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Reviewer: Android in the Closet Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/14 03:35 pm Title: A Shot in the Night

I really liked this, thank you so much for writing it. It really made me happy to read a story like this.

Reviewer: Black Blood Hotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/13 03:36 pm Title: And Now You're Dead Inside

I loved the way you emphasized the misery and numbness throughout this chapter! I hope you continue!!!

Reviewer: TimePassed Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/12 08:32 am Title: Distortion

Can you please continue?

Author's Response: I"m sorry, but this story will not be continued at any time in the near future.

Reviewer: maccaluva1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/12 09:41 pm Title: And Now You're Dead Inside

Woah.. I liked it a lot. Bloody. Nice. He lives awesome. Sometimes I hate almost all storys have happy endings. But oh well.

Reviewer: wizard Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/11 03:40 pm Title: St. Hell

Did you guys create the story? Or did you get it from somewhere else? Because for some reason It seemed kind of incomplete, especially with the last chapter which was just notes. If so, do you have the link please? thanks :)

Author's Response: St. Hell was originally a role playing site. The storyline amongst the characters grew to be too big to keep to ourselves, so Anony an I attempted to forge it into an actual fic. However, we'd lost the first few scenes and, while we tried to do it from memory, it became too difficult and we copped out. Essentially, since we found ourselves unable to finish it, we tried to sum up what happened in the last chapter. It was a shitty way to do it, but it was either that or leave it entirely unended.

Reviewer: wizard Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/11 12:16 pm Title: A Shot in the Night

really enjoyed it, I've yet to read St.Hell, but what're the other prequels for it called? Looking forward to reading it all xD

Reviewer: LisaAnn Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/10 12:08 am Title: Distortion

I'm having triplet withdrawals!!! :D

Author's Response: This stupid site sometimes won't let us reply to certain reviews and we've no idea why. Sorry it took so long. =/

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/22/10 07:11 pm Title: Christmas Wishes

beautifully told as usual!!! and Alles Gute zum Gubertstag to you!!! i hope you have a happy one!!

Reviewer: Misery Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/10 03:04 pm Title: Christmas Wishes

And

Author's Response: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Reviewer: Misery Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/10 03:01 pm Title: Christmas Wishes

Misery: *__* Awwwww!! *flails* I can't find words at the moment, dammit! Keep makin' them wishes, boys, they will come true.
Lyric: *clings to his Christmas Rose and Big Brother, mumbling something about a countdown being almost over*
Misery: *tackleclings mein LarkAngel* Thank you, love! That was osm and really brightened my day. Shall read again on Christmas Eve while watching that movie. Best. Christmas. Ever. And HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! *clinglickgropes* Ich liebe dich! *hearts

Author's Response: Alcie: -clingnuzzles- yay! 'm glad you like it liebling. und danke. :D
Axel/Teddy: -cling back, not even bothering to ask wtf Lyr's mumbling about-
Alcie: -gigglefit; amused- ♥

Reviewer: tracyjj Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 05:07 am Title: Distortion

Awwww :)

Author's Response: This stupid site sometimes won't let us reply to certain reviews and we've no idea why. Sorry it took so long. =/

Reviewer: tracyjj Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/10 09:01 pm Title: Distortion

Wow...steamy beggining..-speechless-

Author's Response:
Misery: *blinkblink* ...Tracy!
Lyric: Wha-huh? *grins* Trace! Woah.. long time no speaky.
Misery: *sideglares* Shutit, Lyr. Thanks for the review! Twas mah first time attempting smut with another writer. Second time attempting smut in general. XD Glad it passed. <3

Reviewer: LisaAnn Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/10 12:26 am Title: Distortion

AWWWW poor Lyric! I'm sad that he has to leave his brothers for two weeks :( But I'm glad he is making the effort get better. Good for you, Lyric!! Once again, great chapter! :)

Author's Response: This stupid site sometimes won't let us reply to certain reviews and we've no idea why. Sorry it took so long. =/

Thank you, darlin'!

Reviewer: AphyPoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/10 07:35 pm Title: And Now You're Dead Inside

D':

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/10 01:07 am Title: Distortion

Aww, so sad that the have to seperate, but it's of course for a good reason. Can't wait for more XD

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Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 02:31 pm Title: St. Hell

@Axel: -flounders- This!:

Lyric glanced over at Tom's stage whisper, following the boy's gaze down to Axel's huddled form on the floor. While all the shouting and violence had gone on, Axel had curled up a little more there on the floor, covering his ears and hiding his face in his knees.

Tom's eyes remained on his brother, the anger quickly drained from his face as he mumbled, "Shit..." again. Anyone who knew the twins knew that Tom hated getting pissed off like that in front of Axel because it usually brought out this same response.

I'm not imagining things. ;_;

@Lyric: YOU NEITHER. ;_; Well, actually that could have just been me being Savannah, or me being tired. It seemed to me like you put up a little bit of a front like you were, you know, tougher than you are. It was probably me being Savannah, though. e.e

And Misery told me about the explanation chapter. I suppose I'll go back and read it when I'm not running on five hours of sleep. XD



Author's Response:
Misery: Alcie had to go clothes shoppin' for her new job =/ but the reason Axel responded like that was because he was on the bring of a panic attack. He hates violence and yelling.. Having read his oneshots in the St. Hell universe, I'm sure you can gather why, but when Nate tackled Lyric out of the deck, Lyr got pissed the fuck off and was about to deck Nate until Tom's voice veered his attention toward Axel. Seeing the younger boy like that, Lyr quickly feigned a sword fight to calm Axel down.
As for Lyric, he did put up a front when it came to the drug deal but, then again, wouldn't you? Considering the way Lyric dressed and typically acted? Any sign of weakness and that dealer would've taken advantage of him. Lyric is NOT physically strong. He needed to be cocky, self assured and calm to get through that. Other than situations like that, unless Lyric was actively trying to hide something at the time, he didn't put up a front. He was just an self involved, spoiled ass at times. XD

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 12:05 pm Title: St. Hell

Holy shit. I did not even know you dedicated a chapter to me. Holy fucking shit. I'm so sorry I haven't read this before because I know I said I would and...gosh, I'm so sorry. ;________;

Lyric makes me want to cry. He's so sweet and has such a good soul even if he tries to look on the outside like he's tough and doesn't care about anything. He needs some love and affection to get rid of that drug problem and start to be normal again. Poor thing. I think he's the one I identified the most with because I put up a front to my family all the time. I'm post-suicidal (obvs, I didn't go through with it) and none of my family members know. Only my dad who is technically my mother's ex boyfriend but the father figure. So yeah, I do understand he's going through a hard time.

What happened to Axe in the second (I think) chapter? Or maybe it was the third. I don't remember. e.e Anyway, did he have like some sort of panic attack or something? I'm sorry if it was explained, I had five hours of sleep last night and my eyes were skipping over certain parts. :( I'll read it again when I have more consciousness. .___.

I'm sad you didn't finish this (technically). I didn't read the seventh chapter because I didn't really want to know through explanation, I wanted to know through the story, so yeah. XD I suppose I'll go check out Distortion and see how it is. It's sad this doesn't have more reviews, though. It's written very well. :) You two are great at writing together. (Oh, and I'm talking to Misery and just found out that you guys are girlfriends. Gee, thanks for keeping it a secret. XD) Although if I'd just looked at either profile page I would have known. e.e

Aaaaand...Nate is fucking sexy. Oh my god. I would tap that. A million fucking times.



Author's Response:
Anony: Weeeeeeeeeeeell, hate to tell ya but you're probably going to be very confused in Distortion since you skipped over the explanation chapter. And since I'm not sure exactly what you were asking about with Axel, I've no clue what happened. And he says you can have Nate cause he doesn't want him. ^^
Axel: she can have him. i don't want him. she can put up with his delusions and forgetting every fucking important thing you ever tell him and being all... nate like -sideglances-
Misery: Yeeeeeeah... do not miss Nate. Miss Rum, though. And Phillip. =/
Lyric: o.O I don't put up a front.. I'm very honest about a lot of shit. *looks to Mis* Did I put up a front?
Mis: Uhm... *shrugs* Fuck if I remember. Anywhore! ^^ Thanks for the lovely review, babes. <3

Reviewer: AphyPoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/10 04:06 pm Title: It Takes You There

Zydrate comes in a little glass vial!

Reviewer: AphyPoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/10 03:48 pm Title: Fantasien

I read this a while ago but decided to review now !!

Is it possible for ANYONE to stay mad at Lyric for long amounts of time? Cuz I'm thinking its doubtful

Author's Response: Lyric: Course, not. *grins*
rnMisery: *snoooooooooorts*
rnLyric: *glares* Hush, you.
rnMisery: *snickers* What about the time yo-
rnLyric: *slaps his hand over her mouth* Thanks for your review! <3

Reviewer: AphyPoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/10 03:38 pm Title: A Shot in the Night

D':
poor Teddy!!
and yes, since I know him as Teddy, thats how I refer to him.
but but but, who the hell shot him!?!
and and and who was dead next to him!? the random girl?! GAH

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