Date: 06/22/10 05:56 pm Title: He has to have control.
Man that was sexy
Author's Response: Why thank you!
Date: 06/01/10 06:51 am Title: He has to have control.
Holy shit on a stick! o.O That was so hot it was amazing! I have a thing for Gustav with any of the twins. And this? With Dom!Bill? I nearly came in my pants. So. Damn. Awesome. And just like a dominating scene should be. Sex, yes... but not only about sex. I approve about this, so fucking much. Goes to my favorites, it does. :-D
Author's Response: Wow so I've taken forever to respond to your review because I just wasn't sure how to respond to such genuine praise. I strive for accuracy in my work and I'm glad for you I hit the nail on the head. Thank you for such high praise.
Date: 04/01/09 05:16 pm Title: He has to have control.
I FREAKING LOVED THIS Ö It is great!!!! OMG now I want more GusBill xD Lolz xD You wrote it great! Especially for the first time Ö I didn't think an inexperienced writer (on this topic) would've written this :) Keep up the good work!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Well first of all I’m honored to have a prolific review, review my work *grins* More Gus/Bill hum?! Well see I’m working on a nonrelated t*cest story which comes first but we’ll see which combo I come up with next *winks* I’ve got about 8 stories in the wings *grimaces* we’ll see which one inspires me next…Really, I did great? *blushes* thanks! “I didn't think an inexperienced writer (on this topic) would've written this”, wow that’s so cool! Partly one of the reasons why I put the note on the bottom was I wanted my readers to be unbiased. And what a great compliment from a prolific reviewer *grins* Thanks!
Date: 03/29/09 05:16 pm Title: He has to have control.
It was really good!! really HOT! I love that it was Bill who was in control, it was hot!!! I love your writing!!
Author's Response: Thank you *blushes and smiles shyly all proud of herself* I like a domBill too! *nods* And you “love my writing” *blushes* Thank you!
Date: 03/25/09 12:27 pm Title: He has to have control.
that was honestly really intriguing! if only because i drool at the idea of bill topping gusti ;) but in all seriousness i think you nailed the sex scene yet made it much more than sex.
Author's Response: I kind of have a thing for a dominant Bill, I love the idea that he can take control and make someone beg for it *grins*. I don’t mind him being submissive in some stories but I don’t think it should always be that way. And WOW I made the sex scene much more then sex?! I wish you had elaborated more on this so I could know what it is that I did so well, but I appreciate that you commented at all! Thank you! That’s a great complement!
Date: 03/25/09 05:35 am Title: He has to have control.
AWSOME!!! really really awsome!!
u sure this is ur first time for slash? =0 totally amazing! and u got hte sex part right already! XP ahah
u should definately write more of this! maybe a sequal to this one? or just more random slash? (A)(A)
Author's Response: I got an “awesome” and a “really, really awesome”? O_O wow!!! That’s so cool! Hooray! I’m glad I was worried about getting the slash part wrong but I’m glad that I got such a lovely response! LOL I don’t think I’ll write a sequal but I am in the middle of another slash it’s an unrelated Bill/Tom storyline and I wanted to stretch my preverbal legs on slash writing before I got to that part on that story. Looks like I’m good to go! Thanks for your feedback!
Date: 03/24/09 12:18 pm Title: He has to have control.
Wonderfully done -- I love that it's Gustav who needs the head space and that it's Bill who gives it to him -- he's insanely hot when he's in control ;)
Author's Response: Yeah I made it insanely hot? Well they already were but I wrote something that could be construed as setting them up to be insanely hot? woot!