

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