Date: 02/12/11 05:40 am Title: You Have No Rights
Loved it!
Date: 07/08/09 12:42 pm Title: You Have No Rights
woah, this was good...so sad, but i wanna find out what happens! update soon plz, ^.^
Date: 02/03/09 09:45 pm Title: You Have No Rights
Ooh, can you say "bastard guy"? I can't wait to read more once I'm not grounded!
Date: 02/03/09 03:31 pm Title: You Have No Rights
sorry this isnt that good a story.. i have some hints if you want to get peoples eye? make it longer chapter *you got kick ass idea otherwise i wouldnt have even clicked to read it* but short chapters dont keep attention long. i wanna see more ideas ok so keep writting
Author's Response: I know what you mean but i couldn't make it that long cause my dad was like "SELENA GET OFF THE COMPUTER YOU HAVE SCHOOL TOMORROW!" and i was like "dammit". So the later chapter's will be longer! Danke for the review though!!!
Date: 02/03/09 03:12 pm Title: You Have No Rights
ommmg!
you have to continue.
this rocks (:
Author's Response: thanke you, i am glad you liked it!