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Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/10 11:56 am Title: Chapter 3

Ah what a perfect ending :) They are so perfect together. I loved this entire fic, magical!

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/10 11:35 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow, Bill in those stocking, Bill NOT in the stockings. This was amazing. And that art is fabulous!

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/10 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

ohmygosh that's some of the hottest smut I've ever read o.O

Reviewer: Kulta Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/09 08:39 am Title: Chapter 3

:O

Reviewer: Rockrchickk65 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 3

"If I come in… ten seconds, please don’t judge me,"

loll. of course we won't judge you, TOmi.

ohmygod, you guys killed me with this story. it was justt pure incredible hotness from start to finish. I love you. No, seriously I do.

Marry me?

Reviewer: Rockrchickk65 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 2

Tom knows it’s fucked up, Bill isn’t even a real girl.

lol, what is he a fake one ? XD

“Oh god,” Tom murmurs. It’s the ultimate mind fuck. Of course Bill doesn’t have tits. Of course he’s just a flat-chested boy, but at that moment, Tom truly thinks Bill has the best tits he’s ever seen.

lmaoo. the phrasing of this is just so awesome. "it's the ultimate mind fuck" lol yur brilliant.

And then...

He’s an amazing fuck, all right, but he can do fuckin’ magic with his mouth.

Guh. *shudders* I think I'll go take a shower now.

Mm this wass yummy yummy hotness. *licks lips* Loveeee it.

Reviewer: sodapop90 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/09 02:50 am Title: Chapter 3

ok, loved the hole custom stuff, really diggin' it!

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/09 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 3

Wow, ... This story is amazing!!

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/09 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 2

Shit! This story is so hott...

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/09 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lol, this is a pretty tight story.

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/09 11:55 am Title: Chapter 3

He never actually sleeps with his one night stands.
But this wasn’t a one night stand, and it’s not just a groupie. It’s his baby brother Bill and he’s fucked him twice now. – oh my the repercussions are starting to hit!

Bill looks content, snuggled deep in the covers. He looks happy, relaxed… satisfied. – well he should after last night!

Tom’s groin aches, heat flaring up in his belly, and he has to leave the room. – ha ha and *grimace* has to leave the room this does not bode well for Bill.

He scrubs at his skin, suddenly so conscious of how Bill had been all over him.
How he’d been all over Bill. - *groans* oh this is not going to end well!

i cant do this anymore we cant see each other again – oh god! Through a text message?! OMG!

Tom smiles a little then, realizes that his brother doesn’t understand. Realizes that Bill doesn’t know they’re still playing, that he’s still the groupie. – what? What does this mean? Tom’s playing? Or is he serious?

He slowly gets dressed, wondering if he did the right thing. Groupies can get clingy, it’s best to let go of them before it gets too intense. – Bill-groopie or just Bill?

What the hell is he expecting? He doesn’t even really know what he wants. He just knows it involves Bill. – does he think that Bill will comfort him now that he’s broken up with him? Or is he just checking to make sure he’s ok?

Bill’s face drops and he closes his eyes. "I know, you told me."
"No, I broke it off with her," he says. He reaches a hand out and smoothes it down Bill’s chest. "Because I found someone else. Someone better." – oh ok I wasn’t sure. Yeah!

Tom can only laugh at this and kiss Bill again. God, he can’t get enough of him. – um yum!

Tom groans. Now that Bill’s being Bill there will be no end to the teasing. This makes Tom warm inside, he’s going to get his brother full on. – fun! *smiles*

"My girl from last night could do that with one finger."
Bill narrows his eyes. "She was a slut."
"Big slut… I liked it," Tom replies. "No panties."
"What a whore." – ah ha ha ha so cute

Tom’s stomach plummets, how can someone be so devastating? – awh so sweet!

letting Bill take him so deep that he kisses Tom’s hipbones. – uhhh oh god I love that description!

"Your dick?" Bill smiles wide and sucks Tom down. Tom’s hips rock up and he thrusts into Bill’s mouth with a ragged groan. - *stomach flip flops* uh oh god hot!

No girl has ever made Tom tremble before, not even close, and Bill’s got him begging. – mmmhhh I love it when Tom begs though.

"Oh, fuck, sorry," Tom says breathlessly, but Bill’s lips twitch up and his tongue laps at his lips. "Ugh, Bill, you liked that."
Bill smears the come off his chin and sucks at his fingers. "You gave me a facial, Tom."
"You liked it," Tom says again. "Fuck, get up here." – mmmhhh messy twincest! Mmmhhh yummy

He wants to deal with Bill, just Bill. The thought almost ends him. He licks down the center of Bill’s chest and drags his hands against Bill’s nipples. – ok I’ll deal with this bit as coherently as I possibly can ready? Uuuhhh mmhhh aaahh uh!

Bill’s face reddens and he moves his hands, all cockiness gone, and his hard, slender cock is exposed. "Oh god," Bill says. Tom wraps a hand around Bill’s thigh and beckons him closer. "Tomi, don’t look at it." - *giggles* he shy NOW? he’s had Tom’s dick up his ass and he’s fucked him three ways from Sunday and he’s shy NOW? *chuckles*

“Oh fuck, I forgot about that, oh Tom,” Bill moans, writhing uncontrollably just from the simple touch. – he forgot? *giggles*

“Beg for it,” Tom replies quietly, positioning his finger at Bill’s hole. - *grins* evil! Just evil!

Bill is a mess; he’s not in control anymore so he’s completely submissive under Tom now. - *grins*

Bill barks out a laugh. "Tom, I’m not some horny little groupie you can just fuck whenever you want."
Tom lifts off of Bill, looks down at him and caresses his cheek. "Then what are you?"
"I’m your horny little brother you can just fuck whenever you want," Bill says. - *smiles*

"And just so you know, Bill, for future reference…"
"Hmm?"
He kisses Bill’s lips. "You don’t have to knock." - *grins* awh! *bounces in seat* lovely super hot sex! Super cute. I love it when Bill cross dresses! I love it when they pretend Bill is a girl. I love it when Tom decides to break it off I was so worried. But then it worked out! Hooray!

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/09 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 2

“You had some girl in your room,” Bill says. - *cracks up* awesome!

Tom watches Bill drag his suitcase away, his eyes focusing on Bill’s ass. He clears his throat and looks away, trying not to think about how he knows exactly what Bill’s ass feels like. He’s horny, he must be. He thinks about all the hot girls Georg was talking about. They’ll be at the club tonight for sure. - *grins* I think Tom lost and Bill won!

Tom’s mouth is still hanging open. Bill’s in all black, slinky as fuck in a tight t-shirt and a tiny pleated black skirt. It’s so tiny that Tom can see Bill’s ass. And under the skirt, Bill’s wearing black thigh high stockings. – omg so hot!

Bill grins. “I know that look. You’re just going to toss me back on the bed and ruin all of my plans, aren’t you?” – hot!

Bill slowly bends at the waist a little, just enough so that his skirt lifts and Tom has a clear view of the bottom of his ass. Tom swallows hard. “Nice,” he manages, because yes, Bill has a really nice ass. – *smiles* mmmhh nice!

OMG I Love the stalking!

Bill wrinkles his nose prettily and gives the stocking a little pull. Tom draws his a sharp breath. Bill is teasing him in ways that no girl ever has. – hot!

“Oh god,” Tom murmurs. It’s the ultimate mind fuck. Of course Bill doesn’t have tits. Of course he’s just a flat-chested boy, but at that moment, Tom truly thinks Bill has the best tits he’s ever seen. “Come here.” - *Grins*

The sex was so hot I couldn’t stop to comment….that says a LOT!

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/09 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

“Cheap?” Bill replies. “Cheap? We’ve stayed in cheap before. This is… condemned.” - *snickers*

Tom laughs. "And I'm horny. Girls, Bill, there would have been girls at that club. Not that you'd care."
Bill actually laughs and slugs Tom in the arm. There's no harm meant by either of them. Bill's never admitted to being gay, but he doesn't sleep with girls. It's a very well known secret in the industry that he has, on multiple occasions, slept with some guys. Bill insists he likes girls, he likes them so much that he doesn’t want to touch one until he’s sure that she’s The One. He has no problem having relations with men until that day comes, though. – nice *nods* very nice way to make this work!

“Yeah, the type of girl I’m sure you’d like,” Bill says, eyes going sly on Tom. “A whole bag of skimpy little underwear, like… I don’t even know if what’s in there qualifies as underwear.”
“Oh fuck, tell me more,” Tom says, leaning up on an elbow.
“You’re scary desperate,” Bill says. - *laughs*

They just knock on my door, Bill. They just show up. A few knocks and that’s it… I‘m as good as laid.” - *knock knock knock*

He does a double take and slams the door in Bill’s face, almost having a heart attack as he leans against the closed door. – *giggles* he got dressed in the hooker clothes didn’t he *giggles at the thought*

“Come on,” Bill says, stepping closer. “I thought you were the playboy of the group? I own every magazine with your face on the cover.” - *giggles* I love fan-girl-Bill!

His hand reaches up, expecting to touch cotton, but only touching firm, bare flesh. Bill’s ass. He’s not wearing anything under the skirt, and he’s so buzzed out from the beer, so horny and on edge, that his hands automatically grab hold of Bill’s ass and squeeze. – woops! *giggles*

“Tom!” Bill jumps back, away from Tom, a scandalized look on his face. “Tom, what the fuck??”
Tom just stares, open mouthed. “Um.”
Bill wrinkles his nose. “Game over, I’m going to take this thing off.” – Yep Tom won the game!

“I don’t think it’s funny,” Tom says darkly. “At all.” His hands slide down Bill’s back, just to the waistband of Bill’s skirt. “And I know you’re horny.” He doesn’t know what’s going on in his mind, but he can’t help himself. He lifts Bill’s skirt up in the back and grabs at his brother’s ass. Bill makes a noise, Tom pretends it’s a positive one. – I think Tom is so drunk he’s loosing the game with him self though! O_O

“Show,” Tom murmurs, his eyes burning a hole through the back of the plaid skirt.
“Excuse me?” Bill looks over his shoulder, a light smirk playing on his lips.
“I wanna see your ass,” Tom says bluntly. *sharp intake of breath and covers smile with a hand* OMG I’m so embarrassed for them right now!

Tom’s hands slide around to Bill’s belly, pushing the tight t-shirt up a few inches. “Show me.”
Bill shakes his head and bats Tom’s hands away. “I don’t have, I mean… there isn’t much to see.”
Tom isn’t going to give up, he loves the way Bill’s cheeks and neck are turning red. “C’mon, show me.” - *grins* this is fun!

Tom feels heat pooling in his belly, he’s playing this game and loving it. He’s aching to go further, to see how much further Bill will go. Bill’s squeezing his thighs around Tom’s waist, he’s rocking pleasantly in Tom’s lap, they both know how hard Tom is. - *grins*

The kiss could deepen so easily, could turn hot and wet, but both boys stiffen at the contact. They’re kissing, and somehow it’s so much more intimate and inappropriate than anything they’ve done so far. – I think they both got a little more sober in that moment.

Tom bites down on Bill’s shoulder and Bill makes a pretty noise again. Tom salivates hungrily – I bet Bill does make pretty noises!

“Just wait,” Bill rasps. “I haven’t even gotten my mouth on it yet.”
Tom’s sure he hasn’t ever heard something that sexy before. – *Grins and bites lips*

“I’ve thought about this for so long,” Bill says softly.
Tom raises his eyebrows, wondering if Bill is still pretending. It doesn’t matter – wow he’s GONE way past rational!

This game they’re playing is one of the most confusing things he’s done in a while. - *smiles evilly*

Tom isn’t planning on it. He’s getting his wish, he’s getting laid. And so is Bill. How can this be wrong?
He shakes those thoughts away and starts fucking Bill, starts getting lost in the feeling and the little sounds Bill’s making. They’re endearing, sweet, and so fucking hot, too. – mmmhhh so right!

Tom grins and without warning, presses two fingers into Bill’s body, working them in and out immediately. Bill’s obviously on edge, he rides Tom’s fingers without hesitation, burying his face in Tom’s neck.
“Fuck, fuck, fuck,” Bill moans, and Tom feels Bill’s body tighten around him. – bounces legs, mmmmhhh! So good!

*giggles* the note, the number, the call – awesome! So funny! *giggles*

I’m glad he doesn’t regret it!

Reviewer: xxcutxxopenxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/08 12:16 am Title: Chapter 3

I love this. :)

Reviewer: rach-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/08 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

Really good story, I liked it.

Reviewer: rach-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/08 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 3

Really good sotry, I liked it.

Reviewer: Stardust27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/08 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 3

Um... idk.
I just don't know... my words are kinda gone and all I can say is Nice. Really nice...

Reviewer: rach-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/08 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

This story is amazing. Reading this during school, just makes me crave it so much more.

Reviewer: Remy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/08 01:11 am Title: Chapter 3

Wow, so hot! :DDD

Reviewer: memororis Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/08 07:26 am Title: Chapter 1

I've read this story too many times and it gets better with every reading :D I adore this :)

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