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Reviewer: THTHTHTHTHTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/12 10:05 pm Title: Dreaming of a Prom Queen

Wait i don't get it, because i'm slow.Will you answer me some questions please?
Did gustav and georg know?
Did Tom know that it was Bill?
And is this some kind of fetish for them? Lol

And btw i noticed it qas bill from the start...lol

Reviewer: happypills Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/12 01:52 am Title: Dreaming of a Prom Queen

wait what

Reviewer: HPFoxxwell Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 03:40 pm Title: Once Upon a Truck Stop...

lol even when they're trying to be bad they're so silly xD

Reviewer: KTwinsLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/11 04:08 pm Title: Dreaming of a Prom Queen

Haha I knew it was Bill almost the whole time, but I thought Tom didn't know. XD So I was still a bit surprised at the end. :D
Nice story. :]

Reviewer: ajavfore Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/10 01:51 am Title: Once Upon a Truck Stop...

Haha I was frowning the whole time until you mentioned the Ninja Turtles and I knew what was going on lol. Tom scareeed me! Bill did know the whole time right? because he didn't seem so scared, haha.

Reviewer: aia157_TH Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/10 08:57 am Title: Dreaming of a Prom Queen

I got it when you said 'her' hair was long and dark :D
this fic is awesome..and sexy- er sorry, sexy hexy ;)

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 07:07 pm Title: Once Upon a Truck Stop...

What?
Oh man, you confused me here.
I kept thinking it was some random guy, but in the back of my head, there was something poking at me: It might be Tom.

And it WAS Tom!

Well done!

Author's Response: ha! If you've read the other one in the series, you'd have realized what was going on; although, it's meant to surprise you as well.rnrnGlad you liked it!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/10 06:47 pm Title: Once Upon a Truck Stop...

I LOVED this :D

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: IntrigueFantasy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/10 05:38 am Title: Once Upon a Truck Stop...

You are always keeping us on our toes.

;)

Author's Response: I try! (hate when I do that thing where I review my story instead of responding! It is very frustrating).

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/10 12:17 pm Title: Once Upon a Truck Stop...

Hehe, that was good. I started getting suspicious - not that it was Tom, but something was up - about halfway through with all the strange dialogue XD

Author's Response: Oh, come on! Even if it hadn't been Tom, I could totally see Bill irritating his kidnapper by not wanting to shut up. Who else could pull that off but Bill?! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Maria Dane-Edwards Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/10 06:12 am Title: Once Upon a Truck Stop...

I expected something nasty and you delivered :D Loved how it was a sexual fantasy of Bill's that Tom gladly tried to fulfil. The 'gun' was a nice prop.

Love (pixi) Myr

Author's Response: I need to get over my weird "sex" thing I've had lately, even this one was more of a fade to black than an actual hardxcore lemon. Maybe I'll try to fix that in the next one. I'm glad you liked it though!

Reviewer: CaMixoxox Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 09:00 pm Title: Once Upon a Truck Stop...

i love it

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: thruthemonsoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 03:31 pm Title: Once Upon a Truck Stop...

This is hot. I liked it a lot.

Author's Response: Aw, Thanks.

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 02:32 pm Title: Once Upon a Truck Stop...

Oh wow I was scared at first, it was so intense!
lol@ prancing around like a peacock with glitter. That was good lulz.
And Bill still thought of his spilled skittles after having a fantasy like that fulfilled O.O

Author's Response: Well, you know Bill. No telling what he'd say and what he wouldn't. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 05:47 am Title: Dreaming of a Prom Queen

Hey Duo!! I liked this story!
Some of the sentences sounded a bit jumbled, like u squeezed one too many actions in, but it's a quick fix, not too distracting.
I think I suspected that something was up w the chick when Tom's friends didnt really agree she was their type, and then I thought about if it was Bill when it was him who left the note... However, I'm a bit confused as to how Bill went to school dressed like a girl and Tom's friends didn't know they were brothers.. or did they? I dont get that.
The funny thing is however, that I still liked this. It was a good easy read. Thanks for writing. :)

Author's Response: Hate to break it to you, but I am not D. Thank God for that! I would go insane if I was that boy. I don't know if he dressed like a girl as much as just wore girl's underwear, and I am sure that Georg and Gustav was well aware of the twincest involved. Then again they say that after the writer writes it, they no longer own it, so it's whatever you want to believe!rnrn<3 Shin (RemusLupinb29;sYou in the Schrei!Box)

Reviewer: bookofnicodemus Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 07:18 am Title: Dreaming of a Prom Queen

Author's Response: hehe role playing or bill in lacy panties?

.... yes.

Author's Response: yes to.. both?

Reviewer: bookofnicodemus Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/10 11:40 am Title: Dreaming of a Prom Queen

AHAHAHAHAHA OH MY GOD

THAT WAS SO AWESOME

(And one of my kinks, so DOUBLE AWESOME AU LAIT)

Author's Response: hehe role playing or bill in lacy panties?

Reviewer: Bill kaulitz is my idol Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/10 08:13 pm Title: Dreaming of a Prom Queen

I got lost at :
Tom’s name left Bill’s lips, and Bill’s name left Tom’s. When Tom finally pulled out, they both laughed.
Was Tom remembering what happened?

Author's Response: I'm not sure I understand your question. They laughed about the insanity of what happened, of how crazy their little game had been. Is that what you wanted to know? The first part, they just called out eachother's names when they came.

Reviewer: QTPieS Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 06:54 am Title: Dreaming of a Prom Queen

haha, nicely set out!! enjoyed it heaps.... um, i figured it out when it read Bill's name.lol, yeah, i'm a little slow ;_; ...or you're just a really good, mysterious writer who accomplished with the story's suspense :)



Author's Response: ^_^ Having Tom/Bill as the main pairing didn't give it away? -is happy it didnt!- I was scared my pairings and banner and such would totally give it away!! -hugs you super hella tight- Im really glad you liked it too!

Reviewer: mischadevi Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 12:41 am Title: Dreaming of a Prom Queen

Nice, that's all I have to say.

Author's Response: Why thank you!

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