Date: 04/29/09 02:37 am Title: fight me. NEALY fuck me.
Dude... Awesomeness!! UPDATE SOON DUDE!
Author's Response: alrighty! I am feeling the love! lol.rnI will try. I have to update my other story first though :|
Date: 04/22/09 11:38 pm Title: fight me. NEALY fuck me.
This is good. Update soon please?
Author's Response: thank you :) oh god, I'll try! :D
Date: 04/10/09 12:58 am Title: fight me. NEALY fuck me.
this storie is good really! it go an amazing plot! n i think the summary is okay
Author's Response: Wowza. Thank you! :D and thanks. I changed it though.. before.. it sucked! rofl.
Date: 04/02/09 04:06 pm Title: fight me. NEALY fuck me.
damn girl, where've you been? my hair grew a whole 2 inches since the last time i saw/read from you. *pouts* it's been depressing. well, not entirely, but more boring is like it.
anyway, this is new, i was expecting blind leading a blind, but i guess i got something else in stead! a whole lot a prostitution is what i got. and might i add, you do a swell job of writting it!!!XDXD
i really like the beginning where tom and bill are fighting and then bill is on top of tom on the couch and tom is all like, " if this were anyother situation, it would have been arousing. but not this time." teehee, i was laughing.
and it appears bill is in that phase in his life when one has to admitt they're in love with a relative....BAHAHAHA i hope that kinda made you laugh....i dont know why i wrote that AAANYWAAYYY so talk to meh. where have you been, what've you been doin' ma homegirl.
Oh, in response to the whole "help w/da summery thing" i shall try to help you with it. you'll see in another review obviously!!XDXD
kisses, emma
Author's Response: Ive been bored... home work... being a lazy slug. Thats were Ive been. LOL! Really? My hair lost 5 inches! (cut it). Yeah I actually it has been boring. Because I can't talk to you unless YOU review... AND!! you should really write the story you were planning too!rnrnI'm still looking for an inspiration... because each chap has been based on things I see or think about or just a little blas of imagination but my brain has shut off for some reason towards that story.. and OMG! I came up with like 10 story ideas and I really want to write them :P but Ill try to update that as fast as I can! and Thank you love! rnAHAHAH! no it did make me laugh the second time I read it. I'm just like... woooowww... this is psychotic! I LOVE it! rofl! rnI've been everywhere and no where. Rofl. I have been in a lot of drama between friends but I made new ones and lost some too. I don't mind it really. And I've been doing projects... failing in math :| and just doing photography and painting. OH OH OH! news! My painting got featured on this th fan site. Tokiohotelrocks.com The shadow paintings! :D so it was really cool! AND I had the literacy test today :|rnHOW BOUT YOU LOVE?rnoh THANK YOU!rn<3rnrn
Date: 04/02/09 03:13 pm Title: fight me. NEALY fuck me.
hmmmmm interesting
write more pplease
Author's Response: I'll try to as soon as possible :D
Date: 04/02/09 11:52 am Title: fight me. NEALY fuck me.
Sorry, I suck at summaries ^^' But I love this story!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: I beg to differ, I've read your stories and I've see you summaries. they are amazing.rnIts still a wonder why a write such as you self would be interested in newb twincest persons stories. ROFLrn<3
Date: 04/02/09 11:17 am Title: fight me. NEALY fuck me.
Oh my holy crud~ i love this story, andi will atempt with a summary :D
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! xD
Author's Response: Sweet. Thank you!rnAwesome. If you have any summary idea you can either reply to this OR email me? Please?rnILL TRY!! AHHH! :D
Date: 04/02/09 11:11 am Title: Hello Dear Brother
fuck! I love the story :D
and i love the title.
"you can hate me after you pay me.."(cobra starship kicks ass :P)
Fuck i love that songg! and i am in lovw with this story too :D
Author's Response: I fucking love you compliment! :Drn(They REALLY do! They are coming to Toronto in may.... but I cant go! its sold out! :| )rnActually, I may use that line in the next chapter (chap 3) :D
Date: 04/02/09 10:40 am Title: fight me. NEALY fuck me.
WOW!
im actually lovin this story so far.
WRITE MORE
Author's Response: Wowza. Thank you!rnrnI will write more! and I will try to make it as real and psychotic as I can!
Date: 04/02/09 09:30 am Title: fight me. NEALY fuck me.
i am impressed,i really like it!go on with it!
Author's Response: I feel really accomplished that people actually took care into this!rnthank you so much! <3
Date: 04/02/09 08:35 am Title: fight me. NEALY fuck me.
I love it ^^
great story
Author's Response: Thank you love.rnp.s I love you username!
Date: 04/02/09 01:21 am Title: fight me. NEALY fuck me.
I wonder if bill will ever crack...keep it comin!
Author's Response: maaaaayyybbbeee. Or maybe he will and deny it. :D
Date: 04/02/09 12:13 am Title: fight me. NEALY fuck me.
WOW!! That was really cool!! But I think Tom should forget about Bill...u.u
Even if that breaks my heart deeply!!
Author's Response: SWEET! :D Yeah me too.. but then it wont be a twincest thingy majic. ROFL.rnBut I will have a little fun with other OMC and OFC. Any requests?
Date: 04/02/09 12:08 am Title: fight me. NEALY fuck me.
OH!!! I need more... please.... Soon...lol Awesome chapi... i loved it
Author's Response: Awesome! Thank you for needing more! I feel really developed. :Drn<3
Date: 04/01/09 11:29 pm Title: fight me. NEALY fuck me.
i suck at helping and summarys. but if u could please update soon i would loveyou forever.
Author's Response: Its fine :) I suck at writing summarys too :) rnI will try my best with all the culminating and projects :| rnthank you for reading this!
Date: 03/03/09 01:22 am Title: Hello Dear Brother
My god! Keep this uup keep this uuup keep thiis uuup!!! ^^ i'm liking this a lot!
Author's Response: ahahahahha! i'm actually working on the chapter... well quarter up. any suggestions? because im open to anything. If you have an idea email me :P
Date: 02/25/09 10:00 am Title: Hello Dear Brother
xD I liked it.
Author's Response: Woot woot! <3
Date: 01/27/09 01:32 pm Title: Hello Dear Brother
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!
this first chapter alone has endless smut in it. ich liebe es!!XDXD
it wuz funny cuz i wuz reading over the pairings and warning and other shit like that before i read the story, right. and so i was, needless to say, quite shocked trying to keep up with it all. it looks complicated at first,bill/omc, bill/ofc, tom/bill, tom/omc, etc. but i'm sure youll pull it off.
anyway, on to more pressing matters (bahahaha)....it's meeeee!
where have you been? youve been gone a while (or maybe my mind is really fucked up)
oh! ok, i feel like an idiot for never saying this in other reviews but i noticed you changed the banner for your other story and i have to say i really like it. the whole slightly fadded effect is great. and the fact that you changed the tittle too. your other one, in my opinion had to many of these (....) and these (" "). dude i feel like an idiot for not knowing what they're called. well, anyway i hope to talk to you soon (ie- read your response. lol)XDXD
Author's Response: I KNOW! rnI was so surprised when I wrote this chapter.... I kept on asking my self... "tara, did you actually write this...?" This is not my nature....so it felt SO awkward lmao! but yeah I wrote this because I wanted practice, if I wanted to write a half-sexy scene in my other story :Drnyeah i do that too. (incase there is a character death :P ) Yeah I know! It is really complicated, and IM trying to keep up with it. but the OMC and OFC with bill are like his potention gf and bf :) and the OMC for tom is well.. his clients :P rnThanks. I will try not to disappoint :Drnrnno no! i HAVE been gone for quite a long time! I will explain in my ending chapter notes for the new chapter of my other story! WHICH.. SURPRISE! it will be updated today! :Drnahahahahaha, yeah thanks! I know! I really hated the other titles. and agreed to many of them. Yeah I forgot too. LOL! It was potential anyways, because I wasn't expecting like over 1000 reads... :| :D BUT ANYWAYS! it is nice talking to you! rnLOL! <3
Date: 01/26/09 06:06 am Title: Hello Dear Brother
Awww, prostitute!Tom! So hot! Usually Bill's the slutty one, but this is nice. I'm looking forward the next chapter. Update soon!
Author's Response: I agree! It is very hot!! Thank you! I try to make them different :)
Date: 01/24/09 08:04 pm Title: Hello Dear Brother
i like the concept of your story but at some parts it was confusing cause u kept putting "he said" or "he yelled", just use Tom and Bill's names more and i think it would be better! but i like the story still, keep up teh awesom work! :]
Author's Response: thank you and sorry for the confusion! The story is written from Tom's POV, so yes I will use Bills name more if its less confusing for reader! again thank you! <3