Date: 07/15/10 11:04 am Title: Horrible memory.
bloody hell his mum was a bitch how could she act like that ?!!! :O
Date: 07/15/10 10:34 am Title: nameless face.
poor tom poor bill
Date: 06/09/10 10:17 pm Title: Friendships and Confessions are great.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CLIFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *dies from suspense* you HAVE to update soon, this is way to epic to be left unupdated... ^__^ if that made any sense...
Date: 01/18/10 11:54 am Title: nameless face.
I am proud to say that one time I was crossing the street, and a guy in a wheelchair ran into me and I basically did a flip over top of it, landing on my ass in the street. It was a one way street- he was going in the opposite direction....Guess which one of us got the nasty stares from passersby???....me.
just wanted to share lol...great story btw =)
Date: 09/12/09 10:27 am Title: Friendships and Confessions are great.
how about that stupid homophobe find out or something? Just trying to get the writting going ;) Nice work!
Date: 05/05/09 10:14 pm Title: Friendships and Confessions are great.
wow this is amazing. maybe you should have Tom ask Bill on a date or something like that. maybe like a study date at his place.
Author's Response: All in the next chapter :)
Date: 04/04/09 05:33 am Title: nameless face.
Hehe, thanks :) Now I reread this review I'm laughing myself xD Okay, thingys for chapter *digs into brains* I can't find them o,o *searches brains* Found them :D Okay...Well, as they always make everything awkward xD Make it awkward! :D *okay, I'll search my good brains ^^'* Found them too *wow, that's fast, and that with stupid brains xD* *cough* It could be night that Tom or Bill goes to the other. *or morning* Well, then they first talk *really, talk* Then Tom zones out *i love it when he does that xD* And Bill is asking his attention *duh, can't live without it* And then Tom comes back to earth and spontaneously kisses Bill :) Like that?? You can edit all you want, because I don't write the way you do xD Lolz xD I really do want the kiss xD OH! And you can also put in *somewhere* that Georg and Tom become even better friends and that they let each other hear some things on bassguitar/guitar :) And for later on, that Bill ignores Tom completely at school, Tom things he did something wrong and freaks out *he's good at it, I'm sure xD* then Bill randomly shows up at his house and ten it's Tom's turn to bitch. He does not let Bill in and doesn't listen to his apoligizes and pleas. Hehe, I told you I can function better in the morning xD *say mid-day, it's 12:00 xD* :) Hope you can do anything with any of these suggestions :D Oh! And Georg can come up for Tom at school :)
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: hmmm.... Im liking that idea a lot. Cliche. BUT. Hey EVERY story on here is cliche so people can SUCK IT UP! :DrnBut anyways, Ye son. Im digging this rabbit hole. *smirks* (yea im cool... NAT. ROFL) Yeah I think I can make a chapter from all those great ideas. And of course I can't take credit. :) Wow. You are a genius. I'm planing for this story to go up to 18 chaps MAX... so we can have that kiss you want in the next chapter... but not be boyfriends YET. just cuddly? OKAY! I GOT IT!... will YOU got it... but now I'm developing it! AWESOME!! I can't thank you enough chi! You. Are. Amazing. :Drnily<3rnrn-kettle on fire.
Date: 04/03/09 06:34 pm Title: Friendships and Confessions are great.
I'll make up something...tomorrow xD Lolz, mega late review without anything useful, what a great fan I am xD Well, it's 0:33 here *yaaaaaaawn* I'm off to bed, bye, great chapter, hope you continue soon and hope that I can give some ideas tomorrow *yaaaaaawn* *snore*
xx Chi ^^
*mega boring review - off*
Author's Response: ahahahhahahah! omg. ROFL!rnyou make me laugh! I love this girl *points at you*rnthat made my day! <3rnrncan't wait for tomorrow.rnrnKettle on fire, gone.
Date: 02/26/09 08:26 pm Title: Friendships and Confessions are great.
WOOOOOOOOP!!!!!!!!!!!! ummm...ideas....well, u could have gerard way pop in or have them all kill miley cyrus, but i dun think that would fit....sry!!!
d:)LUV!!!!
Author's Response: AHAHAHAHHAAHHAH!!!! LMAO! I'm liking the kill slutty cyrus part :D! awweeesome! :DrnrnTHANKYOU!
Date: 02/26/09 08:18 pm Title: Just what we needed.
O.o should i be skared????
DANG IT!!!!! i thought u was gonna do wat i hinted, but nooo! he has to be imagining it! jeeze...*giggle* LUV IT!!!d:)
Author's Response: ahahaha :D well I did do what you sort of hinted BUT with a twist! MWUAHAHAH! :Drnlmao!rnrnNo don't be scared! its all goooodddd... *creepy voice*rnrnand THANK YOU!
Date: 02/26/09 07:40 pm Title: Awkward!
i think i already read this chappie....d:)
Author's Response: In another story or just read this chapter? anyways hope you liked it.rnand I'm hoping thats an gangsta smily! :D
Date: 02/26/09 05:10 pm Title: Horrible memory.
SORRY!!!!!!! ok so last time i was in a real hurry because one, i had alot of homework and two, my dad was watching over my shoulder and it was creeping me out so i had to finish last time really quickly and, my parents still dont know about my liking towards bill and tom togetherness *winkwink*, so i was really scared that they would read over my stuff and be like "EMMA!!!!" and start screaming at the top of their lungs with faces full of disgust. i really dont want that to happen so i was all like twitchy and stuff. so, like i said, sorry for last time for making every thing so brief and difficult to understand.
so, when i read the last chapter you wrote, i came to some ideas, but as you can see, last time i was rushed and i didnt quite get all of my idea across and i only had like 2 minutes to think it through thoughtfuly and type it out. looking back, i think maybe i should change my idea around slightly. so, like before, say no if you want, cause it's your story, not mine.
scratch the whole bills wet dream idea and maybe stick with toms anonymous admirer (did i spell that right?). but now that i think about it, maybe take the whole 'note in the locker thing' out. i aint likin' it. hmmmmmmmmmmmm...i dont know, i'm at a loss. thats partially because i have alot of homework today. like seriously, theres something in every subject i have to do. the one thats currently eating me alive right now is this 'to kill a mocking bird' project thats due tomorrow. umpf, lifes a bitch.
anyway, *pouts* you didnt give a response to my last review. was it something i said. i'm the type of person who gets hurt easily, and i'm VERY self-concious. well, i WAS in a hurry, so if it was something against you or your story then "sorry" doesnt quite cover anything at the moment. it's not enough.
well, please talk to meh
lots o'love, emma!
Author's Response: AHAHAHAHAHA! no prob! i know how that goes!! Parents kind of suck no worries. Its understandable! :DrnrnYeah i wasn't feeling the Bill thing... kind of too... don't know, not something i would right you see? But as for the other one, I kind of like the secret admirer... BUT I don't know too cliche... PFTT like this story isn't!... but anyways. I have no clue what to do. You did inspire me though. Cause with your ideas you got my brain working! LMAO! so yeah. The next update might be long though SO I APOLOGIZE NOW!!! :DrnrnUGH! I KNOW!! i hate school. And all the stupid homework. I have a BIG science test on freaking chemestry on monday!! AND IM SO SCARED!! but yeah. I have TWO speeches to write.. one in english and a different one is FRENCH! :|rnLife IS a bitch... :(rnrnI'M SOOOO SORRY!!! NO! its nothing like that AT ALL! I just havn't been on. My cousin has been on my acount and she was reading my reviews... and shes like should I reply to the long one (on the phone with me) And I'm like no don't because I will do that myself. Because Thats just who I am. If im having an ACTUAL convo i don't like others replying for me. so she replied to the small and compliments. So IM SOOO SORRY if it made you worried in any way. I just got on today! :D lots of homework. and for some reason.... this site hasn't been working lately... like it gives errors to me.. WEIRD!rnanyways TTYLrnx-tara
Date: 02/24/09 05:07 pm Title: Friendships and Confessions are great.
i honestly cant think of somethin to write for the next chapter either, i usually have ideas but nothin comes to mind on this one...but i hope you figure somethin out...loved this chapter!!
Author's Response: Ugh! don''t you hate that? I'm usually full of ideas but now.. I just drove my self to the biggest cliff hanger. :| LOL. Thank you! and I will try!
Date: 02/22/09 12:32 pm Title: Friendships and Confessions are great.
ohhh i can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 02/21/09 10:51 pm Title: Friendships and Confessions are great.
OOOHHHHH MMMYYYYYYY GGOOOOODD!!!! this chapter is uber amazing!!! ich liebe es!XD
awww, your stuck? that sucks. luckly, the woman who is and yet brings light to your story is here to rescue you!!! (thats me). but, i mean it's only a suggestion so turn it down if it's too much.
i was thinking that maybe next chapter you could have bills pov and have him dream of tom too and then have him at the end go like "oh shit that was amazing" and have him understand that toms wet dream is now understandable. if that doesnt work then next chapter you could still have toms pov, but after school, when he goes to his locker theres a note that was stuffed into it and it's like this nice love letter signed by an anonymous. tom at this time thinks it's bill BUT then you switch pov's to a person (of your choice) in school who actually likes tom. and then the readers go "hmmm i wonder who it is" and it's all this big mystery, but then tom confronts bill saying thank you for the card and bills last word is "what?" RIGHT before you end the chapter! we can talk about next chapter later if you want!!XDXD
sorry i have to leave quick, love you!
emma!
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!!!!!!rnI know. I kind of left it off with no cliff hanger... so now I'm outty ya know? BUT I kind of have an idea... but too much homework so I can't do anything about it until im done all that. Probably by next weekend... or next weekend. NO clue! rnbahahahhahah! I love your ideas, But there not the awkward me... well actually! i am inpired by the second one. :) So this is what i will do (not telling you about the chapter!) I'm going to keep it toms P.O.V because thats what I was planning through out the whole thing... but I will make a vote and probably do one chap from bill...one from gustav and one from georg. not filler chapters.... like its happening... but from their perspective! :D! something like that? BUT i like that idea of the love letter.... maybe andreas who is going to be bill bestie? (like any other story?)rnaahha aokay ill reply to your other one now :Prn<3
Date: 02/21/09 08:04 pm Title: Friendships and Confessions are great.
That was. . . interesting
Author's Response: in a bad way?
Date: 02/19/09 05:11 pm Title: Bill.
ello ello ello. how are you? well, i am amazing, strangly enough. days where i have to get out of bed at 5 in the morning dont often end up with me all cheery and incandescent at the end of the day. but today is different (dont ask cause i dont know why).
hmmmm, what to talk about with tara *looks off into space while stroking non-existant beard* OH! so the day before yesterday, i found out that i might get a computer for my room with internet hookupxDXDXDXDXDXDXXXD HORRAY!, THERE IS A GOD! and you know what that means.....co writing time:) i guess ill just have to put the puppy dog eyes on for my parents so i can get it faster. i dont know about you but i'm crossing my fingers.
AND, the other day, i also saw that you mentioned me in your bio>_< *happy happy happy* and i was all like, hey i did that to!!! i was all like smiley when you said i was the light to your story. teehee, i fewl speshulXD
AND yet again, to what you said before, ahem...ouch. your parents found alcohol in your closet. thats just...ouch. i mean, did they just barge into your room, throw open your closet door and scream "TARA" or what. actually, now that i think about it, MY parents would do that to me if that happened. secrets are literally nonliving in this house. it's impossible to have any privacy.
umpf, i wanna live in germany.......the land of dreams, where anything you want you can get.*coughtokiohotelcough*
well, on the brightside, your no longer grounded, and what have we learned from this...........
never hide alcohol in you closet (did you think i was gonna say no more drinking?)there are better places to hide it you knowXD
before this becomes a novel (yeah right) i guess it's time to say adu!
hearts, emma!!!!!
Author's Response: thats nice to know your not cranky :D I'm just kind of BLEH! right now. I have to do this major project.... buutttt.... I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT TO DO! LOL. yuup. awweesome.rnrn*Waxes you non-existing beard* WOOOOOOOOOTTTT!! HURRAAAYYY!! AWESOME!!!!! That is incredible!! kind of excited now. But now... we kind of need the plot of the story..... :| i only came up with the banner, name and summary LMAO!. (fingers crossed)rnrnI'm glad you saw that! That was my intention.. well i was ganna say go looka t my bio... BUUUTTT....its already done. you are. Usually i need motivators.... you my friend are motivation to the extreme! rnrnI know... kind of sucks! they got sooo maddd. no. lol. I was at school... and my mom didnt have work that day and she was cleaning my room/closet... and she calls me at lunch and is all like " You are soooooo dead" In this creepy scary whisper... and im like.. oh... shit. :|rnahahha. yeah I always wanted to visit germany... well actually... i just wanted to visit the capital of every country. :D its WILL happen one day.... *trails off to distance* one day.... BUT ANYWAYS... yeah.rnYeah i learned my lesson. or never hide it in my room.... I need a secret stash. Like you said... NO privacy for my belongings...rnhmmm.. where to hide.... well i can always hide it in the shoe box where i keep my paint.... yeah.. thats good :DrnrnAdu? explain?rn<3
Date: 02/17/09 05:27 pm Title: nameless face.
BAHAHAHAHAHA. ok, guess what?
...
...
i'm an idiot!!!!
like seriously, i am. just yesterday, i realised that you can write more than one review for chapters which means more talking to ...YOU!
so how are you, you havent been posting. well, who am i to kid, i havent even posted my first chapter yet, but there IS a reason. dont worry, the day will come.
and DONT tell me your sick again because i just may have to hunt you down and cover you with hugs and get well cards. but if your not, then you are quite honestly one of the laziest asses i know out there. and trust me, it's a big ass "out there".
i think i'm gonna tone down know. i'm done my ranting.
FUCK!!! have you heard? well, i'll tell you now. apparently, just apparently, tom has an STD. and please dont scream at me cause it still might be a rumor, but exactly a week ago, to this tuesday,he had to go to the hospital. i saw your bio and you said you liked tom (he's a person not a prize possesion and all that shit) and i thought i might tell you. i take gossip in a serious way, it's bad for my heath. anyway, please talk to me, it's been a while.
lots o' love, emma (yes, thats my name dont ware it out)
Author's Response: AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA! REALLY?!?!? you JUST found out? lmao! thats funny! your cool! WOOT! more convos!rnI'm good, finally OFF grounding! I was grounded because my parents found a little alcohol in my closet. Yeah I' sorry. I'm a loser and I drink SOMETIMES! so now i just got my pc back... and I'm working on updating! I'm half way through the chapter. SPOILER: Georg and Tom will become friends.. and Tom and bill become CLOSER?!!? OH MY GOD (DRAMATIC MUSIC)rnahaahha no not sick :D no need for the hug-attack-monster to be unleashed! lmao. JOKES but yeah. Im already done half the chapter.. and it will be a LONG chapter! :D and yes i am quite one of the laziest asses out there >.>rnrnOH MY GOD!! YEAH I SAW THAT!!!! Thats just so stupid. I mean I don't believe it. Because the only way he can get genital herpes is that he had unprotected sex, and even TOM isn't that stupid to go and have it unprotected. So i don't believe it. I didn't believe the gustav thing either until he said it himself. I don't know im just not fooled by the media :DrnrnSo how are you?rnrnxtara. (aahah i love that)