Date: 09/27/10 10:46 pm Title: Zone It Out
if i was her i'd be so furiously dissappointed in tom. i'd let my bitch side out. and probably forgive him AFTER ive calmed down and thought it over.
i hope you end it with a Bill und Serenna pairing.
ooooohh!! i can't wait for the update!!
great chapter, keep up with th work! xD
Date: 11/29/09 02:57 pm Title: Actions Speak Louder Than Words...
OMG! :D
that was genious
i loved it. (:
Date: 06/19/09 09:02 pm Title: Zone It Out
omg...i love this story!!
but i really don't want anything bad to happen to her...i was already in shock because of what Tom did.
i dont want her to get hurt too.
i hope you end this story with Bill and Serenna ending up together.
its a really good story but PLEASE dont hurt Serenna...it'd just be too sad...especially if she got raped by Tom or somethin.
keep on writing!!
=D
Author's Response: thank you very much! :) Don't worry, Serenna will be in very good hands :D 'cause personally, I think I be too cruel to Tom if I make him do that. :P
Date: 05/14/09 04:02 pm Title: Zone It Out
She'll probably...yeah I don't know, I don't know if I knew something like that either. Frankly; I'd go ape-shit! Lol! sorry for the language, but then I'd calm down and talk about it and then think about being forgiving.
Great chapter by the way!!!!!!
Author's Response: lol, i'd do that too! (omg! and you gave me an idea... lol)anyway, thank you! :D
Date: 05/03/09 03:49 pm Title: Forbidden yet Forgiven
i really love your story, but personally i would like to see bill and serenna together, and tom finding someone else, and if not the twins together, but i would realli dislike to see tom and her together,but that`s just me awsome stori no matter what the final otcome will be....till your next chapter.
Author's Response: thank you very much for your opinion (it will help a lot!)!! oh, and thanks for liking the story too! :D
Date: 04/25/09 10:52 pm Title: Bill-like or Tom-like?
next? this is so good i can't wait for next chapter .... hurry!!!!
Author's Response: aaww, thank you! :) the next chapter will be up on friday :)
Date: 03/28/09 07:21 pm Title: Actions Speak Louder Than Words...
it`s really good story, well hope that bill and serenna are the main couple....because they are so cute together (well I don`t see them but I can imagine)hope you can continue it soon....till then take care.
Author's Response: yay! thanks :) here's a spoiler for you... they are the main couple :>
Date: 02/24/09 03:56 pm Title: What You Don't Know Can't Hurt You, Right?
yay!! great chapter. i wonder what she said. :D
Date: 02/24/09 03:48 pm Title: What You Don't Know Can't Hurt You, Right?
awsome cahpters write more soon
Date: 02/20/09 04:24 pm Title: Prisoner of Your Eyes
YAY!!! Great work. this chapter was awesome. i wonder whats wrong with bill. :D
Author's Response: thanks! :)rnrnwell, you'll see in the succeeding chapters! :)
Date: 02/12/09 10:47 pm Title: Roses and Chrysanthemums
awsome chapters please write more
Date: 01/29/09 07:09 pm Title: Spiderman?
please more this chapter is awsome
Date: 01/29/09 04:41 pm Title: Spiderman?
i like it =]
update soon ?
Author's Response: yay! glad you liked it! :) and yes, imma update soon
Date: 01/20/09 01:25 am Title: Caught You
i loved it awsome chapter please write more
Author's Response: thanks for liking it. :)rni will update soon :)
Date: 01/17/09 04:40 pm Title: Curiousity. Adventure. Chance.
This is awsome please write more:)
I wont to no what happenes:)