Date: 04/11/09 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 6: Secret
I thought it was freaking amazing! *dances around* I KNEW it was Geo! HA!
Author's Response: XD Well, of course it was Geo :P I am so glad you like it :D lol. I'll try and update soon. :)
Date: 04/11/09 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 6: Secret
I think this is amazing!!!!!!!!! its wonderfully written! i think this story is simply fantastic i love it and you leave me wanting for more! Great Story!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it :) I have never tempter to write something like that before, well the part with Bill and Tom watching. :P
Date: 04/11/09 11:25 am Title: Chapter 6: Secret
Wow...gets better and better with every chapter, gotta love a good non-related twincest story.
Author's Response: I'm glad you think it's good. :) I have a hard time with writing certain stuff, so the ending might have been a little weird.
Date: 04/11/09 04:59 am Title: Chapter 6: Secret
Do you know what I always wondered about?
Why don't italics go the other way? Instead of heading right, why not left?
That was random, yes.
I thought it was pretty good.
Update faster. pretty please.
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was good. I never wrote anything like the last part before. lol. Now that you mention the italics, yeh, i wonder why they are always heading right. :P I'll try and update sooner.
Date: 04/11/09 03:35 am Title: Chapter 6: Secret
what an interesting twist! keep it comin!
Author's Response: It was a bit different then what i originally planed. But I'm glad you like it :) I'll try and update sooner
Date: 04/07/09 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masque Noir
holyt moly UPDATE PLZZ im totaly hooked with this story
Author's Response: I should have the next chapter done soon, since i have a 5 day weekend :D . lol. Keep a look out for Chapter 6. :P
Date: 04/05/09 03:05 am Title: Chapter 5: Masque Noir
XDDD Bill's reaction... gotta love it.
Can I just tell you how special I felt when I saw my name on the dedication list? XD
This was a really good chapter!! But darn it, cos I figured that they'd meet in the club, but I didn't expect you to END the chapter with that! XD I guess I shoulda known, right? You've always been good with cliffhangers :D
I can't wait for the next chatper :D
Author's Response: Cliffhangers are always the best :P I am glad you felt special lol, I hope to have the next chapter up soon, so keep a look out for chapter 6. :D
Date: 04/04/09 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masque Noir
omgish
Author's Response: O.O..... DUDE! LOL. AWESOME REVIEW :D love it :D :P
Date: 04/04/09 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masque Noir
OH OH OH OH MY GOD!!!!!! AHHH THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE WHAT JUST HAPPENED!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I will try and write soon. I am glad you like :D
Date: 04/03/09 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masque Noir
oooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh crap! what's going to happen now!?!? I NEED to know!!!!
Author's Response: lol, i'll try and update soon so you can see what happens next :P
Date: 04/03/09 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Tom
Oh come on! Very handsome, long brown hair, lips to die for and gorgeous eyes? You can take out the long brown hair part, and I'd STILL know it was Geo XD *drools over him*
Author's Response: lol haha, I'm guessing you're a Georg fan. :P I like Tom more :P XD
Date: 04/03/09 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masque Noir
Happy birthday to your brother.
The wait for this chapter was totally worth it. I really liked it.
Do me a fave and UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!
s'il vous plait!
Author's Response: I am glad que tu l'aime....haha that's my frenglish. :P I will try and update soon :D
Date: 04/03/09 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masque Noir
Ooh dun dun dunnnnn, getting good, I can just imagine Bill shitting himself discovering his dance partner was Tom.
Author's Response: You have to wait and see what Bill will do, and Tom. :P I'll try and update soon.
Date: 04/03/09 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masque Noir
OMG>>>plzplzpzlpzlpzl update sooonnnnnnnnnnnnn add me urrutiaashlee@yahoo.com disasterupahead@msn.com
Author's Response: Which one do i add. lol. Mine is m.m.n.101@hotmail.com if you want to add me cuz i donno when i'll be on. :P I is glad you like it :D I'll try and update soon.
Date: 04/03/09 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masque Noir
WOW I wasnt expecting that! KEEP IT COMIN!
Author's Response: Will do :P I'll start writing soon. Gonna watch Buffy now :P Keep watch for Chappie 6.
Date: 04/03/09 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masque Noir
DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNN!!!! LOVE IT! Want more.....NOW!!! *hops around like a flea* Lemme guess? Sexy brunette = Georg?
Author's Response: OMG you just reminded me of mah friend at the *hops around like a flea* part. :P We are playing Rock Band and are totally hyper.... XD :D I IS GLAD YOU LIKE IT !!!!! XD .... as for the Georg being the brunette....we'll see :P
Date: 03/31/09 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 4: Who's hot, Who's not
OMG update plz love this storyy
Author's Response: I am glad you like it :D i already started writing the next chapter. It might take bit because i think it's going to be longer then the others ones. Keep a look out for Chapter 5: Masque Noir :P
Date: 03/31/09 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 4: Who's hot, Who's not
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!! R U SERIOUS!!!!!!! AHHHHH! IM SOOO LOVING THIS STORY!!!!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZZZZZ WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LMAO, OMG i just LOVEEEEE your reviews XD. I will try and write faster.
Date: 03/31/09 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 4: Who's hot, Who's not
I knew it tomi is the blue jay
Author's Response: lol, and i try so hard to hide who it was :P
Date: 03/31/09 04:35 am Title: Chapter 4: Who's hot, Who's not
1)finish this story then write the other one.
2) update this one quick, if you do decide to write another story.
3) Yes the title does intrigued me.
Bill and Tom are going to run into each other, whether they are dancing or at the bar, because they are indeed going to same club, which is Masque Noir, also known in English as Black Mask.
Author's Response: Good gueses :P You will find out if you'RE right when i post the next chappie. :)