Date: 02/08/10 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 7 : Favorite Parts
I just finnished reading, please write an epilouge, it would be great if it could show some of the everyday life to the four boys after birth or something, a jump forwards in time, and then you can just throw in anything that makes your heart beat, I wuold for sure love reading it. =D
Anyways I really hope you'll add an extra ending, giving more of a closure to the story, so I will be able to sleep at night. :D
Thank you so much for sharing this amazing story on line so that we others, (such as super happy me) to stumble across it, I really do love it more than words can say.
Author's Response: Sugar, I would like to start with thanking you dearly from the bottom of my heart for this review. It was seriously the sweetest, most inspirational thing I've ever read, much less received. Sorry, I'm extremely emotional right now, I think I'm pregnant, but thank you again so very much. I will be writing more on this, it'll be about ten chapters in total I think. With love, Daphne~
Date: 08/07/09 04:02 am Title: Chapter 7 : Favorite Parts
I have to say, the idea of them all becoming wangsta-ish is quite entertaining. I love when an entire chapter is all smut. It was good, Tin XD
Author's Response: Thanks, I tried! I hope I do the end well<3
Date: 08/06/09 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 7 : Favorite Parts
wow that was awesome and please we need the epilouge
Author's Response: Awwwww, thanks tink<3 I have it written, I really hope I get enough reviews to post it<3
Date: 08/06/09 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 7 : Favorite Parts
I want to squeal soooooooooo effin bad!!!!!! Gosh they are some horny twins but it's soooooo hot... EPILOUGE EPILOGUE EPILOGUE!!!
Author's Response: hehehe well I already wrote an epilogue for it and ill be writing a pre-so screwed, which will be mostly the twins and their mental wars with the sexual desire they are struggling with. Thank you so much for the review 2Kewl!!! I hope I get to post it(the bonus) cos its cute and if you like sex, youll love this!<3<3
Date: 08/06/09 07:36 am Title: Chapter 7 : Favorite Parts
Aw it's so cute :)
Thanks for updating.
xx
Author's Response: I wouldve made it more entertianing but I thought drawing it out moreso wouldve made it less somehow.. The epilouge is cute and works well, but ill be writing a pre so screwed, to show how it all started with Bills denial and the twins unknowingly swaping clothes<3<3
Date: 08/06/09 06:47 am Title: Chapter 7 : Favorite Parts
I loved it :D xD muahaha, they be having vaginas xD Loooooooolllzzz xD I want the bonus epilogue!!!!!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Awwwww thanks Chi, yes, yes they do! *flutterclaps* the bonus is uber cute, so I hope I get enough reviews to post it<3<3
Date: 06/22/09 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 6 : Really Hard
MORECHAPSMORECHAPSMORECHAPS O.O I loved it!! I hope you continue soon :D
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: awwww thank you Chi!! I promise that itll get updated soon and more often<3
Date: 06/22/09 02:37 am Title: Chapter 4 : Black Bag
All of them!! Yeah right too much chaos... or maybe... nah! Maybe Tom for a change and if anything Gusi ;)
Author's Response: awww yeah, i hope you like my choice~
Date: 06/21/09 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 6 : Really Hard
damn sexy ending
Author's Response: Oh babe, thats not the end at all<3 thank you!!!
Date: 06/20/09 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 6 : Really Hard
You know, I spent the first bit wondering why I knew it all already, but then I remembered you let me read a bit before XD
Some sex at the end would've been nice, but it was still a good chapter.
*huggles* Thanks for the dedication. Ich liebe dich auch.
Author's Response: Sex is what I wanted to add at the end but i was trying to think of a good position... next chapter will have it though<3 thank you sweetie! *kiss*
Date: 05/22/09 01:41 am Title: Chapter 5 : Fucking Deadly
awsome
Author's Response: thank you so much<3<3<3
Date: 05/21/09 12:09 am Title: Chapter 5 : Fucking Deadly
They should put up a kindergarten I'm gonna be a teacher!!
Author's Response: hehehe okay Tom<3 love you!
Date: 05/18/09 09:56 am Title: Chapter 5 : Fucking Deadly
I LOVE THIS :D They are all pregnant ^^ I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Yeah! i will i promise sweetie<3
Date: 05/16/09 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 5 : Fucking Deadly
You'd let me read the rest of the story anyways. . .right?
I got a little confused as we neared the end of who was having what and who was not having what and yeah. . .Or my brain is still in drool mode. *whispers* I got the zimmer 483 dvd as a late b-day present
Author's Response: so yeah! okay geo=1 gus=1 tom-2 bill=2 is what i have so far, and i wanna see z483... *cries* yeah i want the cds too...<3 can we chat tomorrow/sunday?
Date: 05/16/09 01:27 am Title: Chapter 5 : Fucking Deadly
YAY - Twins are pregnant!
Author's Response: yes, twins both prgnant with twins!<3
Date: 05/16/09 12:09 am Title: Chapter 5 : Fucking Deadly
OMG!!!! Absolutely amazing chapter! I so love that all the guys are pregnant! Poor twins, though, having four babies. I have two, I can't imagine dealing with four! Sexy twins threatening the Gs with CPR was hilarious, and so incredibly fun to imagine. Keep updating, please!!!!!!
Author's Response: *blushes hard* yeah I had to make it fair sorta... yeah i wanted to do make them do something sexy, and twins run in my family so yeah! I will, I love you sweetie!!!<#
Date: 05/15/09 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 5 : Fucking Deadly
Nooo you better not keep the rest *Ready to kidnap story* lol
Thank you for the update.
Author's Response: i better not keep the rest of what sweetie? (hugs story close)rnThanks for reviewing love<3
Date: 05/15/09 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 5 : Fucking Deadly
Gah! write more. :) its goood.
Author's Response: Awwww thank you sweetie, i will<3
Date: 05/15/09 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 5 : Fucking Deadly
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
.. also. I liked the other banner better.
It stood out more XD
Author's Response: Okay, yay! Ill either switch it out or get a new one..
Date: 05/15/09 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 5 : Fucking Deadly
oh wow that was amazing thats alot of babies
Author's Response: Yeah I had to have a certian number and since no one reviewed asking for Simone to be pregnant and many requests for each boy to be, well I had to do it this way. Plus I needed there to be six babies in total for what I have in mind<3 I hope you like it<3