Date: 04/14/09 06:36 am Title: Chapter six
Oh no way, just the epilogue left? *whines* Well, I always knew Tom was in love with the real Bill, not the mystery that was Miss Elizabeth. I was happy when Tom got that new horse, because as much as it hurts losing one; thinking you'll never be able to have one and loving it again, I think Tom needed a horse. I can imagine him on one, and he is very hot. ;) So, lol, about my new story; no, it's not very fluffy at all. It's not as angsty as the prequel, though. XD Anyway, this update has been a lovely one, and I am looking forward to the epilogue. :)
Author's Response: goddess, I am so so sorry for the late reply to this -.- I've seen pictures of Tom and Bill riding and believe me, they look so cute ^^ and I think you're right, he did need one! thank you so much for reviewing me Becca (despite my epic fail of responding, guh) love <3
Date: 04/14/09 05:37 am Title: Chapter six
*jumping around in happiness for the revelation* It's cliche but I don't care cuz it's ao sweet and I always love a happy ending.
The bedroom scene triggers nosebleed, not only there's sex, but the two are so innocent it's almost like underage erotica.
But will the stable boy get though the father for bill's hand in marriage?
Author's Response: yeah, it's cliche, I know ,p but not the entire fic, right? lol, I live for the happy endings, love ^^ thank you so much for reviewing, so sorry for the late reply!
Date: 04/14/09 05:36 am Title: Chapter six
*jumping around in happiness for the revelation* It's cliche but I don't care cuz it's ao sweet and I always love a happy ending.
The bedroom scene triggers nosebleed, not only there's sex, but the two are so innocent it's almost like underage erotica.
But will the stable boy get though the father for bill's hand in marriage?
Author's Response: yeah, it's cliche, I know ,p but not the entire fic, right? lol, I live for the happy endings, love ^^ thank you so much for reviewing, so sorry for the late reply!
Date: 04/14/09 04:44 am Title: Chapter six
nah, not cliche. though i knew t from the first chapter. =) i love this story, i cant wait for the final explanation. keep up the great work!
Author's Response: good, glad that you think so ^^ hope you will like the final explanation and how everything turns out in the end ,)
Date: 04/14/09 02:28 am Title: Chapter six
yay
i was almost sure that Bill is Miss Elizabeth
i'm so happy for them
Author's Response: hihi, thank you so much ^^ I'm glad you're happy for them! much love
Date: 04/14/09 01:03 am Title: Chapter six
yayness! i had figured bill was miss elizabeth, but on ecan never be sure about these things. i've been tricked before. that was cute and very sweet, we will get to find out why bill dresses as a girl right? i hope so. also, will jorg approve of tom marrying him? despite being head of the stables one day, he is technically still the hired help. i suppose i'll find out next week.
Author's Response: lol, I've been trying my hardest to keep it a secret, but I figured a lot of people would get the picture early on ,p cute and sweet ^^ it makes me very happy that you think that! I hope you feel that your questions were answered in the last chapter! sorry for replying so late!
Date: 04/14/09 12:57 am Title: Chapter six
Oh my god. I think this has been the first fanfiction story that had kept me interested, without skipping chapters. Your writing is truly amazing =)
Author's Response: OO it is? wow, that means a lot to hear! I'm very happy you stuck to the story and got through it, that makes me smile ^^ thank you
Date: 04/14/09 12:07 am Title: Chapter six
I think I'm the only dumb block who didn't try to link Bill and Miss Elizabeth as the same person, even though there were so many nagging suspicions. xD So my reaction was probably the same as Tom's.
Well, I've always liked the thought of Bill in a dress. Now I'm just wondering why the family does it, as well.
Can't wait for your epilogue!
Author's Response: you're not dumb ,p I've been doing everything in my power not to let people see that they were the same person and it makes me soooooooooo extremely happy that I at least managed with a few ,) it would have been a total bummer if everyone had just seen the whole mystery from the first chapter -.- thank you so much for reviewing me, I hope you know how much it means to me! and I'm really sorry for responding so late, I've been crazy busy
Date: 04/13/09 10:56 pm Title: Chapter six
So I was right! You brat! Lol, leading me on like that, making me dout myself! This chapter was so nice though, and I've been put through hell by that doll story, don't get me wrong, it's amazing, but you gentle, nice, calm, comforting writing is a huge relief right now.
I really want to know the story of why Bill dresses like a girl though.
Also, Pearl is amazing, I got all these images of magestic horses, romantic I suppose but none the less...
Author's Response: lol, well, I had to make you doubt yourself, or else it wouldn't have been a surprise ^^ the doll story is killing me, too, I love reading it, but you know how I handle big amounts of angst...I don't ,p Pearl is inspired by a horse at the stable where I go riding, and I've always loved dapple horses so I wanted him to be like that ^^ good goddess, this reply is really late, and I'm so sorry about that! thank you so much for always reviewing me, girl, and for asking questions and not being scared to tell me what you think! I haven't written you in ages, but I'm going to! I have my exams next week and then a couple of more papers to write and projects to finish and after that I'm off ^^ love you <3
Date: 04/13/09 08:15 pm Title: Chapter six
Eeeeee oh my goodness. Everything about this chapter was heartwarming.
Author's Response: hihi ^^ thanks darling <3
Date: 04/13/09 08:00 pm Title: Chapter six
Yes! I am so happy this happened. But, is this whole marriage thing going to work out? And why does Bill's family dress him up as a girl? I have no idea what's coming next. I'm so happy Bill accepted Tom after waiting for, like, YEARS.
Author's Response: sorry for the amazingly late reply! I guess by now you've read the last chapter and got an answer to your questions ,) thank you so much for reviewing <3 much love
Date: 04/13/09 07:49 pm Title: Chapter six
WHAHAHAHAHA I knew IT!!!!! I feel like Nancy Drew oh yeah!! GOOOO ME! Awesome chapter by the way =D
Author's Response: aw, dammnit ,p and here I was trying to write a good enough story to fool you ^^ thanks darling
Date: 04/13/09 07:38 pm Title: Chapter six
I KNEW IT!!! This chapter just made me so happy. While I love angst as much as the next girl, sometimes I just want nice and romantic and sweet. I'm so loving this story!
Author's Response: lol ^^ nice, romantic and sweet is love! I'm sorry this response comes so late, thank you so much for reviewing this, it means so much to me !!!
Date: 04/13/09 07:27 pm Title: Prologue
Uh! Lamesauce! The thingy cut off my review...
As I was saying:
Loved the bedroom scene b/c the boys seem to permanently be stuck in bunks or hotel beds. Them on a mansion bed was adorable/hottt and ily for that, lol. Can't wait for next Monday, Luce :)
Author's Response: aw, bad thingy ,p well, I'm very happy you came back to write it over! it was so odd writing them in an oldstyle english bedroom oO this is why I love AU so much, it gives me the freedom to really explore with the scenery ,p hope you'll like what I'm posting today, it'll be the final explanation to everything and I really want it to turn out good! much love <3
Date: 04/13/09 07:25 pm Title: Chapter six
I liked it all buuut
I really loved the bed scene
Author's Response: ^^ that makes me happy to hear! thanks addy <3
Date: 04/13/09 07:18 pm Title: Chapter six
*is so full of squee she can't leave a better review....continues squeeing that she's sure would be heard in Germany*
Author's Response: I wonder what the boys think that sound is xD thanks girl
Date: 04/13/09 07:12 pm Title: Chapter six
I KNEW IT!!!!!
I said chapters and chapters ago that Bill and Miss Elizabeth were in fact only one and the same person ahah! I'm so proud of myself for having discovered it before Tom did! XD
Author's Response: lol, yeah, you were right! thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 04/13/09 06:46 pm Title: Chapter six
Aww, I loved it so much when Tom told Elizabeth that he couldn't accept her gifts anymore. That was beautiful and must have felt wonderful for Bill / Elizabeth .. lol .. well, you know what I mean.
I really hoped that he would declare his love for Bill, and not for Elizabeth, before finding out they were the same person.
But what a bonus for him, eh?! Lol.
And just love to Saki, Dunja and Tobi. What a wonderful family they have been :)
Can't wait for the epilogue, and I hope they are allowed to marry!
This story has been amazing
Author's Response: ugh, sorry for the late reply! and yes, I do believe that it felt wonderful for Bill when Tom said those things, I know I would have melted were it me ^^ lol, and yes, what a bonus xD thank you so much for this, you know it means a lot to me!
Date: 04/13/09 06:44 pm Title: Chapter six
Thank You!!!! You made a Billinadressaddict very very very happy!!!!! I love this story and there were some tears in my eyes when Tom proposed Bill. Oke, I'll admit I was crying like a baby. Great job, really. I hope your internet gets well soon btw.
Author's Response: lol, I'm very pleased to have made a Billinadressaddict happy ^^ I'm sorry this reply is coming really late, by the way! thank you so, so, so much for reaidnd and reviewing this, and I'm so happy you liked it! much love
Date: 04/13/09 06:39 pm Title: Chapter six
Holy moses. I think I have NEVER melted like this because of the fluff. I just... I'm all...goo now. What the heck did you put in it, to make me all mushy? *_* Melted sugar? No. I think that's what's pouring out of my laptop right now...
Ah, I can'tWAIT to read more ^^ *is hyped up*
Author's Response: hihi ^^ you make me so happy! Bill/Tom fluff, it can melt anyones brains ,p thank you so much for this, and sorry for the late reply