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Reviewer: akashwinters Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/08 04:28 pm Title: Understand

Amazing! I really love your writing style...the way you've slowly built things up; nothings rushed.I really like that I find it more realistic and justmore statisfying really. Keep it up!

Author's Response: thank you, and thank you for your review!

Reviewer: sandyclaws Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/08 06:57 am Title: Understand

I sure enjoyed it... it was so beautiful ^^

Author's Response: Thank you sandyclaws, and thank you for your review!

Reviewer: annie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/08 05:15 am Title: Understand

i did more than enjoyed it i loved it!
oh gosh, thats like the girl in Heroes with those skills. woah.
that is soooo goood!
i need really more.

Author's Response: lol thanks!

Reviewer: deepshadows87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/08 02:02 am Title: Understand

I loved it :D the whole concept of Tom using logic and Bill using emotion to control each their powers is just awesome :D

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: Amirathe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/04/08 12:53 am Title: Understand

Ooh, exciting! I wonder why Bill's so jealous though. It seems like they can do anything they want if they just try to do it. Bill just hadn't tried to do those things Tom did.

Anyway, wonderful chapter! Keep writing!

Author's Response: I definitely will, thank you and thank you for your review!

Reviewer: izzap Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/08 09:42 pm Title: Understand

oh my... you make me so happy... i keep smiling at the computer monitor as i read and i can't help it... your writing just pulls those emotions outta me. =] I LOVE it. seriously. and i love how you used the same "i didn't - i don't - go ahead" quote thing at the end like in that one memory... so cute. haha... and tom's power... wow.

you amaze me. honestly... all that out of your head? you're brilliant. =D and i actually cheered when i saw you updated this earlier... i just had to wait until now to get a chance to read it. keep it up--it's amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you izzap, And thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Gisele Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/08 06:01 pm Title: Understand

LOVELI !!

Author's Response: thanki!

Reviewer: lipa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/08 05:54 pm Title: Understand

I didn't saw this coming!!
Bill kissed him because that was requested - but all the kiss was gave only because of the "spell"?

Author's Response: We'll have to see, won't we?

Reviewer: KeepTheFaith Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/08 05:11 pm Title: Understand

I loved it! I would have been scared shitless if all these people were coming at me like zombies in a nightclub! You're the most amasing writer! Is it okay to ask how old you are? 'cause I'm really impressed by all of your work!

Author's Response: Uh... I'm twenty four. lol and I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: DieLetzteHoffnung Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/08 04:44 pm Title: Understand

Its great honey, you know i love your stuff XD

Author's Response: Thanks, and thank you for your review! I was kind of worried, because it's long and it was exhausting to write. I still don't know why... but I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: veestone Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 04:09 pm Title: Stress Fractures

No matter how good twincest is, I will always come back to fics like this. The beginnings are so good. I just want them to find each other over and over again.

As always, Tom gives good head. Or your head is full of Tom. Or you let me get into Tom's head. Something like that. I love Tom.

When Bill says 'Are we going to be able to keep what we can do a secret?' It kind of brings another layer to the whole secrecy thing, not just what they can do but who they are and what they have together. And then the Sidhe have their tiff with humans and that pisses me off because it's like they won't be accepted for who they are in either world. It breaks my heart.

Drunken monop 4lyfe.

Author's Response: 4Sure.

Reviewer: sandyclaws Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 12:45 am Title: Stress Fractures

dun dun dun duuun *dramatic humming*
this is getting interesting *wiggled brows*

Author's Response: lol thanks.

Reviewer: Lilly99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/08 11:41 am Title: Stress Fractures

thank you for updating it was killing me!!!! i love this story!!!! keep going!!! i love it so much!!!

Author's Response: Well, I don't want to kill you. Not really. Thank you, and thank you for your review!

Reviewer: lipa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/08 11:36 am Title: Stress Fractures

“It’s not working.” The only thing staring back at him was Tom’s confused face - lol, so obvious!!

well done!!

Author's Response: lol thank you!

Reviewer: Gisele Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/08 10:48 am Title: Stress Fractures

I just love this story! It's so good! I'm really excited about all this magical stuff, you write about it in a really good way! I love the scene where Tom says he wished the flower was as beautiful as Bill

Author's Response: Thank you, and thank you for your review!

Reviewer: izzap Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/08 09:29 am Title: Stress Fractures

FATALITY. haha... gosh i love this. the magic mixed with the band life is great. and i love how the twins' relationship is gradually coming closer.. so sweet.

^_^ ohhhh i hate faulty guitar straps. and whoever invented monopoly.... all i can say is that they love to torture innocent minds.

great job, amazing. =]

Author's Response: Thank you izzap! I try to make the relationship gradual because I think it's more believeable that way. Thank you for agreeing. :D

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/08 08:41 am Title: Stress Fractures

omg this is way too much good than harry potter. lol
1 - creativy is wonderful
2 - names are very well chosen
3 - the mic thing was sooooo ... wow. lol
4 - the air, water and earth thing are amazing.
jezz..! your one of my favorites right now!!!
this one is so different from the other stories! and thats why its so brilliant!!
god bless j.k.rowling for harry potter creativy =D
the way you made things tie up just great! cause if anyone says: #this is just like harry potter", you can say: no, harry potter is just like this, cause is into MY story! xD
just great!!!! love it!!!!
I cant wait to know their elements!!! i think tom is earth... =.O ... well, I'm just gonna wait for it ^_0

Author's Response: Thank you, and thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/08 06:29 am Title: No One Agreed To This

ok. I am extremely confused with what's going on.
Seems like it'd be a great story if things were explained more clearly. I dont understand what's happening.

On the up side, this is EXTREMELY well written so far. Good work!! =D

Author's Response: Thank you Tamara, but if you continue to read it does become clear. The first chapter was vague for a reason. Thank you and thank you for your review.

Reviewer: deepshadows87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/08 04:44 am Title: Stress Fractures

I loved it, of course you know i always do :D

“Someone who wants your moolah. Come on moneybags. You’ve been leading a charmed life so far.” Georg held out his hand. “Right here.”

That just made me laugh out loud and roll all over the floor. i so pictured it in my head :D

Author's Response: :D Thank you Kat, and thank you for your review!

Reviewer: annie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/08 04:16 am Title: Stress Fractures

that fiction is making me speechless, its like reading a proffesional book, i need more, thats like total fav.

Author's Response: lol thank you, and thank you for your review!

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