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Reviewer: Loveluv67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/13 01:03 am Title: 7. Stories

R u ever going to finish this? I hope you do I Want to see how Adler pulls the twins the part nd how they come back together ^^ I think this is a new view on the twins relationship. D that it's really interesting

Reviewer: murdermeloud Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/11 06:26 pm Title: 7. Stories

PLZZZZZ keep writing this fic! i'm hooked!!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 02:07 pm Title: 7. Stories

Awww, Tom! You are giving him more ammunition than he needs right now. He's got Bill right where he wants him, but omg, what painful things for Bill to say to him!!!

Author's Response: The best part is coming ;) The MURDER OOOO. But I'm too lazy to type that up xD <3

Reviewer: vixxen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 12:36 am Title: 7. Stories

First of all THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR CONTINUING IT! I already told you how much I loved it, and the new chapter just confirmed it, amplified even. Until now it was obvious that the twins are in bad terms, but to what an extent... the hate on Bill's part is so shocking, but despite his hurtful confession Tom still treats him as his beloved little brother, is protective of him... I'm curious to see Bill's reaction to the paper.

To tell you the truth, I was a little confused at Bill sitting in Adler's lap. I feel like I'm missing something. I should probably reread the entire story from the beginning, it's definitely time to refresh my memory.

Author's Response: I'm confused by that as well. I don't even remember writing this DD: I'm gonna be even more confused when I posted the rest *from what I browsed in my journal, it's all messed up* but idk, I'ma just roll with it xD

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/09 04:37 am Title: 6. Memories

good luck, please just give us a happy ending eventually. ;)

Reviewer: Destiny95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/09 04:09 am Title: 6. Memories

Ooww, I can't wait to the creepy stuff comes... :'D
Write more, this story's awsomee! xD

Reviewer: vixxen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/09 11:03 am Title: 6. Memories

I'm getting a Saw vibe, or something like this. There's like this constant feeling that something messed up is going to happen, it totally has me on edge. Really, really interesting!

Author's Response: Haha, yay that was totally what I was trying to go for. The next chapter starts revealing a bit more of what this place really is, and how soon that people will start...disappearing. *cackles* Thanks so much for reviewing, I'm glad I caught your interest with this.

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/09 12:42 am Title: 6. Memories

lolz wat R u planning? update soon plz thx=]

Author's Response: Haha it will soon be revealed! Thanks so much for your review <3

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/09 12:03 am Title: 6. Memories

Ooooo. Getting intense. More more please. :) I've been a good girl, I promise I diserve it. :3

Author's Response: I have about 12 pages written in my writing notebook that I need to type up so no worries, more will definitely come soon! <3

Reviewer: himisoko Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/09 09:22 pm Title: 6. Memories

I love this fic (and I hope it ends happy, creepy horror stuff and all) but one thing confuses me: what exactly are they supposed to be doing? Just sitting around all day, relaxing, soaking up the atmosphere? Or will this all become clearer in the next chapters?

Author's Response: Well, that definitely will be revealed in the next chapter when the first writing challenge comes up. It is meant to be a creative retreat but the 'coordinator' has plans for them to be more creative than they were really planning on xD If that makes any sense? <3

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/22/09 07:33 pm Title: 6. Memories

...can I like, totally hang unto that image of Tom hugging Bill's pillow for comfort?! *whimpers* I'm scared of where you're going, because it's where I would go too.

Author's Response: Aw, go ahead XD but yes, I'm scared too *cackles*

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/09 09:33 am Title: 5. God

Oh no. I gotta find out what happens next. Mooorrrre.

Author's Response: (: Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 10:06 pm Title: 5. God

This is great...and a completely new idea. I really like it, can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: (: thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: sarahyellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 09:41 pm Title: 2. Transportation

You shouldn't make fun of jehovah's witnesses. If you have a personal prejudice, that's one thing, but don't assume everyone else shares it.

Author's Response: I wasn't intending to make fun of it and I honestly have no prejudice about it. Sorry that it came off that way.

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 08:50 pm Title: 1. Adventures

*flops down in a heap*

I know... :-(

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 08:44 pm Title: 5. God

plz update soon thx so much=]]]]]]

Author's Response: LOL will do! Thanks so much for reviewing!!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 08:41 pm Title: 1. Adventures

I know!

I just...gotta get over it.

Soon.

*wants twins intact*



Author's Response: Aw. Can't make any promises at the moment! :D

Reviewer: slicedtopieces Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 08:31 pm Title: 5. God

Just hurry up and fuck already bill and tom! Lolz. I really like where you're going with this. It's the perfect mix of angst and suspense.

Author's Response: (: Thanks so much for the review! And I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far, and I promise, all of the warnings and pairings will be used, no worries ;)

Reviewer: spilled milk Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 08:21 pm Title: 1. Adventures

lol i just have no fucking clue what they're doing! where are they? and why? and what the fuck is going on? like lol, my mind is blown every time i read this because it makes no sense to me!

Author's Response: LOL, well it hasn't been revealed where exactly they are yet, but they're at a farm for this 'retreat', and I assume it's far away so no one can hear screaming >:D and so far, the only thing going on is craziness. I know it's all over the place, but maybe it'll clear up later XD I swear, this isn't my fault, sirpus asked me to do a horror and I'm just making it up as I go ;X

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 08:15 pm Title: 1. Adventures

Exactly.

That asshole is gonna fracture their bond, cause he's gonna play with their emotions for each other to bend them to his will.

THAT is what scares me. 



Author's Response: He sure will ;) But that's the beauty of this whole thing *0*

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